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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 7

Abhi ran behind her...

In Garden

Pia went 2 Garden & started crying

Pia(luking at sky):Y?Y?Wht the hell did I do.tell me Abhay y u left me?Are u & Abhi same?Y I feel Abhi is u Abhay?.Same mesmerizing blue eyes,same touch,same smell & same effect on me as u used 2 have Abhay.After 19 years agn my heart beated

Tears were rolling frm her eyes but same warm hand wiped her tears frm her eyes

Pia:Abhi

Pia (thinking):Did he heard everything?

Abhi:Hey I m sorry if I hurt u.I never knew u r so sensitive.Did my flirty nature hurt u.C I really dont wnt 2 hurt u.Waise wht did I do tht u r so hurt

Pia was relieved tht Abhi didn't heard anything

Pia:Ohh U dont need 2 b sorry.I m crazy u know. A freak like every gal is!.So no need 2 b sorry

Abhi:Were u missing ur Life

Pia:Matlab

Abhi: Ur Abhay

Pia(herself):How did he know tht.How can he know me so well jst after our 1st meeting

Pia:No not exactly

Abhi:Oh no need 2 lie

Pia:I m not lying

Abhi:Ok as u say waise bhi no one can win frm gal whn it comes 2 word war as u said gals r freak😉

Pia:Hmm I guess u know gals quite well.GFs experience huh

Abhi:haha.Well as u lke.So will u be my frnd?I know Tashi had already said many gud things abt me 2 you but dis is genuine as I hardly know any1 here & tolerating Tashi & ur BFF misha is more lke punishment so wht say will u b my frnd? evn I'll get company

Abhi moved his hand frwd 4 hand shake Pia shaked hands wid Abhay a sudden current ran in their spine

Pia:Ok frnds.

Abhi:Thts gud.Lets go inside.Its cold here

Pia:Okk

Both left 4 party

In hall(Khanna mansion)

Tashi:Where were u Pia?

Abhi:In garden

Tashi:Are u Pia?

Abhi:No I m her frnd

Tashi:Since whn

Abhi:Since noe.If u dont believe me ask Pia

Tashi:Really Pia.Tum bhi aa gayi iski baat mai.I m telling u nxt thing he'll do is flirting.I know him to well

Pia:Ya v r frnds as 4 flirting dont worry I m tough cookie 2 crack

Abhi(wid mischievous smile):Really?

Pia(wid cute smile):R-E-A-L-L-Y.Waise where is Misha?Tashi

Tashi:I dont kno.She was...

B4 Tashi could complete her sentence they hear a loud sound.As if there is hurricance

Tashi:I know who is behind dis tahlka

Pia:Misha

Abhi:Karan

Both Pia & Abhi luk at each other & run 2 lawn

In lawn

Misha was pulling Karan's hair.She was at top of him making him breathless karan was screaming

Karan:Chod mujhko.U chudail.Pagal ho gayi hai?Are u out of ur mind?

Misha:I m out of my mind.U r out of ur mind or better u dont have mind

Abhi & Pia tried 2 stop thm.They pulled thm & finally was succeeded 2 separate thm

Abhi:Wht the hell u 2 were doing?

Karan:I was doing.Ohh Abhi she was scratching my face,pulling my hair.Wild cat 😡

Pia:Wht?Are u out of ur mind?Why were u killing him wid ur punches?

Karan:Yes she is out of her mind

Misha:U moron.Keep ur mouth shirt.Pia I was not doing anything sachie.This bloody idiot pushed me & i fell & instead of saying sorry or helping me he was laughing

Karan:But I not did tht intentionally,Pickle pushed me

Abhay(scared):Wht pickle?U brought her here😡

Karan:I not brought her she herself come wid me
Abhi:Herself😡.Are u my frnd or enemy?
Pia & Misha(confused):Wht kind of name is this?Pickle

Tashi(laughing):Yes Misha & pia.She is pickle.She is so spicy tht her mom-dad kept her name pickle or better she kept her name pickle.

Pickle:Oh shut up tashi

Pickle puts her arms around Abhi neck

Pickle:baby where were u?Y did u left me without telling honey?

