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Waiting di🥱

where r u?😔

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Waiting....
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behkudi
part 23


Geet was getting so irritated hearing the names of those girls now.
Enough she shouted & left from there.

Oops thats exactly when she saw sasha knocking maans cabin door.

When sasha didn't hear him reply. She slowly turned the knob. Maan got irriatated at the sight of the person & walked straight pass her outside .

geet bumped into him almost at the same speed at she was furiously walking towards his cabin. She glared at him as his hand grabbed her arms to help her from fall. He smirked how she always lands up in his arms.

The staff members stood up starring at them
Geet immediately straighten herself..maan shot an agonized to look each one of them. Am I paying u to see me romance with my wife. Geet gulped down her saliva. ..he held her hand & dragged her to her cabin.
The moment they reached inside the closed walls she snapped her hand..
aapne sab ke samne aisen kyun kaha?
He crossed his arms over his chest & stared down at her '
phelen tum batavo how could u send that stupid b***h to my cabin
she looked at him with an open mouth.
His concentration immediately shifted to her lips
she exactly knew wat was running in his mind. Wat pissed her was her own reaction to his closeness & the way his eyes desired her.
Next moment his eyes were predator again inching closer dangerously. She swallowed nervously & stepped backward & sunk on the chair behind. He towered over her..she instantly dipped her head down. He squeezed her cheek pulling to up to meet his disturbed eyes.
Aab kanha gayen tumhara jealousy
she swung her hand & pushed his hands away from her cheek..
she doesn't know from where she had the strength..probably his accusation of her not being jealous hinting she doesn't love
a similar feeling that lingered her mind all the while abt him...now bothered him too.. the thought itself was enough to give her a stength to move a moutain..
her eyes filled up ..how could he even doubt her feelings for him
she screamed at him in pain

isheen liyen I was fighting with pinky for u...
thats why I couldn't stand that b***h knocking ur cabin door & u didn't even stop her from entering ur cabin..aur mujhi pe chila rahen ho
he smiled yet again. His smile was wicked this time.
He leaned down to kiss her lips. So u were jealous that day & today
his lips formed into a crocked smile.
Her eyes glared down at him in anger, rage & pain. Does he ever get serious abt us. Kuch bhi baat ho ghuma phirake he gets back to all this.
His fingers played with her locks..so u were jealous that day


he suddenly grabbed both her arms, pulling her up until geet found herself raised & flattened against his hard chest. When she sucked in a gasp of surprise he leaned down & kissed her againphir usdin kyun kar rahi thi..u r not jealous.
It was the shock of it that had her yielding to him, her lips parting to his simply or was it the intense pull she always felt for him. His tongue sliding into her mouth as if it belonged to him.
Umm he questioned again into the kiss
She was too busy trying to remember how to breath or how to keep her head straight when so many emotions played on her. But soon only one thing she could remember him..his behkudi.

She opened her eyes, her skin was flushed, she smiled softly at him without even her will, his black hair whispering against her skin. He smirked down at her before attacking her sensitive neck, kissing down one side to follow the same path up the other.

Maan continued to tease his way to her lips again, gently nipping them before moving on earning her moan of protest. He continued to nibble on her ear & then lightly blowing on it before trailing back down to her neck. He kissed his way down her fully aroused curves, quickly dipping his head into her valley taking turns to bite the buds one after the other over the dress she wore

itna pyar karthi ho
he asked kissing her neck again pushing the duppata off.
She slipped her hand into his head & whimpered ..
umm
he chuckled & hugged her tightly dipping his head in the crock of her neck.
She closed her eyes.. realizing she just accepted her feelings without even knowing wat he feels..& for him it didn't seem to be special or another of his stupid, arrogant attempt to show how she just melts into his behkudi.

They had to forcefully move away when they heard Dev knocking the door. Geet immediately pulled her duppata on straighten herself.
Dev gave a lopsided smile to her & looked back at Maan who was looking straight into his eyes
Geet immediately excuses herself & goes out
Dev '
bro have u looked into the Jaipur wala project
Maan '
I thought u were handling it
Dev fumbled '
aah ..wo bro actually I am held up here.. could u plz handle it.
Maan looks at the file & then at him -
umm
Dev ' thanks bro
Maan ignores the further conversation & starts working


Dev smiles weakly & steps out. He almost slams the door & then slowly closes it.
He walks straight into geets cabin & closes the door behind.
Geet '
wat is this
she rises from her seat
Dev smirks ' not bad '
main ne kitni sarin ladkiyon ko beja bro distract karne ke liyen.
but u managed it all in a week.
Geet narrows her brows trying to understand wat he meant. They r bothers ...why would he want to do something so cheap
Geet '
why would u do something like that
Dev came around '
itni bhi bholi mat bano..
aakhir tumbhi wohi chati ho jo main ..
his hands softly caressed her arms '
bro ka business empire..the money!!!..ek se bhalen do
Geet snaps her hand & slaps on his face.
He holds her hair & pulls her head backward & slams her head on the wall..throwing her away.
Maan walks in looking for geet. His eyes hated to see dev in her proximity. she read the anger in his eyes. a spark of fear went down her spine looking into those furious eyes. she could read so many things in those split sec in those wild red blood shooting eyes.

