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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it akriti!! loved their date... see wat i told was right maan ko uss ko poochna nai chahiye tha straight away pappi kerni chahiye thi ... hahahahahahahahah... loved it... awesome update... loved their romantic date!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT!!!! TOO GOOD... UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOON...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Hey Beautiful Peoples thanx a lot for so much Overwhelming Support nd love so far. nd all ur Comments on d previous part well i dnt have words to thank u all for dat. i feel so appreciated after reading dem.

Acha nw m going to tell u all a very important thing. Guys i have to go Out of station for 2-3 days nd most probably will return by Sunday evening or Monday morning due to Audit work nd m leving in half an hour so will update d next part be by Monday or Tuesday. i knw i m making u guys wait a lot but sorry every1 its an urgency. pls bear wid me nd till den Keep commenting. thanx nd Sorry once again

Luv Aakriti😊

go and do your work we all r always here... waiting for u and your updates
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Hey Gud Morning my Lovely Readers. Missed u all a lot nd m sure u all have also missed me. wel gud news for u all. M going to update d next Part in few mins. so get ready wid ur Comments or criticism anything will be accepted by me. Just few more mins.
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Hi guys! M back wid another update to torcher u all 😆😆. but i cant help it nw u guys urself has given invitation to dis Torcher 😆😆😆😆😆. so nw get ready to bear it😆😆😉. Anyways jokes Apart but seriously Thankx all of u from d Core of my heart. u guys r really loving nd supporting everytym. ur comments always motivates me nd inspires me to write more. So thanx to all of u. Nw here's d Part 38 of my FF. hope u all will like it. Pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it.

Part 38:

She turned to leave but got frightened by seeing d figure standing in front of her nd instantly she screamed aloud nd wen a strong hand covered her mouth to stop her from screaming nd dis is wen she saw d Figure standing in front of her was none other den MAAN!!!

Maan looked into her eyes which was first scared nd nw calm. Everytym he looks at dem he found himself drowning in it. He forgets all his surroundings wenever he was wid her. Nd after today's incidence, he found himself more close to her. Geet too lost in his eyes but she's getting difficult to breathe dis is wen Maan realizes that he has his hand on her mouth. He instantly removes it nd looks at Geet who was looking at him questioningly

Geet: Maan! Tum? Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? Aur Wo bhi is tarah Choro ki tarah aane ki kya zarurat thi? Pata hai main kitna Dar gayi thi. Aur ye aaj tum Door ke bajay Balcony se kyun aaye? Agar Shilpa ne tumhe yaha dekh liya to? Already wo……..

Rest of d word left unsaid as Maan Puts his Finger on her lips.

Maan: Sshhh! Bahut bolti ho tum

He said nd dey both gets lost in each other eyes once again

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Geet's Scream brings back both Armaan nd Shilpa to reality. He instantly frees her nd dey both looks upwards.

Shilpa: Ye to Di ki Awaaz hai?

Armaan: Ya. But y is she screaming?

Shilpa: Ab hw do I knw it From here? I should go nd check upstairs

Armaan: I'll also cum wid u

Shilpa: R u mad? Wat if Di Sees u that too at dis tym

Armaan: Dnt worry I'll not make Noise.

Shilpa: Sure

Armaan: Sure

Shilpa: ok den cum wid me. But dnt make any noise

Armaan:ok

Dey both goes upstairs nd shilpa knocks d Door which brings back both Maan nd Geet from dere lala world. Geet started to panic as she don't knw wat she'll say to Shilpa wen she asks her about Maan

Geet: I guess Shilpa is here. Ab kya hoga?

Maan: So wat? Our relationship is not hidden from anyone. Let me open d Door

Geet stops him by hoding his wrist

Geet: Pagal ho gaye ho kya? Already she teases me Everytym by taking ur name nd if she saw saw u here den she wont excuse me even in my sleep.

Maan: So wat u r going to do

Geet: I don't know

In d meantym Shilpa again knocks d Door

Shilpa: Di! Di u dere?

Geet: ya Shilpa. M here only

Shilpa: den y were u not responding? Nd y did u scream? Everything ok?

Geet: ya Shilpa everything is fine. Wo actually… wo I screamed because……. (she looked at Maan for sum excuse but he stands dere enjoying her helplessness) I screamed because…… haan I saw a Cockroach

Maan (muttered): Cockroach (nd den narrowed his eyes at Geet to which she made a baby face)

Shilpa: Cockroach but Di Jiju ne to last week hi pest control karaya hai

Geet: So… kya Cockroach uske baad nahi aa sakta.

