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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing...
wow luved the way he asked sorry...
Hmmm Goa trip!!!
looks gr8...
plzz continue soon
anuandavi thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Ritzy, do v get an update today?
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...nice one...Maan should definitely make all efforts to cheer Geet up...he's been quite a jerk for sometime..

BTW, didnt quite understand if the family knows about them...when Maan put up "I am sorry" , would the family know for what exactly?

update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
r we getting an update today
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks friends for pressing like button and commenting. If you like my FF, please do suggest to your friends. I send over 300 PMs but hardly 50 % read it.

Some of you wanted Maan and Geet to tell the truth about their relationship to their families. I think wounds are too fresh right now so it won't happen in immediate updates but relax as the truth will be out very soon.

Mystique_Girl asked me about the "Sorry" and what will family think….Maan has been aloof from everybody including his family. They all just think it is a sorry for all the pain and sadness of last few weeks and not due to the actual event.

Here is the next update….Enjoy

Chapter 63– Goa Trip

Sunday Morning 5:00 AM

Geet felt restless and woke up feeling hot. It was still dark outside. She turned to see Annie sleeping peacefully. She sighed and went to washroom. After freshening up, she thought of making coffee and walked carefully to downstairs making sure no one wakes up.

She frowned not seeing Maan on the couch – "Yeh Maan kahan chale gaye subah subah". She blushed thinking about yesterday. Though they hadn't spent much time alone but his eyes had spoken volumes. There gaze had met multiple times during the day and each time Geet was jolted with pure love reflecting in those dark brown eyes. Geet was tingling with feeling of anticipation

Then she heard sound of brushing in bathroom. She smiled and made two cups of coffee. As she walked out she saw Maan sitting at the footstep of the back door. His back was towards her and he seemed lost in thoughts.

Geet walked quietly and placed coffee in his hands. Maan looked up to see Geet was dressed in a tank top and jean shorts. Her hair was tied in a messy pony and fell on her shoulder. Maan realized how sexy she looks with eyes still having that hint of sleep. He smiled – "Someone is up early"

Geet sat down beside him taking in the white shirt which clearly hinted at the strength hidden beneath it. He wore a khaki shorts baring his strong calf muscles.

"Haan…neend nahin aa rahi thi…aap bhi to jaldi jag gaye na"

They both sat silently for few minutes taking in the enchanting beauty lying in front of them. Vast Sea lay in front of them with sun just coming up on the horizon.

Maan – "It's beautiful isn't it. The Sea, air…this breeze…it is so surreal"

Geet – "Hmmm…by the way Maan…thanks for the surprise yesterday. I just want to tell you that I am not angry with you."

Maan turned to face her. He could not help but drown in those hazel eyes. He cupped her face in his hands and spoke in a heavy voice– "I know Mishti but still I am sorry for everything. I am sorry for the pain I gave you…for the tears…"

Geet placed her finger on his lips – "Chup…bilkul …chup"

Maan shivered at the touch of her finger on his lips. It felt like eons had passed since they had touched each other.

Geet felt Maan shiver and a blush crept up her cheeks. But along with that blush came the unnerving desire to claim him back….to once again make him all hers….to give into him unconditionally. She grabbed his collar bending him down. She lifted up and pecked his lips….again and again. Finally she grabbed them, feeling their softness.

Maan was first startled with her boldness but then understood her desire, her wish, and her pain. He let her love him the way she wanted. When she finally calmed down and claimed his lips for a long kiss, he dared to open his mouth and dart his tongue. He caresses her lips with his warm tongue. Geet moaned and opened her mouth letting him inside. Maan kissed her then with all the passion and love…like never before. He poured his pain, his frustration in it…making it all go. He made new promises and Geet responded with same fervor. They broke apart gasping for air. Maan touched her forehead with his. "I love you Mishti…I love you lots"

Geet simply responded – "I love you too Jaan"

They sat sipping their coffee, fingers entwined, and hearts beating together.

After few minutes, Geet got up pulling Maan along with him. "Chalo na Maan, mujhe paani ke paas jaana hai"

Saying this Geet dragged Maan close to the water. They stood on sand and waves crashed at their feet.

Geet bent down cupping water in her hands. She jerked the water at Maan's face. Maan smiled mischievously "Geet…ab iski sazaa milegi tumko"

He pulled her inside the water drenching her completely. She laughed as he twirled her around in his arms. He lifted her and she placed her legs around his torso. "I love you Mishti…Oh how much" He snaked one hand in her hair as other staid on her back to support her. "Maan…somebody may see"

Maan smiled and went underwater with her in the same position. He kissed her with water flowing around their bodies. Geet marveled at the experience.

They came out to grab some air. Maan slid Geet away and now she stood in his arms. Geet placed her head on his heart. "Maan, mujhe yahaan se nahin jaana….hum kuch din aur nahin ruk sakte"

Maan smiled. He bent down and whispered in his ear – "Nahin Mishti…aaj to humein wapis jaana hai….but I promise we will come again but after our marriage and alone"

Geet blushed as his suggestion. She hit at his chest playfully and started throwing water on him again. They played like this for some more time when Maan saw Annie running to them.

Annie – "Wow…aap log to mujhse bhi pehle aa gaaye…it is so lovely…mujhe bhi khelna hai" Saying this she joined them as well in the fun. Slowly everyone woke up and joined them.

Later everyone had a hearty brunch.

Raj – "Pata bhi nahin chala and it is time to go back….Thanks Maan…I don't remember when I had so much fun"

Rishab – "I know it was really great. Short but really wonderful"

Everyone murmured in agreement. They had some more fun and then everybody packed to return to Delhi. But there was a difference. A huge difference. Two hearts, two souls smiled again and with that calmness and peace had come back to Khurana family…at least for some time.

Precap – The Award

mrk-1 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome yaar...loved it so much !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ahh-mazing;D:D
WOW
loved it;D
continue soon;d
thanks for the pm;D
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dear..
thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

loved d maaneet moments ...

n what do u mean by the last line ...at least for some time.

r u planning more probs ... plzzz ... dont do that ... mera nanha sa dil ye bardasht nahi kar payega ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maneet romance k liye toh i m always ready aur aaj ka update toh full romance hi tha😳😳😳😳😳 after such a long time
loved geet's bold act 😳😳😳 and maan's dialogue k shadi k baad hum yaha aayenge😳😳😳
Precap award... award kisko mil raha hai aur kyun😕😕😕
continue soon Di
love-Piya

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