New MG FF ~JUDAI-kismat ka khel~ update page 6

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~Judai~kismat ka khel

what ever happens in the future it's planned,

its all written in our ~kismat~

so...HI GUYS!! my name is naina 😛


This story carries on with the memory loss track that's been happening at the moment.

This is my dreamy take on it, just a warning, I AM MAD and im going completely off the story line but here you are...i am also a very dramatic person so mad thing maybe happening. ummm this is the first time i am writing. I read loaddsss, no way as good as other but i just had an idea popped in my head :)


ok..so here goes...

Maan Singh Khurana - 25yrs

He is the same moody but damn hot character as he is in the show.He works in his family business ' khurana constructions. He is one of india's most hottest business men, as usual all girls would die for him but unfortunately for them he is married. Unfortunately in an accident he had lost a small segment of his memory which was the past two and a half years of his life. In this time a lot had happened, he had got married to the love of his life who now he gets quite irritated at.



Geet Maan Singh Khurana - 23yr

She is of course the only geet handa from hoshiapur who got married to maan around two and a half years ago. She is bubbly and crazy yet very loving. She has lost a lot in her life and its just got much worse as her husband has lost his memory. she is trying her hardest to get him back but at the moment all is failing.


'judai teri sehte hai, leken rishta mein duri hum nahi seh payenge

jis jagah pe chod diya tune saath mera, teri kasam usi jagar pe hum apni saase chod jaayenge'

(just liked that alot, no geet will not die but it kinda relates to the current situation)



At the moment there situation is like:


But hopefully it may be more like this:

Other characters '

Dadi - 78

Pinky - 25

Adi - 26

Dev - 29

Naintara- 28

Nandini - 22

Mama ji - 55

Lucky - 27


So it starts from where Fridays ends:

Maan: dadi ma, I had such an important meeting and geet didn't even bother to tell me. Isko pata bhi nahi hoga ki ye kitna important meeting thi mere liya.

Dm: bete calm down, im sure aise koi baat nahi hai. Geet wouldn't do such a thing.

Maan; aise baat hai dadima.

Dm: dhekho, geet agayi hai, use puchlo

Maan: hmm.geeet!!! he was annoyed!!

Geet: kya hua, kya mu banake raka hua hai? She came in with a smiling face.

Maan: CHUP, when adi gave you the message that I had a meeting tonight then why didn't you tell me. Do you have any idea how important this deal was for me? 500 corore's...500...ever heard that amount of money before...no probably not because after all you are from a gao. Whats it called..hoshiapur he laughed sarcastically...so common...whats your excuse? Whats it this time?

Geet: aap...

Maan: mein batata hu kyu, you wanted me to stay at home so you could stay with me and so I could break your fast. I swear to god dadima ' aiso koi jhali maine zindagi mein nahi dheki'

Geet: maan aap meri baat to suniye. She look at him hurtfully.

maan stared at her, his eyes were spitting fire giving her deathly looks. It sent a cold shiver done her spine, and she froze, glaring at him with teary eyes.

Mr chopra?: Hello Mr Khurana, I do apologise for interrupting your celebrations like this. Ms geet personally came to meet me and apologised and brought me hear, I hope you don't mind.

Maan:...

Tears were brimming in her eyes. He had just said so much 'gand' about her. He could have atleast listened to what she was going to say or think before he said what he did. She left from there immediately.

Maan did feel a little bad for her but she should have told im...(st: leken maine bhi bolne ka moka nahi diya tha' but I didn't give her a chance to talk either. Forget it Mr chopra is waiting, il deal with it later'

Dadima and everyone else looked at him as if he was a monster. He just sighed and led the clients into his study.

precap:

geets reaction and vrat breaking


ok guys that was very small..but i wasnt sure if you wanted me to carry on?

plz do comment and like and then from there i will see


thank youuu


Naina

❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
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if you would like a pm plz add nainapm
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thank you xx

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lovely,,,,continue sooon dear,,,its tooo guddd
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nice start yaar ..do add me 2 ur pm list
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simply awesome...
do cont soon
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amazing start...
plz add me to your PM list...
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COntinue...continue...plz...thank god ...atleast sumbody wrote from fridays episode...i am so curious 2 know abt todayz episode...😛😛...this will make me calm😃😃😃😃😃...thank u than k u😳😳😳
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Cont soon
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simply awesome...love it❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Awesome strt...❤️

cntnue soon...

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