Armaan has to bite his hand to control his laugh wen he listens d conversation of both d sisters.

Shilpa: ok Di Chill! But y had u closed d Door?

Geet: Wo because…. Because I was doing Yoga

"Yoga" Both Armaan nd Shilpa says at d same tym obviously Armaan says it slowly. Shilpa looks at him nd he shrugs his shoulders gesturing dnt knw wats going on.

On d other hand Geet nd Maan too gets confused on Geet's reasoning

Shilpa: But Di y r u doing Yoga? Dat too at dis tym?

Geet: Wo Because Shilpa…… I…..

Maan found it right tym to take his revenge of calling him Cockroach nd he whispers sumthing in her eyes

Maan (whispers): Because main moti ho rahi hoon

Geet: haan kyunki main moti ho rahi hoon (den realizes wat she has said nd looks at Maan) Main tumhe moti dikhti hoon? (To which Maan makes a baby face)

Shilpa(confused): Di maine kab kaha ki tum moti ho rahi ho? Tumhi ne to abhi khud hi kaha

Armaan is finding it hard to control his laughter. One more minute nd he'll definitely burst into laughter.

Maan(hugging her from back): I LOVE YOU😳😳

Geet (irritated): I HATE YOU😡😡

Shilpa: Arey nw wat had I done that u hate me? Di tumhe kya ho gaya hai?😕😕

Maan (Whispers): I knw sweetheart. I LOVE U TOO.

Geet: Shut up! U dnt knw anything

Shilpa (totally confused): Di! R u alright?😕

Geet: ya m fine (Den to Maan) Tum jao yaha se mujhe tumse koi Baat nahi karni

Shilpa: But maine kya kiya?

Maan: But mujhe to karni hai. Dher saari Lovey-Dovey talks.

Geet: m warning u just go from here otherwise I'll nt talk to u in future also

Shilpa: Di! U knw wat? Tum pagal ho gayi ho. Raho isi room me aur karo apna Yoga. M going downstairs

She said nd storms downstairs followed by Armaan who was laughing.

Geet: Shilpa… Listen… Wo main……

But Shilpa was not dere to listen nd she realizes dat she has gone. She gives an angry look to Maan who was smirking.

Geet: Wat do u think u were Doing?

Maan(acting innocent): Wat had I done Geet?

Geet: Maan Dnt act Innocent. Tumhari wajah se Shilpa mujhe Pagal samajh rahi hai

Maan: Ab Geet tum baat hi aisi karogi to koi bhi tumhe pagal samjhega.

Geet: To tumhara matlab hain main pagal hoon aur tumne… Tumne mujhe mota bhi kaha tha. Main tumhe moti dikhti hoon

Maan: Ab tumne abhi khud hi to Shilpa se kaha

Geet: Maan dnt act smart ok

Maan: Acha maine tumhe mota kaha to tumhe bura lag gaya aur tumne jab mujhe Cockroach bulaya tha

Geet: Dat I had made an excuse to Shilpa

Maan: O really

Geet: Ya! Otherwise wat would u expect me to say to her dat Shilpa ur Darling Jiju is has came here unexpectedly datsy I had screamed

Maan: well I haven't stopped u from dat

Geet: Maan…..

Maan: Geet……

Geet: u knw wat I dnt want to talk to u

She said nd turned her face. Maan looks lovingly at her kiddish behaviour. He snakes his arms to her waist making Geet shiver from his touch but yet she acts dat it didn't effect her. He slowly whispers in her ears

Maan: I M SORRY

Geet tries hard to control her senses wen she feels his hot breath on her ears but she said nothing. Maan smirks seeing his effect on her. He strokes his index finger from her shoulders till d back of her palm sending a current of 1000 volts down at her spine. She closed her eyes trying hard to control herself. He brings her hand to his lips nd kiss at her fingers.

