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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi dear...thanks 4 da pm n awesome, hilarious and exciting update! Poor Geet...Maan is so naughty, teasing her lyk dat! Shilpa thawt tht Geet was crazy! Armaan enjoying da drama. Loved it ...Maan n Armaan der...Bt Geet n Shilpa hiding tht from each other! Maan wants a cricket team lol. Loved the sweet n romantic Maaneet moments! Well written...update soon
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Hi everyone. First of all its nt Aakriti its her sis Aastha. M just here to inform u all sumthing as u all r very well aware of her fractured leg due to accident. But dere's another irony came. She's suffering 4m high fever frm last nite nd still in fever derefore she couldnt able to update her FF for next few days. Though she's very much disappointed due to dis as u guys have to wait. But cant help it guys.Hope u guys understand. Pls co-operate wid her nd pray 4 her recovery soon. I wont b able to inform u all individually lyk last tym as dis tym i m nt having her PM LIST thanx to Aakriti Di. So just hope dat u all will read dis note. Thanx
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lovely and awesome update dear...
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awesome parts!

urghhh!...I hate sasha!...maan should have given a tight slap to her!
loved maneet and armaan-shilpa moments!
continue soon!
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beautiful update
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hey Guys m back. nd dis tym its Aakriti only nd not Aastha. Feeling much better nw. thanx for ur Lovely wishes. so without making u guys wait any more m going to update in few mins. here u go. get ready wid ur lovely Comments
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Hey my lovely readers sorry to disappoint u guys bt d update would b a bit late actually i was updating 4m my bro's lappy nd he has to rush sumwhere 4 meeting so lappy would b wid him. I promise i'll update it as soon as he returns. By evening u all will get ur update. I promise. Thanx nd sorry
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Hey every1 thanx a ton for ur Lovely Response in d previous part though it was not very happening but still thanx for motivating me. nw here's d Part 39 of my FF hope u all will like it too . nd ya Feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it


Part 39:


Maan: m sorry Geet. I promise I'll never ever do like dis. not even in joke

Den suddenly he reminds of sumthing. He brokes d hug nd looked at her

Maan: Dekho in sab me main jis kaam k liye aaya tha wo bhool hi gaya.

Geet: wat?

Maan: Dadimaa has called panditji today to fix our marriage date

Geet: Marriage date?

Maan: ya nd its due on 10th Jan. dat is 1 month from nw. I knw u must be thinking its bit early but Dadimaa has talked to mom nd she said dat she has no problem in it.

Geet: My Mom?

Maan: No, our Mom.

She looked at him in Awe at his statement.

Maan: after 1 month u'll officially become Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana nd den we dnt have to meet like dis as we'll get official licence to meet each other freely.

Geet makes a sad face nd Looks at other side making Maan worried

Maan: Wat Happen Geet? R u not Happy?

Geet still didn't said anything which makes Maan more worried. He quickly goes to her nd held her by her shoulders

Maan: Geet, tell me wat happen? Are'nt u happy? Geet pls say sumthing. Ur silence is killing me

Geet (maintaining straight face): Maan, Marriage date thoda aur pehle ki nahi ho sakti?

Maan first could'nt able to understand wat she just said but den Geet giggles hard nd he realizes wat she just said

Maan: Geeettt

Geet makes a baby face nd den Giggles making Maan smiles

Geet: Maan main jald se jald Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana banna chahti hoon

Maan: oh Geet! U r priceless.

He said nd kissed her forehead

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Armaan nd Shilpa were sitting in d living Area. Both were quiet, dnt knw wat to say to each other. It was weird dey never sit quiet specially wen dey r together but now dey both dnt knw wat to say. Nd after d moment dey shared just now it was getting more difficult to speak.

It was too early to speak about marriage or kids nd it would be weird if dey talk about their sorroundings nd not about demselves. But dey had to talk about sumthing so finally Shilpa decided to break d silence.

Shilpa: umm Armaan

Armaan: ya

Shilpa: u remember wat u said while proposing me

Armaan: Ya I said I LOVE YOU

Shilpa: nahi Buddhu after dat.

Armaan (not understanding): wat?

