SS FAIRYTALE that wasn't MEANT to be..UPDT p4 pg34 - Page 11

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YAAR WHAT AN DREMY UPDATE..
BILKUL HINDI FLIM ISHTYLE MAY ...
THAT WAS WONDERFUL ..DO CONTI SOON..
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waitng fr update...when will u update??
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow what an amazing part yaar
geet koi bhoot tho nahi ... the way she is telling k maine aapka intezaar sadiyon se kiya hai ...
continue soon dear
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Nice part..
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Awesome, fabulous dear.
Continue soon.
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Part 2

Maan said with a smile "You wait here! I'll just be back!"

And he goes to his clients and tell them that due to some important work he has to go. And bid them bye and goes towards Geet.

He didn't know why he cancelled his business lunch for a girl. He was never like this. In his life, his business was always the first priority. Then why is he doing this for a stranger girl???!!!

"Chalein?" he asks geet and they both goes out and he takes her towards the coffee shop.

While walking he asks casually "So how do you know my name Geet?"

"Main aapko iska jawab zaroor dungi Maan, lekin sahi waqt aane par!" [I'll answer u this but at the right time]

Maan looks at her unbelievably and says "What? Sahi waqt aane par? What is this, some mystery?!" he tries to laugh at the way she is talking. And they reached the coffee counter and Maan asks "So what will you have?"

Geet looks at him and said a little unsure "Whatever you'll have!"

Maan thought it is being a little too much now and asks "Don't you have your own choice?" Maan wanted to know her not himself! He already knows his likes!!

Geet says "Maan, mere liye hum dono ek hain. Aapko jo achcha lagta hai, aap le lijiye." [Maan, for me we are one. You take whatever u like]

Maan thought that she needed to be told the consequences of changing herself for someone. He liked her the way she was. He doesn't want her to change.

So he ordered 2 black coffees thinking that now she will regret this and tells him her real choice.

He gives one cup to Geet smiling at her mischievously.

Geet takes it without any complaints.

Maan was surprised but then thought maybe she does liked black coffee.

Both went outside. It was quite dark outside.

Maan thought that he should drop geet home as it was quite late. But he didn't want to leave her so soon. So he asked her expectantly

"Can we walk?" he did not want to drop her in his car as that would mean less time with her.

Geet smiles and they both starts walking.

Maan asks her "You like me a lot right?"

Geet didn't say anything but just smiles at him.

Maan smiles and asks "So tell me Geet, what do you do other than following me?" he said with a little teasing.

"I love flying!!" there was strange kind of happiness in her voice. Maan felt it was the first time that she has answered something so happily. No denying that she has always smiled at him, but there was always some distant in her behaviour. For the first time she looked really happy. Maan thought that she must really have loved to fly. "So you are a pilot?" he asked guessing.

At his words, geet kinda controlled her expressions and just smiled at him.

"So where do you live?" he asked realising that they are just walking randomly.

She points towards front in the distant sky and said with a little sadness in her voice "Over there!"

Maan looks at where she was pointing and frowns a little and then broke into laughter.

Geet looks at him with solemn expression as he said in between his laugh "So you live in the sky?"

Geet didn't answer and Maan says while controlling his laughter "So my angel, where would you like to go now!" he said playfully.

Geet said while looking at him "Where would you like to take me?"

Maan stopped laughing and looked at her unbelievably.

Geet starts walking towards him and narrows the little distance between them.

Before Maan could realise what she was upto, she gently touches his lips into a kiss.

The moment they have stepped out of the restaurant, Maan wanted to kiss those beautiful delicious-looking lips. But this was not what he has planned about. He had wanted him to be incharge of their first kiss. His typical male ego didn't like the girl to take the control of their first kiss.

But he was unable to stop himself. The taste of her lips was making him insane. He wanted her badly. He kissed her back with full passion and desire loosing all his senses.

Geet started unbuttoning his shirt and that clicked something in his mind. He came back to his senses and broke the kiss and pushes her away to clear his mind. He also does wants her but not like this! Not in the middle of the road!!

He looked at her unbelievably and thought 'Does this girl have any shame!!' and he looks at her angrily as he realises that she is not caring about her honour and giving herself to a complete stranger. Yes, he was a stranger for her. She doesn't even know him and neither does he know her that they can cross that line.

He said angrily "What are you trying to do?"

Geet looks at him without any regret on her face and said "Don't you also want this?"

Is that even a question? Of course he wants her. But he cant cross his limits!!

"Geet, we don't even know each other properly. And getting physical with each other before marriage is wrong. Main ladka ho ke ye baat nahin bhoola, to tum ladki ho ke kaise bhool gayi??!!"

Geet looks at him blankly and says "marriage?!"

She was sounding like she was hearing this word for the first time.

"Yes marriage!" he said frustratingly.

"So you are saying, that you wont touch me, unless we are married?" she asks innocently.

"I'm not saying that geet! I'm just saying that we should give some time to each other before we take this relationship a step further."

For the first time, Maan thought that he saw pain in her expressions. But it was momentarily and then it was replaced by her same signature smile. And she says with a smile but Maan could feel pain in her voice too.

"Waqt!! Waqt hi to nahin hai mere paas!!!" [time is something I don't have]

"Matlab?" he asks confused [meaning?]

"Its ok Maan. Main aapko iske liye majboor nahin kar sakti. Aap ka faisla mera faisla hai!" and a drop of tear fell from her eyes.

Maan felt someone has stabbed him in his heart and he realised that he cant see her crying. He could do anything to make her happy.

Geet starts walking and Maan felt like his life is walking away from him. He felt like he'll die from the pain of her sadness.

He calls her from her back and says "Geet!"

Geet stops and looks back at him and he says "Marry me Geet!!"

Part 3

authors note

hey frnds i know all of you would have guessed that what is geet? for those who couldnt guess, let me make it easier for you. she is not a ghost.. i dont think there can be any story between a ghost and a human.
anyways, i know this update is real short, but it has to end over here!! i tried making it longer but just couldnt... there was no way that i could have extended it more than this...

and plz hit the like button and do comment

Edited by jazz07_dh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
so is geet angel/fairy...
within 2 meeting he wants to marry her...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
intriguing...Geet is an Angel? wonder why she came to earth, especially for Maan?

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