Maan: I LOVE YOU

Geet: I HATE YOU

He Smirks nd kisses on her Arms

Maan: I LOVE YOU

Geet: I HATE YOU

He den places a kiss on her shoulders

Maan: I LOVE YOU

Geet started to breathing harder yet she managed to speak

Geet: I HATE YOU

He places a kiss on her neck nuzzling over dere making Geet lose her senses completely

Maan (whispers): I LOVE YOU

Geet (voice trailing off): I….. I HATE…… YOU

Finally he places a kiss on her earlobe nd turned her to face him nd saw her eyes closed

Maan (huskily): Geet

She opens her eyes to meet his. he looks straight into her Big hazel eyes wid intensity. Dere was an eyelock session for some moment wen Maan finally spoke

Maan: Geet….. Nw still u hate me

She said nothing but hugs him tight. He too hugs her wid same intensity

Geet: Yes I HATE YOU. I HATE TO LOVE YOU dis much dat I cant even remain angry wid u for long

Maan: But I LOVE TO LOVE YOU dis much dat no matter hw much u get angry wid me but at d end u came into my Arms like dis only.

She smiles nd hugs him tight nd he kisses at top of his head.

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In d living Room Shilpa was pacing furiously nd Armaan watches her sitting on d couch. She was still confused at Geet's behaviour. Armaan loves d expression of her face nd decides to have some fun

Armaan: umm Shilpa… Can I have some Popcorns please

Shilpa (confused): Popcorns but y?

Armaan: Ab such an interesting movie is going on in front of me. U knw upstairs Geet nd here u. I think it would be nice if I watch it wid Popcorn

Shilpa: Shut up Armaan here m so worried nd Tumhe Mazak soojh raha hai. Ek to Di itna weird behave kar rahi hai pata nahi use kya ho gaya hai. Lagta us Sasha ki wajah se use sadma lag gaya hai aur yaha tum mera mazak bana rahe ho………

She cant say further as Armaan pulled her towards him nd places his finger on her lips.

Armaan: Ssshhh….. Forget about everything, ur every worries wen u r wid me.

Shilpa looked down wen Armaan cups her face nd make her look at him nd kisses on her forehead

Armaan: Shilpa, had I ever said dat u had a beautiful eyes?

Shilpa nods in No

Armaan: u had a very beautiful eyes

He said nd kisses on her both of d eyes

Armaan: had I ever said dat ur cheeks look very beautiful wen u blush?

Shilpa blushes nd again nods in No.

Armaan: Ur cheeks look very beautiful wen u blush

He said nd kisses her cheeks.

Armaan: had I ever said dat ur Lips r very beautiful

Shilpa closes her eyes wen she feels Armaan coming close to her. She can feel his warm breath on her lips. Her lips get parted nd Armaan accepts d invitation nd finally seals his lips wid hers, feeling its softness. Shilpa encircled her arms around his neck nd he felt shiver through his spine wid her touch. Nd soon dere kiss turned into a passionate one.

Dey free each other after sumtym to take breath. Shilpa looks down at d floor, blushing while Armaan looks at her lovingly.

Armaan: U ok na?

Shilpa nodes in yes.

Armaan: I hope I haven't did sumthing wrong which makes u uncomfortable

Shilpa nodes in No nd hugs him tight nd he too responds wid same passion.

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Geet brokes d hug nd looked at Maan.

Geet: But Maan, y had u came liked dis? I mean u can cum from d door also na den y had u came from balcony?

Maan: Because I wanted to spend sum moment wid u only nd if I had cum by d Door den first I would have encounter wid Shilpa den I would able to meet u nd dat too if she stops Buzzing us.

Geet: Excuse Maan, u r talking about my sister ok.

Maan: ok but dnt Forget she's my Sister-in-law too nd atleast dis much right I had to tease her.

Geet: ya but not too much

Maan: Sure my Future Wifey. Ah! By d way have u thought about our lyf after Marriage

Geet: wat to think in dat. We'll love each other lyk dis only nd not to forget also fight like kids like dis only

Maan: ok nd wat about our kids?

Geet (confused): Means

Maan: I mean I was thinking hw many children we should have.

Geet (blushes): Maan……

Maan: No, m serious. I think 12 will be good

Geet (surprised): 12!!!!!???😲😲😲

Maan: kam hai? Acha 20?

Geet: Maan, r u out of ur mind. U want 20 children. U want children or whole cricket team?

Maan: y? wats d problem in dat? I mean it would be so nice na. our children voices would Echo all over d Mansion. From some corner it would say "Mom", from other "Dad", far from some corner it would say "Grandmom". Wow Geet it would be so fun na.

Geet: Maan….