Shilpa: Duffer, u said dat u'll not let me do any work nd would love to be my "Joru ka Ghulam"

Armaan: ya so? Abhi ye baat beech me kaha se aa gayi

Shilpa: ye baat isliye aa gayi because I m hungry

Armaan: Wat?

Shilpa: ya

Armaan: So uska is baat se kya matlab hai?

Shilpa: Seriously Savy sahi bolti hai u r really a big Duffer

Armaan: Shilpa...

Shilpa: aur nahi to kya. I said m hungry nd u knw very well dat I dnt knw hw to cook

Armaan: so u expecting me to cook for u?

Shilpa: Well samajhdaar ko ishaara hi kaafi hai. But m talking about intelligents

Armaan gave her a look to which she giggles

Armaan: so u think dat I couldn't stuck up to my words

She shrugged her shoulders

Armaan: Fine den lets go to d kitchen

Shilpa (amazed): u'll really cook

Armaan: No we'll cook.

She smiled nd dey left for d Kitchen

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Maan: So itni achi Good news sunayi tumhe. Wont you delight me wid some sweet dish

Geet: But Ice-cream is at d fridge downstairs nd Shilpa is over dere

Maan rolled over his eyes at her innocence "Wat should I do wid dis girl" he thought

Maan: dnt worry Geet. U have something in dis Room also from which u can make my mouth sweet

Geet (looking around): Where?

Maan: here

He said while caressing her lips wid his thumb making Geet missing heart beats nd started leaning forward. Geet who initially couldn't understand now understands wat he was upto she closed her eyes nd he takes it as her permission. he cupps her cheek wid one hand nd started leaning more closer. She could feel his breath fanning her lips which were tickling her senses nw. He leaned more forward nd just gave a soft peck on her lips nd den slowly draws his face back. Geet opens her eyes nd looked at him who was looking at her lovingly.

She still couldn't understand y he did like dat. He slowly pointed towards her lower lip which was still swollen nd wound was still dere. She noticed nd looked at him in awe nd den blushed nd looked downwards. He came closer to her nd slowly whispered to hers

Maan: Dnt be so happy Mrs. MSK it is before marriage only. After Marriage I really wont excuse u.

She blushed more nd hugged him

Maan (smiles): nw go

Geet: where?

Maan: to get my Ice-cream

Geet: But...

Maan: I dare u ms. Geet Malhotra bring ice-cream for us that too in front of Shilpa

Geet: Fine Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. Just wait nd watch

She said nd stormed out of d Room leaving Maan behind smiling

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Armaan nd Shilpa were sharing dere cute romantic moments in Kitchen while preparing Pasta. Nd finally it gets ready. Shilpa was happily putting it in two plates wen dey both listen d Noise of door getting shut. Dey looked at each other in shock knowing who it was

Shilpa: Armaan, I guess Di is coming dwnstairs. Nw wat to do

Armaan: Shilpa, Relax! Dnt panic

Shilpa: arey hw couldnt I dnt Panic. U just do one thing just go to d Study fast

Armaan: But wat if she saw me going over dere

Shilpa: dats wat m saying dnt stay over here nd go fast. I too will join u over dere

She said while pushing him nd he goes nd hides in d study in d meanwhile Geet comes to d kitchen

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Geet was blabbering to herself all d way down to kitchen

Geet (To herself): Babaji, kaisa insaan bheja hai aapne meri lyf me. Baat kam aur challenges zyada deta hai. Nw hw would I take d ice-creams in front of Shilpa dat too 2 Bowls. Wat if she questions me? Thanx to my world's best excuse dat m doing Yoga nd nw wen she'll ask me y m having Ice-creams after Yoga wat answer should I give? Maan tumhe to main dekh loongi

She said nd in d mean tym she finds herself in d kitchen where Shilpa was standing wid a nervous face

Geet: Shilpa. Wats wrong wid u? y r u standing over here?

Shilpa: Wo Di... Aise hi I like to stand over here in d kitchen

Geet: wat?

"Ye to mujhse bhi zyada weird behave kar rahi hai" She thought to herself

Shilpa: Wo di... actually haan... after ur Marriage u'll go to jiju's house I mean ur house too so it would be only me na who had to handle dis kitchen stuff nd all so datsy m trying to spend my tym at kitchen

Geet: ok (den looked at d plates) nd wats dis u cooked Pasta?

