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Asmita

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi all my sweet frnds

am back wid my very first SS 😆

but but but

smthng is idfferent

in these ss :

ABHAY IS NOT GOING TO BE A VAMPY

HE IS GOIN TO BE A HUMAN 😛

now i think you WILL BE OK with this 😳

scroll down for the first update

hoping to see ur comments and likes 😛😛

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Asmita

@patakha-guddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

character sketch

Abhay Riachand - he is firstly a human 😆 and secondly a big business man who has taken over a big manor 😉 and plans to make a factory there

Piya Dobriyal-A chirpy girl who has just passed her college and is working in a bank 😳😳 .The manor belongs to her family .

Misha Dobriyal-piya's siter of course 😆 and works in a cafe 😛.

Tanushree Ambolkar-( dont get disgusted for involving her in this SS 😆 ) she is Abhay's girlfreind(not lover 😆)

that was the character sketch

scroll for the update

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Asmita

@patakha-guddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

part 1

Piya stood in front of the huge manor.All the memories gushing through her brain and creating an inner turmoil in her mind.The huge manor stood erect and now it was sold.The manor was build by her great-great-great grandfather.It was a pride for her but when it was sold she felt as if her pride was taken away from her.Tears rlled down her cheeks.Now she and her sister has taken shelter in a lodge.While selling the manor her uncle had only kept this lodge in her name so that it would be comfortable for her to stay.As she stood there she did not even notice the black BMW entering the gate and had stopped as well.The blowing of the horn broke her trance and made her jump on her toes.As she turned back she saw a tall man standing .He was wearing a blach suit,almost in earlt thirties.He was scowling at her as if she was an intriuder and was standing in front of the manor without permission.His fair complexion and arrogance made him look handsome.Piya was stunned and could not speak at first

he said in a rough voice,"Who are you?and what are you doing here?".Piya did not find any answer as he was busy looking at hi so she said rather stuidly,"Hi I am piya ...It was my manor...I mean_". But before she could say anything he said with a mocking smile, "I am abhay... abhay Raichand-the new owner of this manor or you might say owner of the would-be factory".Piya was dumbfound and she still did not have words to give a suitable answer to him.

.So he brushed her aside and went inside tha manor.

Piya went to the lodge,misha already left for her work .She sat and the face and felt embarresed about the stuid way she behaved.Had her father been alive he would never have let the manor pass in the hands of another man.She hid her face in with her hands ad sobbed.

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so dearies that was my chotu update as usual 😆

it was bad i know

but still as it is my first update plssshhh comment

and hit the LIKE BUTTON 😳😳

with love

❤️

from asmita

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sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice. .Update soon
do pm me

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

asmi...i liked it...add me to ur pm list...

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purple_shadoz

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Posted: 13 years ago

asmi...grt wrk dear...lukng 4wrd to c wt hpns nxt...plz pm me wn u updt...😛

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Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey its AMAGING ASMI dear... Waiting 4 next part Plz pm me when you update :-)

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

I liked it it was not bad please update. & PM me.

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Munaza sami

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow asmi , nice one.
Add me to ur pm list!

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Deepi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#10

Nice character sketch and the first update was good too! Abhiya's first meeting was interesting! Looking forward to see how this story unfolds! Continue soon and please add me to the PM list! Thanks! 😊

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