My Mistake(AR) prt 2 inst 2- pg 11 (2/9)note pg 14

Rumz_12 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#1
Hai guyz. I Am Rumaan luvingly called as rumzi. so u see this area is filled with only mannet FF'S I thought to create my own on AR ofcorse. and i already have 2 running FF's which i hav not updated since recently. but stll i wanted to share my ff with u

Intro:

He sat in a room, a room in which light only came from the candles which were placed on expensive candle stands. He gazed at the walls which had a row of photos of her. Photos of her smiling, her eyez narrowed, angry photos, her blushing and what not. The candle light illuminated her face. It made her look more etheral in the photos itself. He got up from his chair, and went near them and caressed the photos as if they were his life. A tear drop fell from his eyes. "Come Back" he whispered as his voice was cracking down due to his tears. He walked through the rows of photos and reached one, the one were he was holding her close and she was blushing, their eyes closed, the redness of her cheek could easily be visible on her photos. A teary smile formed on his lips seeing it. He leaned his forehead on the photo and closed his eyez letting a single tear drop from his eyez. but he wiped it out quickly because he had promised her that he will be happy and it was her last wish from him and moreover he wanted to feel the pain, the pain which he had caused her. He closed his eyez and a flash of a girl shouting came in front of his eyez, "Armaan" she was shouting. She ws shouting his name, before the most terrifying image would come back he opened his eyez and shuddered. "COME BACK" he yelled. "I am sorry, COME BACK. Mujhe tumhare bina jeena nahi ata RIDDHIMA. PLZ COME BACK." He yelled. Then he silently whispered "come back to me BASKET. I love U. UR ARMAAN LOVES YOU"

Ok guyz someone are confused if it is a sad one so just to clear its not a sad one. ok it is. but trust me i will bring lot of cute AR scenes together. coz i am just bored of writing sad parts🤔

Index: Click On The Part. Its A Link. U will be zoomed of to it

So how is it. hope u like it.
My Currently running ff'f (AR)
Edited by frumaan - 13 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

82

Views

15.9k

Users

46

Likes

220

Frequent Posters

akshad thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#2
nice one...
thanks for the pm...
continue soon..
-wild- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#3
congooo.>>>>>>>>>>>>>XXX3333333
Glad u start ur fic dear its awsome...
Woww concept is amazing dear
all the best for the rest
i read your part and its amazing..
Cant waite sweety
and try to update soon ok
wowww u take Ar too...god damn i just love it dear
now update asap
love u
salina😳
Happy friendship day ria
Lekshmic7 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#4
SUPERB!.continue soon. pls dont make it a sad one.
Lekshmic7 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#5
BEST WISHES 4 d new FF! SORRY 4 d double post.
Edited by Lekshmic7 - 14 years ago
Riddss thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
#6
nice start
continue soon
but first update Ur other FF
then do update this
...vibha... thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#7
congo on new ff
the storyline is interesting
continue soon and pm me too
KaJen_addiction thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#8
hey Rumaan
gr8 concept!
cont soon n thnx 4 pm
cuteshilpa thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#9
hey like the starting cont soon
plx do pm me too
araja1234 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
#10
looks interesting. Update soon and thanks for the pm

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

8 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2) In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".