Maan: arey geet y r u getting scared? Oh! U r thinking dat u have to handle dem alone. Dnt worry I too help u in handling dem

Geet: Maan, u knw wat u have became mad. So many Kids? Main to mar hi jayungi (she said while blushing)

Maan:hey! Main tumhe Marne nahi doonga Afterall tumhi to meri lyf ho. Nd dnt worry I was just kidding. U urself is not less den a kid. tumhe sambhal loon wahi kaafi hai, after dat I can handle my rest of my 20 kids.

Geet (blushes): Maan ( nd she hits playfully on his chest)

Suddenly Geet notices his hand in which dere is a small cut which was due to breaking d ice

Geet: Maan, ye u haven't applied anything on it yet

Maan (looks at his hand): oh! Let it be Geet. It will heal soon

Geet: shut up Maan! U knw hw dangerous it is to leave a wound like dis. wait I'll bring u an ointment

She said nd about to go wen Maan stops her holding her wrist nd pulled her towards him

Maan: where r u going?

Geet: dwnstairs. First Aid Box was over dere only

Maan: oh Really! Nd wat will u tell to Shilpa wen she sees u over dere. Already u had given her ur World's best excuse of Yoga

Geet: ya u r rite. Wat to do nw?

Maan (naughtily): well dere's an another option also?

Geet (innocently): wats dat

Maan (huskily): well, just make dem feel ur Lips once nd dey would heal automatically

Geet: Maan……

Nd she couldn't able to say anything wen she looked at his eyes which was speaking in volumes. Nd she takes his hand nd brings it near her lips nd Kisses at d place where dere is Wound.

Geet: ok now.

Maan nodes in no nd puts his finger on his forehead gesturing to kiss dere also as he got hurt over dere also. She smiles nd kiss his forehead. He den point towards his cheek nd she kiss his cheeks. Maan has nw become in naughty mood so he pointed towards his lips. Geet understands his intentions. But she cant refuse him so

Geet: Chaddo Maan, poore lafange ban gaye ho

Maan (a bit angry): Lafanga? Ok Geet if u dnt want me to love u or touch u den let it be. I'll not cum near u from now on (he said looking other side)

Geet (To herself): Hey Babaji, yeh maine kya kar diya? I was just kidding aur Maan bura maan gaya. O God nw wat should I Do

She looked at Maan who was looking other side

Geet: Maan

Maan slowly smirks but pretends dat he's angry.

Geet: Maan, m sorry. I was just kidding.

He still didn't said anything but enjoying Geet's pleading

Geet: Maan, m really very sorry. I dnt have any intention to hurt u. Pls

Maan: ………

Geet: Acha See nw m holding my ears (she said nd holds her ears) Ab to Maan jao

Maan: No need to do dis Geet becoz it wont help ok. M going rite nw nd nw wont cum near u until our Marriage.

He said nd was about to leave wen Geet's voice stopped him

Geet (sobs): Maan…. M Sorry

He quickly turned nd look at Geet. He saw a Drop of tear in her eyes. He realizes dat he had gone too far in teasing her nd nw he only had to make-up. He quickly goes to her nd cupped her face

Maan: Geet… Geet m Sorry. I was just teasing u. pls dnt cry. I was not angry from u Acha m sorry. Pls Mishti

Geet (innocently): Pakka

Maan: Pakka

Geet: Maan pls never ever say dis thing. Never ever say dat u r going away from me. Not even in joke. I cant stay away from u

She said nd hugged him.

Maan: m sorry Geet. I promise I'll never ever do like dis. not even in joke

Precap:

Continuation…….

Ok so dats it guys! m sorry for dis abrupt ending actually had lots of work to do derefore couldnt able to type much nd m Sorry For d Update also. i knw dat it was not as per ur Expectations. u guys have expected a lot from me for dis update nd m not able to live up to ur expectations so Sorry for dat. i tried hard to make dis Part interesting nd acc to ur expectations but failed😭😭 nd at last it bacame nothing but a "Khichdi". will definately try to cover up in next update nd for dis m ready to accept watever punishment u all wanted to give to me. Hit d like Button if u all like it nd Do Leave ur Comment/criticism. its necessary.😊😊

Luv Aakriti😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
that was superb and update was good
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it dear...maan nd geet both r sooo cuteee
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan is sooo naughty😆...
poor shilpa😆 she is worrying abt geet's behavior towards her na...
nice...looking fwd...

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