This is my depiction of what I think Maan feels...

BY SWATI

Yes, I am a devil...I am rude...a hard nut to crack,

But, does that mean I can't love you?
I do-more than my life, more than anyone, anything in this world...
Is it so hard to read that in my eyes?
Yes, I know I get really angry at times,
But, can't you see the pain behind it?
I know I hurt you sometimes...
But, don't you see the care that fills my heart?
I love you-since the time I first met you!
I love you-always will, will you believe in me?
Yes, my eyes spit fire-but I am helpless,
I can't see you in pain, your tears burn me...
I can read your eyes, I can read your pain,I can read your longing...
But, sometimes, I too need to be reassured...
Don't you know how I felt when you said I mean nothing to you?
How could you even say that there was nothing between us?
I know you didn't mean it...your eyes betrayed you,
But, still, each word stabbed my heart-didn't you see my pain?
Do you realise what I went through when I almost lost you?
I had to come for you-I was anyways going to,
Why did you have to play with your life?
I know you love me-your life is mine, and mine Yours...
It has always been special-since the very first kiss,
I know I lost myself then, I was helpless, I was spellbound,
By your innocence, by your eyes-that only spoke the truth,
But, did I ever force you after that?
You know deep within-I went on coz I could read the love in your eyes,
Coz you responded, coz you loved, coz you taight me to love!
I love you-but I can't say that so easily,
I am afraid-afraid to become weak,
Afraid to give you the power to hurt me,
Afraid that I will lose you,
But, who am I kidding? I already gave my all to you!
My heart, my soul, my happiness, my pain!
It has all drowned in your love-you have the power to shatter me...
I surrendered my heart to you-just fear to say it aloud!
What can I do, this world has made me what I am today-
Ruthless, rude, heartless...thats what I had become,
But, you made my heart beat again-it gallops now!
Each time I see you-but, its not my heart
that is with you-its yours that I am living with!
I will keep you happy-always...
I know you trust me-I will never break your trust,
I will be there for you-forever, but I will never force you,
Even if it kills me to stay away-I will if you aren't ready for it!
I will give you my all-do anything to please you...
But, will you understand my silent pleas?
Will you see the love behind my anger?
Will you be touched by the care behind my rudeness?
My heart knows the answer-Yes...
For you love me, you always have, and you always will!
by
swati

precap
maan wild

-PREV PART 22 NEXT PART 24 -

thanks a lot for waiting.. muskan got held up
loved all the lovely comments & like
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
accidently 🥳Dhinka Chikaa🥳
!st tell me where were You Do you have any idea how much ...
she supposed to be mad at him BUT as usual Lost in his BEKHUDI and she confess her Love tooShe was actually jealous...

Originally posted by: muskanp

maan shot an agonized to look each one of them. Am I paying u to see me romance with my wife. Geet gulped down her saliva


Dev sent girls to distract Maan only because of Money and how dare he touch Geet and threw her like this But the Best part is She slapped Dev tighthe deserve a punch too

Wonder when maan came to her cabinhe saw the slap or not... Anxiously waiting
Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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awesome update dear OMG maan saw what dev was did with geet he is so dead man and precap shows that he has become wild only god knows who would save him
Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago
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so you are back with bang
geet confest her love for maan which he knows exists for him
but when geet will get her love
or she only gets his bekhudi
wild maan exciting precap
waiting for maan's another behkudi
Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing part Muskan.
Loved how u depicted Geet's feelings :)
Cheapo Dev :s. He threw her away :o. thank God Maan just walked in :D
Maan wild hmm interesting precap. Cant wait :)

Beautiful anlysis of Maan by Swati *clap*
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Posted: 13 years ago
missed you
waiting for dreams
Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part.
Geet always has so many things planned to say and question but once she gets close to Maan she is completely lost in his bekhudi.
For once this time she got the strength to push him away and tell him that she cares and feels too .
Loved the way Maan made her confess her feelings.
So Dev's character is finally out and open.
He is behind Maan's money and thought Geet was too.
Geet must have been shocked to know about his evil plans.
Initially she thought Maan was the playboy and Dev was decent.
But appearances are deceptive sometimes i guess.
She slapped him amd Dev pushed her to the wall 😲
Wonder exactly at which moment Maan came in.
He is definitely going to be furious
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsme update di..
Pta nahi ab maan kya karega

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