New MG FF ~JUDAI-kismat ka khel~ update page 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok guys..part 2...hopefully some more comments and likes 😊

Dadima and everyone else looked at him as if he was a monster. He just sighed and led the clients into his study.

Geets room:

Geet: Maan, aap kitne badal gaye ho. She sat down at the corner of her bed, sobbing look deeply at herself through the mirror. Kya mein itne buri hu? Ek baar bhi mera bare mein nahi socha she carries on sobbing look at maans photograph.

Dadi knocks on the door. Geet bete. As she comes in she sees to her surprise geet sitting tightly on the corner of her bed crying. She was already weak due to the fast she kept but she looked even worse. Bete yeh kya haal banake raka hai apne apna. She patter geets back and tried to calm her down...she tried to explain to her that these things happen when one is angry and that you should just ignore it. Dhekho bete, come down quickly, the moon has come out.

Geet: ji dadi ma. She wiped her tears and came down hoping for the best.

Downstairs:

Maan and all the other pati's were standing downstairs. He still had his dusht danv face smacked onto him. Geet was still very hurt at what he had said. Thinking back to the olden days (1 year haha) maan was never like that. He was respectful and never used to call her names like that.

Dadi ma:chalo saab, lets go outside before the moon starts to hide again hmm...

Everyone started to vacate the main hall. Geet stood there with her thali just gazing into his eyes. (geet st: heyy babiji inka mood thik ki jiya)maan still had his young angry maan look but what could he do. What he had said could not be taken back and he knew geet is not a happy bunny.

Balcony / angan

The rituals started and geet started doing maans aarti. She was scared that maan may leave knowing his gussa. Dadi ma was also in tension thinking that maan may not break her fast. Both were praying to baba ji. Geet look through the channi, the moon and then maans face. (slow motion blinking..mahiii) maan turned his head away. He saw one small tear trickle down the corner of her eye, and that's it. (maan st: yeh hamesha kyu roti rati hai' Geets tears started to pour away again. He didn't believe in all this but still stayed there for the sake of dadi ma.

They had finished the pooja and it was time to break the fast, give some water and ladoo. Maan just couldn't take this 'drama' and walked off.

Dadima: maan bete aap kaha jaa rehai?

Maan: dadi ma I have done everything, she done the pooja, looked in the moon and everything. Im sure she can feed herself. 'dood peti bachi nahi hai yeh'

Geet just stood there sobbing, embarrassed, watching everyones husbands breaking there fasts but it was only her husband that couldn't even do that one thing.

Dadima: bete maan ko choriya, aap khalliya

Geet: nahi dadima. She left from there without breaking her fast. Determined that only maan would be the one to break it.


precap:

geet fainting


okk thats it, tried to give an update before geet starts..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey i lovd it ..infact i was searching for ur ff ..
u guessed the thing right ...
inviting foreign delegates to home !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you to:


if you want a pm plz comment saying you want one or add

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thank you and plz keep commenting :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
loved the update
waiting for nxt
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ur guess was ryt
But maan is behaving like a kid
Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start...

continue soon...

do add me to the PM list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3:


Geet: nahi dadima. She left from there without breaking her fast. Determined that only maan would be the one to break it.
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Downstairs:
Dadima: bte kya zururaat thi aise chor kar jana ki.
Maan: dadima aap nahi samjhi ghi...I don't want her to feel that I am her husband, I don't want to get that close to her again...what If I never regain memory? Then what will she do...hmm??
Dadima: I dont know but for now atleast break her fast..she hasn't eaten anything since yesterday afternoon. Bechari ne dinner bhi nahi Kiya tha.
Maan: kya? She hasn't broken her fast yet? I told her to??
Dadima: aap nahi samjhe ge...ek pati sirf vrat torsakta hai. Bte she has been crying ever since you left. It's not right what you did with her.
Maan: kaha hai wo?
Dadima: pata nahi..wo angan se roti roti pata nahi ka Gaye..
Maan: urfff (st: now I have to find her!)
#####SMASSHHH######

Dm: bete ye kya tha? Both of them went running in the main hall...the noise wasn't coming from there it was geets room. Maan ran superfast to her room and everyone followed..
Maan tried to open the door but it was locked...GEET GEET DARWAZA KOLO GEET!!!
dm: bete darwaza koliya na
*no answer*
Beta hame dar lagraha hai, yeh kyu nahi kolrahi darwaza...
Maan: lagta hai darwaza torna para ga..
Maan amazing strength and *bam* the door breaks.

It was pitch dark inside. They could see anything. When he turned the light on to there surprise geet was on the floor lieing there half dead...near her on the floor was maans photo :(
Maan: omg..maan ran to her and started to shake her. GEETTT GEEET UTHO
dm: maan bete dhekho yeh kya hogaya hai...she was already so weak and now look. Dev jaldi se doctor ko bulaye.
Dev: Ji dadima
Nandini: dadima geet ko kuch khelani ki koshish ki jiya...shayad unhe hosh ahjaye..
Dadima give a glass of water to maan go feed geet. Maan put geet on his lap and sat her up and poured some water into her mouth. There was still nothing. He brought her onto the bed and again tried to bring her into consciousness...she woke up a bit
Semi conscious geet: maaannn (weakly)
Maan looked away in a guilty manner. (st. If I would have broken her fast then this would have never have happened)
Lucky: dadima doctor agaye..
She sat down next to Geet and started doing her check up. She told everyone to leave but 1 person. Geet hand was tightly around maans so he couldnt leave. She checked bp, heart etc..everyone was standing outside waiting
Dr: mr khurana you should take more care of your wife especially when she is in this condition...
Geet started to wake up thanks to the lovely glucose injection!!
Maan looked at the doctor questionally?? (st: condition???)
Dr. Dhekiye, from what I can see se hasn't eaten anything for more then 24 hours. She is also very weak...her heart rate shouldn't be that slow...from tests I can see she has iron deficiency and glucose deficiency...I mean this is not good...especially when she is pregnant...
Maan: :0
Geet: :0 :)

Precap:
Maans reaction to geets pregnancy


ok so how was it??
that was a mobile update...
plz comment and like...if i get 20 i will be happy :)
Edited by Ilovemsk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
congratulation for starting a ff
awesome updates
loved them
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
hey great update!!!!!!!!!!
thanx for the pm
cont sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb update dear...loved it...
waiting for the next part...

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