OS: Daddy's Little Girl - Page 10

Originally posted by: shine_bright

Dude, ii am Balling while writing this ..

I can't stop crying ...

How do you do it?

You're freaking amazing ..

&& that whole she was at the cemetery ..i'd put myself in that situation && told myself, that ii want my daddy...

ilovemydad so much...

this was just Beautiful..

&& ii still cannnot stop crying

amazingly written.

great job

<3Janhvi

the parts that really got to me...was when she said goodbye at the hospital and then at the cemetery when she asks her dad to look out for her son...i started crying as i wrote it!! this was a very personal piece because i love my dad so much...glad that you enjoyed it!

JAZ

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Reading this makes u thing again and again about ur relationship with ur parents,how pure and natural can be father-daughter bond!! I read this many times,but knt get enough of these characters u created! It was the first story that actlualy made cry,and not Because he died,just of the imense love between them,how her dad encouraged her until his last breath!!He was mother,father,friend,a shield from the bad things that will harm her...there is no other bigger love then this but also there is no eternity...maybe only in heaven!! U must be blessed by god to write this beautiful...thank you so much jaz,thank you!!

aww...you're so sweet!! im happy that you enjoyed it...its one of the pieces that i hold close to my heart...thank you for your kind words.
JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

the parts that really got to me...was when she said goodbye at the hospital and then at the cemetery when she asks her dad to look out for her son...i started crying as i wrote it!! this was a very personal piece because i love my dad so much...glad that you enjoyed it!

JAZ