Jaate Jaate, Jaa Na Sakkeh- OS (1)

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this is a new series of OS's that I have written on my take of what will happen when khushi will enter the Raizada house to teach La how to become a saanskaari indian larki. If you read my previous OS 'Saving from Gundas' you will know that arnav has just saved khushi from gundas, and khushi has decided to send payel and buaji back to lucknow but she will go a month later after finding some financial support like a job which will help her perants.

The story from there
Arnav sees that khushi is completely drenched, therefore he paases her his coat, however as he is paasing khushi notices the cut on his palm and has a flashback of all the times he has saved her, and feels guilty that because of her he is now cut, she quickly rips a part of her dupatta and wraps it around arnavs palm, arnav is facing the other way, unable to take his hand away from hers, he feels a soft, tender moist tear drop on his arm, he quickly looks into khushies eyes which are now filled wih water, khushie quickly realizes that she is crying and wipe her tears "leejiye ab aur khoon nahi behe gah...aur..." arnav quickly looks at her with a slightest feeling of hope and axiouty "aur?" khushi looking at her feet replies "aur.. shukariyaa" arnav is in shock, that for the first time, khushi has said something nice to him, and thanked him. He quickly goes back to his stern face and starts driving the car
khushi "rukiyee, mere payel di ke saath mere buaji bhi wapas lucknow chaaligayyee hain, hum ek maheene baad jaeyye geh, yahan paas hee ek hotel hai, aap humeh wahan peh choor deh"
arnav doesnt like the feeli8ng of this, but he doesnt want to show her that he is worried about her, or he has ever worried about her, therefore he restarts the car and starts driving towards the hotel
When they reach the enterence of the hotel khushi think to herself "tu fiker maat kaar khushi, ek hi raat ki tau baat hai, kaal subah hi tu job dhoond keh, nandini chaachi keh ghar chali jaana, abhi iss wakat to jaa nahi sakti, bus se doh gahnte ki drive hai, to kaal subah dekh na" as khushi is planning the day ahead, Arnav has been observing the staircase lwading upto to hotel doorway, there are a group of drunken wasted men sitting there, and when they see khushi, they start to whistle, arnav quickly locks the doors of the car.
khushi "yeh aap kya kar rehen hai?"
arnav "tumhara yahan pe ruknah safe nahi hai, tumhara kya iss sheher meh aur koi nahi?"
khushi "mere chaachi, yahan paas me hi bus ka adaa hai, aap mujeh wahan pe choor dhen."
arnav "Nahee"
khushie "jee?"
arnav "mere ghar ki basement meh ek guest room hai, tum wahan aaj raat rehloo tu--"
khushi "jee nahi Mr.Raizada, apki aur mehrbaani ki zaroorat nahi, meh kuch na kuch intazaam kar loongee, mujeh apke ghar rehne meh koi diljasbi nahi"
arnav "aur mujeh bhi tumhe raak keh koi diljasbhi nahi, liken tumhaare aur mere paas aur koi option nahi hai, buses is waqt chaal nahi raheen, hotel meh pataa nahii kaise kasie loog hai, tau yaa tau tum mere saath chaloo, yaa yahan sarakh ke beech meh beegh tee raho, aur wasebhi, mere di ko pata naho tumse kyun itne diljasbi hai, aur meh apni di ki bohot izat karta hoon, aur jaab unhe pataa challegaa keh meneh tumhe yahan choor diyaa, tau woh mujse khabhi baat nahi karangee"
khushi thought that how can this laad governer who is such a raakshas bhi soo kind to his sister.
khushi"dekeeyeh, meh theek hoon , aur apko kisee keh liyee muj---"!
arnav (looking directly infront of him) "meh kisi ke liye kuch bhi nahee kartaaa, me jo chataa hoon woh kartaa hoon"
khushie thinks that she has no other choice, its late at night and she sits at the back seat of the car, with a stone on her heart and with an unwilling face she says "meh apke iss ghar seh subah 8 baaj neh se pehele hee chali jaoongee, aur apko apkee raat ka karaye ke paise de keh jahoo gee"
Arnav "meh apni se kaam aukaat waloon seh paise nahi mangtaa, aur tum t---"
khushi "aur humari aukat tu apse bohot kaam hai! meh jaan tee hoon, agar apko humse itni hee nafrat hai tau phir aap mujeh yahaan choor kyun nahi dete?"
arnav "mene kaha naa, mere dee ke liye"
khushi"aap yeh maat samjeh keh isse kuch bhi badal gaya hai"
arnav and khushi have reached home, Arnav shuts his car door and starts walking towards the house door, not noticing the struggle with all the luggage khushi has got with her, as she is about to walk she trips and screams "ahh" arnav quickly looks back and quickly catches her, forgetting his ego he worryingly asks her "tum theek ho khushi?" they have a long eye-lock with rabba ve in the background , arnav bring her to her feet and she tries to walk again, "aah mera pear!" arnav lookes at khushi's foot and realizes "tumhe pear meh mauch aa gayee hai" khushi tries to walk again but once again falls into arnavs arms, after realizing that she will not be able to walk much longer, he pick her up and takes her to the door, the servent opens the door and everyone is in shock,
(shayem is not at home, he has lied to anjali saying he has gone one a buisness trip and will be back within a week, however he has acctually gone back to lucknow to look for khushi)
Anjali come running towards khushi as arnav puts her down, "khushi tum theek ho naa? arnav?"
waiting for an explination form arnav, arnav starts telling his sis everything, when he is done khushi asks anjali "dekhyee anjali jee, agar apko koi bi problem hai to paas me hee e--"
anjali "khushi meh bhi tumhaari dee ki tara hee hoon, tum yahan aaj raat reh sakti ho"
arnav is now looking at his dee in anger as to why she is giving khushi so much love
khushi quickly walks towards nani for her ashirwaad, naani observes khushi''s clothing and her sanskaar, and has a vived thought, she caals anjali and manorama(whi isnt purticularly happy seeing khushi here)
Drama closes
TO BE CONTINUED IN jaate jaate, ja na saakeh (2)
Thankyou for reading, in my saving from gundas OS buaji doesnt go back to lucknow, but i had to change some things to make this series of OS's work, please comment and constructive critisim is appreciated , like or comment PM for me to PM you the next OS in this series. I had to write this twice because the first time it got deleted before i could post it, so it has taken me about 3-4hours writing this lol, im also a slow typer. hope it was worth-while thought, thankyou so so much for reading! 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi again!!!!
That was a great read darling. I enjoyed it, especially when Khushi fell into Arnav's arms...twice!!!
I hope Khushi is going to stay a bit longer at Arnav's place...it'll be really interesting to read.
Looking forward to the next part...please PM when you update sugar!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow i enjoyed reading this OS!...Also enjoyed reading your other one!...Please add me to your pm list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey this was Amazing !! I really hope cvs think about such a track. Please continue soon and yeah PM me when you do 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thankyou soo much, everyone, i will add you to the Pm lists, and i will try to poat Jaate jaate, ja na saakeh (2) very soon! thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow wat a gr8 os. plz add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really lovely update❤️.
plz continue soon.loved the convo b/w them.plz do add me to your pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice OS...please continue...
I can just see Nani churning up something good!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I love reading your OS
but can you please have some english translation, i had trouble reading of it
Please PM me when you update
please continue and update soon
Edited by anita_21492 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderful ...

love to read more

pls pm


- - badra

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