Pia was feeling jealous.She dont know y but she cant stand thm

Abhi(in misha's ear):Misha u wnt 2 kill Karan na plz do the honour.Zinda mat chodna iss saale ko

Karan:Abhi I m ur frnd

Abhi:Frnd?My foot.If u would have been my frnd tum isse yaha nahi laate.Oh dis gal will eat me now

Tashi(was unable 2 control her laugh):hhah Bro H-A-P-P-Y B'-D-A-Y.Wow karan bro kya gift laye ho bro k liye

Abhi:Shut up tashi

Abhi removed Pickles hand frm his neck.He luked at Pia wid guilty eyes as if he stabbed her & thn he said

Abhi:OhI guess some one is calling me.I need 2 go

Pickle run after him

Abhi:Y u running after me?Leave me.Mom-dad save me frm dis graveyard

Party was over

Khanna's c off every one

Vikram khanna( Raichands & Dobriyals):Plz do visit us nxt time

Raichands & Dobriyals:Ya sure

Tashi:Pia it was nice 2 meet u.U r as sweet as ur frnd described u.Misha so will meet u in college.

Misha:Ya sure.Will c u in college

Abhi(eagerly):And wht abt u Pia?Are u joining college?

Pia(was still angry):Ya I m.

Abhi:Ohh thts grt

Pia(sarcastically):Y u r so happy I guess now ur frnds r here so u wont need me I mean us(Me & misha)

Abhi(hurt):Y r u saying dis yaar.

Pia:Oh sorry.Ok biee.C u at college.

They left

Khanna Mansion

Vikram & Radhika's room

Radhika was sitting worriedly near dressing table

Vikram:Wht happened Radhika.Is everything alright.Y u luk so worried

Radhika:Nothing is alright Vikram.U know Abhi went 2 jungle.He hurt himself.The day he came he is behaving so weird.

Vikram:Oh come on I guess dis place is new 2 him thts y he is behaving strange

Radhika:This is wht I m saying Vikram dis place is new but still he feel tht he know dis place well.I m worried wht if prediction come true?He is 18 now

Vikram:Stop it.U r so educated still u believe in these stuffs

Radhika was still not convienced

Flashback(18 years ago)

Radhika was pregnant.It was her 8th month.But baby was in in a hurry 2 come.She had labour pain.It was dark night more dark thn usual.It was raining cats & dog.Doctors were called in home itself

Mrs khanna's situation was critical she seemed she wont survive 4 thm.Doctors were also very worried 2 c Mrs.Khanna but destiny had planned something else
Mrs khanna shouted wid agony & pain beyond any human control as baby was tearing her stomach apart.It seemed he was in no mood 2 stay inside her tummy.He was impatient 2 come out as someone was calling him impatiently.Suddeny nature calm down,Mrs Khanna felt relaxed. Nature seemed happy after long time. as if it was waiting 4 his birth,someone else was waiting 4 his birth.Stormy night turned into a blessing night.
Mrs khanna forgot all her pain as soon as she saw her baby's face.He was angelatic wid blue hypnotic eyes,red lips & mysterious smile ya a new born baby instead of crying was smiling beyond nature isn't it?.Doctors were surprised rather shocked 2 c dis.How can dis b possibe.They rubbed their eyes & agn saw baby.Now he was smiling more hard flashing his dimples staring at doctors as if he wnts 2 say thm'Oh dont b shocked I m miracle'.Doctors shouted miracle dis is miracle.Babt smiled more now'I told u I miracle'.
On the day of baby's naam karan
Mr & Mrs khanna called their ancenstral guruji 2 keep their baby name & 2 tell abt his future.
Guruji luked at baby's face continuously baby was still smiling
Guruji:This boy is intellegent,brave & different.He is not wht he luks.There is more abt him.He is here 4 some motive.He wont live wid u guys 4 long as soon as he'll turn 18 he'll meet his destiny.This boy is beyond nature.He is surrounded by supernatural world.I m shocked 2 c him.For the 1st time evn I dont know whts so mysterious abt him but there is something in his eyes.Nature called him.Someone is surely waiting 4 him.Remember my words 'He dont belong here he is belong 2 someone else.I'll keep his name 'Abhi' which means 'Fearless,vast,new,excessive,and 'evolved'. And dis name will suit him
Flashback over
scene shift
Abhi
Abhi wid fangs & blue eyes was attacking someone wait a wolf.He was scratching wolves faces wid his claws.His anger was beyond any imagination.There was agony in his eyes.Wolf was attacking him back but before wolf could tear him apart a girl stabbed a wodden stack on wolf's back.But suddeny another gal was trying 2 stack the gal who saved Abhi.
Abhi shouted Pia...
In Raichands home
There Pia suddenly woke wid jerk
Pia:Abhay...
She took a deep breath Y i felt lke Abhay is calling me.Ohh I m feeling so restless..
Back 2 Khanna house
Abhi woke up wid a jerk.He always used 2 c dis dream but 4 the 1st time he saw tht gal whom he wnted 2 save.yes,she was Pia.A gal whom he met 2day.But y he wnted 2 save her?Wht's the connection b/w him & tht gal?..
NOTE:Hey guys Abhay died 19 years ago while Abhi was born one year later Abhay died & on same date.So I hope kisi ko confusion na ho
Sorry 4 late update as I had my exams but c I gave u all long update.And 'HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY'
Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

