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Maaneet_Deewani

@Maaneet_Deewani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

👏i m totally speechless... just loved it to the core...

i was literally crying while reading this os...

thnk u for such a wonderful work of art and real... 😊

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Chelsha

@Chelsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

How i felt after reading your story- its beyond words to describe.
I cried for more than an hour or so. It brought back all the wonderful memories of my father who is no more now.
Thanks for such an amazing story Jaz.

Edited by Chelsha - 14 years ago

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Chelsha

I cried for more than an hour or so. It brought back all the wonderful memories of my father who is no more now.

while im sorry for your loss..im glad that my os made you remember the good memories you had with your father! 😳

JAZ

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Dear ths os was real sad atleast for me really this is one of the gifts by God the more we cherish is even less and the best part we can never even pay back for it.
The story was reall sweet and U simply didn't failed in bringing tears to our eyes especially mne I was so touched.I love my Father so much and Iam glas we are still under his shelter and will always be no matter what and where we are,this is so very true they are always to hold on us for every small needs and deeds.To save us rescue us ,we Love them but can never to the height they does and cant even imagine their Love for us.Undoubtedly their world is just bound to us.
My mom too loves his father means my Grand pa,we too saw him are even showered by his immense Love.It was 2 to 3 years back when he got Alzeimer at the start he dont use to recognize us but his own children,but now he dont recognize any single person around him.My mom just so much cry over it when he say who is she it is indeed painful.He is in such miserable condition that I cant even explain.My mothers and her other sisters are very much attached to him as he always believe these are his treasure than any other wealth.They are far off and those who are bear they dont much give a attention to it.He served his whole Life for his kids and now his kids are like they dont have time.They cant take care of him as it seems much of a burden.Wish if they could understand its WORTH!!!!!!!!
People could be so cruel at times you know,but seriously you touched my heart strings and ut was very painful wont take mush of your time in my sad story but Thank U for making me cry for Him.
Just pray for my GrandPa ,he gets well.
Thanks for the pm
Keep writing
God bless U
Shall God always keep our parents shelter upon us!!!!!!!!!!!

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LD-Radha

@LD-Radha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

- Thats a wonderful image to start off with :) Brings back memories for all of us!

- If I fall, you'll catch me...Awww...Jas's heart just melted.

- Woah! I was not expecting that..I thought it would be Maan's little girl...it never occured to me that the little girl could be Geet

- Well...at least Maaneet are together and nothing happened to either of them...

- You have no idea how adorable your little flashbacks are! Geet as a kid, so cute!

- "I know that you can, I just dont know if I can." Hands down the most adorable thing you've ever written! I LOVE IT!

- GOD I think thats even worse than if something happened to Maaneet...Oh my Babaji, I can totally picture myself as Geet. And it just makes me want to cry but once I start, I'm probably not going to stop.

- And with MOHIT! My god...that was such a cute...but...I dont know how to say it. Sad scene?

- Loved your author's note Jaz and I think I will go tell him...we dont say it enough as it is.

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shanzy

@shanzy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

oh i just read it on fathers day...make me cry😭
after reading it i went to my dad's room n hug him...smtyms we dont realize how much blessed we are to have parents...life without them seems like bed of thorns...
my dad call me his proud n proud of it😊
may Allah keep shelters of are parents to save us from ruthless warmth of world...
very touching story...i loved it...

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

okay...so i read this piece a long long time ago...when u wrote it...but i read on my Itouch so i thought i would comment later but then i forgot...so i forgot...

But this piece is one of the most emotional one i have read of urs...i didn't even realize when i started crying during reading...and even now when i gave it a reread to comment...my eyes watered up...

a wonderful piece by you...touched by heart...