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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
now we have a title. awesome kavya . will be waiting for the update.
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Lovely title of the story. Cant wait for the revenge part - please write something really exciting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beyond The Burning Hearts 💔

'He was everything she wanted but he chose not to be , She was everything he could have cherished but again he chose not to'

Arjun Singhania

A tough looking successful young man. His philosophy in life 'tit for tat ' eye for an eye' . No one could dictate him nor disobey him. Only a few close to him had the previlege of calling him Arjun, rest had to do with Mr. Singhania. . Nobody knew his likes and dislikes. One thing everyone knew was girls were off limits in his personal life. That did not mean he did not have an eye for beauty. But it never could rise above his sole mission in life. He was close to fulfilling that mission. Girls would be a waste of time, they just did not interest him, what interested him was money and time was something precious he needed to acquire that wealth. He needs his business as a bait to loot the peace and happiness of one particular family, the same family that snatched away his happiness from him and made him a loner. Mercy and forgiveness were not in his dictionary, even his only living relative, his daadi, could not stop him from becoming an insensitive hard to break guy he is. Right now he is in Bombay to plan his revenge, meeting with his only good friend jay was also part of the discussions, since he knew an inside guy from Ahluwalia Industries. They needed some inside information to use it against them. Only later that evening he came to know apart from business deeds there is another way of shattering the Ahluwalias.

Arohi Ahluwalia

Any man's dream girl. A pretty, smart and happy girl. She was the family's ronak as her daddu puts it. She had her own philosophy in life. Live life happily, forgive and forget, and the important of all was love heals all wounds. She had finished her college, waiting for some prince charming to take her to his world. Her wish was very simple, A sensitive loving guy to pamper her and she would in turn make a happiest family for him. There was not dreath for money in her family and Ahluwalia's were well known , they would find a suitable match for her and then she will lead the life she believes in, a happy one. Her parents and brother Sanchit Ahluwalia and sister Gauri. Sanchit's wife simi were people who surrounded her life. But she was nothing like any of them. She was more like her daddu, the only person that inspired her and her friend shefu was equally dear to her, they both wanted her simple dreams in life to be fulfilled and they would have been, if Arjun had not come into her life.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWSOME INTRO👏👏 - i feel like an intense story coming up..treat it right and it'll FANTASTIC...
can't wait for it Kavys..i know u'll do wonders 🤗
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Charactr sketch bring a pic of arjun n arohi of kmh2. I felt lyk wao! The intense eye of arjun n happy smile of aru. Deadly combo. Superb. Di as u said it wl filmy bt make it as interstng as our kmh. I knw vry well dat u cn make it vry interestng. M startng 2 luv ur arjuhi's characters:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😉😉Wow what an intro. Cant Wait to read about their first meeting and how he will woo her for the sake of his revenge.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
can see an intense saga of love, pain and hatred ...I am sure it will be fab as always..

Just can't wait to see the Bad Boy...I love revenge love stories...and with your talent you are going to make it blazing hot and freaking awsome...


God Bless and best wishes...
Edited by Anupa28 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39

good intro kavya . i am 🤣ling at gauri being arohi's sister.but best character from family u have added is dadi.

both character's intro r perfect for story & describe them perfectly now looking forward for the start & how they meet.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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muaaah , thank you guys for liking it, will try to do my best defo. madhu yeah little bit like kmh2 chracters hai na, usika inspiration hai 😳. imti , ha haaa, gauri divorcee bhi hoti hai 😆 woh isme add nahi kiya hai maine. One person is needed between arjun and arohi isiliye daadi ko cushion rakha hai.
amna, varshini, anupa, punam , thank you so much for the encouragement. 😳
Title will be 'Beyond the Burning hearts ' instead of 'behind the burning hearts' it looks better. 😛
Edited by kavyasam - 14 years ago

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