shrisho, firstly a big bear hug n thanx to u 🤗 n sorry for late reply

last update was totally awesome..👏👏👏👏👏
awww i loved dat part where abhi asked pia to b his frnd n gave her d reasons of tashi n misha being around him😆😆😆😆😆😆...n then pickle part omg😆😆 "pickle" tera khurafati dimag hi aise ideas nikal sakta hai😉😆..
so pia got jealous nt bad, abhi was hurt, ummm so flirtatious abhi felt bad when pickel was getting close to him infront of pia...looking forward to this part specially, ab pia kua karegi abhi ka clg me😆😉😉...
k, so abhi is abhay's rebirth...interesting shrish...abhi saw pia in his dream,how wl he react to this thing..??
jaldiii se update kariyo pls
luv u
Edited by heena_mehta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful shrish...👏👏👏

i always love those stories with mystrey and dreams if it was in my hand i would really put this on t.v
sooo nice

and yay u finally pm'd me


Edited by sweet_gumdrops - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

superb update... abhi n pia became friends dats cool...😊😊 n pia already feel jelous 4 abhi...😛 n abot dat horiscope abhi is born 2 be with pia.. woh... i loved it... cont soon...

Edited by Akshi0019 - 13 years ago
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Finally a long update...thanks for that 🤗
Coming to the update... so finally understood the mystery of prediction. As abhi is rebirth of Abhay so it was predicted that he will meet his destiny after 18. He's near his destiny...Piya 😳 now waiting to see how the story unfolds and their love story kicks..
but Shrish...Pickle 🤣 Teri story me teri touch na ho aisa to ho nehi sakta... and the pickle name totally proved that's your FF 😆
luv u...and exm khatam ho gaye na? 🤗
Edited by princess_xeelan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nikammo abhi I not evn posted my FF & tum sabne res kar liya.Yeh mera FF pg hai tum logo ka bedroom nahi ahhaha😉😆🤣
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Wowww...Now my tubelight dimaag got it..Abhi is Abhay's rebirth,n he belongs to Piya only. But in dat dream,y was he wid fangs n blue eyes? Or was he dreaming da incident how Abhay died? Guess we'll hav to wait 4 some more weeks,till u update..😆
Edited by ANTARA-2244 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome brill wow update...abi is some thing for pia...there dance was great...n the song r really good 😊👍🏼
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ausum..shrish...i loved it...pia being jealous...that horoscope...abhi is born to be with pia...aww...it is fab...plz update soon...i will be waiting...
Edited by peehu24 - 13 years ago
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finally...😆hey its awsome...ya it was ok length considering ur exam😆...😊bt tumne curiosity aur bada dia...so m still not satisfied...😆vaise abhi is really sumthing...goodluk to pia...pickle reminds me of T...😆
so abhi is rebirth of abhay...he dreams abt his death as abhay!!!...oh so this is gonna be fun...wanna see how he deals with this seeing pia in a dream like this nd how he comes to know the reallity...nd how pia takes him...phew!!!...🤔😆😆
so many questions yaar...iss baar weeks wait mat karwana...even more impatient now...update real soon...😊
Edited by urmita - 13 years ago

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