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Posted: 14 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: crazy_niddzz

di was on vacation...she is typing ...give her sum tym...she will pakka update...

i know she will update
but it's 12:15 here
can't wait longer
and don't want to sleep without reading
so 😉

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Muskan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#472

behkudi
part 24

Geet snaps her hand & slaps on Devs face.
He holds her hair & pulls her head backward slams her head on the wall..throwing her away.
Maan walks in looking for geet. His eyes hated to see dev in her proximity. she read the anger in his eyes. a spark of fear went down her spine looking into those furious eyes. she could read so many things in those split sec in those wild red blood shooting eyes.

Dev immediately shouts at Geet ' bhabhi yeh aap kya kar rahi hain
pretending not to have noticed Maan.
Dev ' aap humari bhabhi hain...
aapki shaadi se phelen humaren beech jo bhi tha, wo abhi teehk nahi hain
bhabhi maa saman hoti hain
he slowly turns to look at Maan & pretends to be shocked ' nahi bro aap jaisen soch rahen hian waisen kuch nahi hain
Maan clutches his fist & looks at Geet who was trembling holding her temple that was red & holding the duppata on the other hand.
Dev ' bro wo bhabhi
Maan raises his hand indicating him to stop
Dev gives a crocked smile to Geet pushing his glasses up.
Maan holds geets arm & drags her out to the cabin. She was terrified.. she didn't know wat was going on in his mind..did he trust wat ever Dev said. She had million of thoughts all only fearing her to death..she didn't know wat to expect. She clearly remembered how he reacted last time seeing her with Dev. Did he think like that even now.. did he trust him more .. just because he is his brother..
Maan ..aap meri baat suniya plz..maan

he short an agonized glare to her & kept walking out dragging her...when they reached the parking lot
she lost her mind to fear..she couldn't take it any more..his anger ..his disbelieve ..his unsaid love..

did he even love her..or is it just ..
she just snapped her hand..he pounced back like a wounded lion..
she roared back in pain.. u don't trust me..
its always been only abt all that for u
thats why u don't trust me..
u never loved me.
Maan looked dangerous as he inched close to her, his dark eyes nearly red & spitting fire. His body practically vibrated with anger & she could feel it all around ..fueling her own animosity.

She held his color & shook him..
u never loved me?
Did u even for a sec?
He didn't even flinch with her shaking him. Instead he stood staring down at her clenching his teeth.
Main hi pagal hoon jo aapke behkudi ko pyar samjh beti
she screamed hitting her head ..

shocking was her own voice to her, it sounded strange..like someone else was screaming , there was so much of anguish & self hatredness that she could barely relate to. It was more of feeling of failure.. feeling her love couldn't win his trust.. his behkudi.. always swept her off her feet but her love..didn't even reach a inch close to his heart..
how could she fail to win his heart..when she loved him more than her ownself
how could she not fill his heart with her love & trust
it was not him.. it was her to be blamed
for she knows she can't live without him.
He held her wrist that was continuously hitting her own head.
Don't u dare touch me
she screamed.. he grabbed her wrist even tighter..still staring down at her angrily.

U don't trust me.. u don't love me..
phir kis haaq se mujhe aapna banathe rahthen ho?
He twisted her hand & held them away from her head. Her heart cried ..for his one word of love.. an ounce of trust.. all she could see was anger.

He pulled out the keys from his pocket & opened the car door on her side. He pushed her inside. She stepped out
I am not going anywhere with u
Geet he roared grapping her hand as she stepped out. He came around & pinned her to the car..forcing her to sit in. she struggled..not giving in..

she was in pain.. her heart was bleeding.. deep in. all unanswered questions.. suddenly seem to speak out loud ..shouting for an answer. She had to know whether their relation meant anything more than physical for him. Did he think she actually had something to do with Dev.
Geet sit in the car now
I am not listening to u & ur stupid claims anymore..she was facing him but couldn't meet his eyes. He used his hand to tilt her chin up in a jerk to meet his gaze.
I am not ur personal property
I am a human being with a heart...heart that longs to hear ur love.
Her head dropped sadly.. after looking briefly into his..
which will always remain as a longing.
I can't take all this any more.
Wat? Wat can't u take anymore?
She just pulled his grip off her arm.. our marriage is baseless without ur any trust.

She cried ..running away from her own self..she didn't know wat else was left. She cried like mad. The world just ended right there for her. He didn't say a word ..he never said.. why would he ..he never cared. She cried with her empty heart whimpering in silent quivering pain. Emptiness due to mistrust lost in her tears, weeping out into the loneliness.

She hugged her mom & cried.. telliing them..she left him forever
rano ' how can u leave ur husbands house like this Geet
she didn't have an answer.
Papaji ' kya baat hain beta. Maan ne kuch kaha kya?
She cried ' he never says anything.
Rano ' log kya kahen ge Geet?
Mama she cried hugging her
rano ' tum aisen pati ka ghar nahi chot ke aa sakti
papaji ' choti choti misunderstanding tho sab pati ' patni ke beech hoti hain na
she just went into her room..only to see her room was now given to raji. She looked angrily at her parents
rano ' beta she needed a separate room
waisen bhi shaadi ke baad pati ghar hi
Geet ' pati pati pati..
kaisen pati.. kaun sa pati.. he doesn't love me.. he doen't care for me.
All he wants is..
she gets really frustrated & locks herself in the kitchen.

-PREV PART 23 NEXT PART 25-
really sorry for the delay
shall update one more part today
thanks a lot for all the love & support
plz plz comment & likes
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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Sameenaas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#473

Di... I hav to wake up at 5 in the morning N its already 12...!!!!
Plz update dedo...

Yippiieee... Yippiiieee...!!!
Me first accidentally !!!
Thanx a lottt for updating Di...!!!
Missed U n ur updates a lottt...!!!
Will comment after reading... 😃

Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago

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pritm

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Posted: 14 years ago

#474

muskan you are back with bang but sad one
geet must get confirmation from maan
why our wounded lion is silent
dev ki to 😡😡
BTW your update wash away all delays
one more update is cherry on the cake😆😆😆

Edited by pritm - 14 years ago

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meenu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#475

dev is such a coward!!
he n his double games!!
i hope maan gives him piece of mind!!
oh poor geet!!
she is also short tempered like maan!!
i love this maan in bekhudi!!
i hope he believes geet!!
waitin for next update

Edited by mymagic13 - 14 years ago