Shilpa looked at d plate nd realized dat she has forgot to remove dem over dere. She felt nervous nd couldn't able to think of any excuse wen Geet again called her

Geet: Shilpa, where r u lost? M asking sumthing from u?

Shilpa: Wo Di... ya I cooked it. I was hungry na

Geet: ok, but u served it in two plates?

"Nothing could be more worse nw" Shilpa thought

Shilpa: Wo... Di I was very much hungry na so I made it in more quantity nd served it in two plates so dat I wont feel dat I ate too much

Geety (amuzed): Wat?

Nw d situation was really ironic, few moments back it was Geet who was giving shocks to Shilpa nd nw its Shilpa who's Surprising Geet

Geet: Wat r u saying?

Shilpa: Nothing Di... leave it. BTW wat r u doing over here? Tum to yoga kar rahi thi na

Geet: wo... Main... haan I came here to drink water. Wo yoga k beech me Pani pee lena chahiye. Its gud for d body

(me wondering in which book is it written🤔)

Shilpa: oh ok.

Both d sisters were really nervous not sure hw to escape from d situation especially wen their Boyfriends r waiting for dem in d respective rooms. But dey had to.

Shilpa: Di chalo u drink water nd after dat we'll have pasta Made by me in ur Room

She said nd crossed her fingers wishing dat Geet couldn't get Agreed to it. Geet got scared at d mention of her Room. She cant let Shilpa go over dere. She has to stop her

Geet: NAHI!!!!! Mera matlab hai ki u knw na I don't eat Pasta so u eat alone ok.

Shilpa (sigh in relief): R u sure?

Geet: ya

Shilpa: ok den

She said nd takes d tray from dere wen Geet again stops her

Geet: Shilpa! Y r u going towards d Study?

Shilpa stops in her tracks nd closes her eyes in fear of being caught

Shilpa: Wo Di... Actually... Ya wo I m doing research on a disease actually dere is a patient at Sanjeevani having a typical disease so m doing research on dat so datsy going towards study.

Geet: ok, den go.

Shilpa: bye Di. ALL D BEST wid ur Yoga

Geet: Bye nd same to u for ur research.

Wen Geet was sure dat Shilpa has gone inside d Room she quickly takes out two Bowls nd puts Ice-cream in it nd takes it towards her Room. Shilpa saws it before entering d Room nd gets confused dat y Geet has lied to her dat she was here to take water nd was taking Ice-cream dat too in two bowls but den she didn't find it important so she goes towards d Study


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Geet steps inside d Room only to find it empty. She wonders where Maan has gone. She looks around her but couldn't able to find him. Her eyes was searching for him wen he tapps her shoulders. She turns nd found him standing in front of her. she was about to say sumthing wen he puts d finger on her lips nd takes her towards d Balcony. She couldn't understand his actions nd she looked at him questioningly

Maan: I wanted to make our celebration memorable so thought of celebrating it under Moonlight. Derefore...

She smiled at his gesture nd looked at him lovingly. Wen she first met him den she had never ever thought dat he can be dis much Romantic. She really don't know wat Good works she has done dat she is dis much Lucky to have him in her lyf

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Wen Shilpa steps inside d study she saw dat Armaan has decorated d table wid candles nd d lights of d study were Dim making d atmosphere Romantic. She looks at Armaan in awe nd Armaan understands wats going in her mind.

Armaan: dis would be our First Dinner together so hw could I let it be a Simple one?

She smiled nd looked at him

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Music...

hey hey hey hey hey eh he...

hey hey hey hey hey eh he...

hey hey hey hey hey eh he...

hey hey hey hey hey eh he...

Maan nd Geet gets seated on d Swing completely lost in each other forgetting dat dey were here to have dere Ice-cream. She rests her head on his shoulders nd he puts his arm around her lovingly

Armaan pulls out a chair for Shilpand gets seated across her seat. He slowly puts his hand on hers nd looks at her lovingly

Tumhein pata to hoga

Tumhi pe mein fida hoon

Tumhi hai jabse hai chaha

Hawaon mein udta hoon

Maan cups Geet's face from one side nd kisses her forehead looking into her eyes only to find immense Love for him.

Tumhi mere har pal mein

Tum aaj mein tum kal mein

Hey shona hey shona

Armaan nd Shilpa were lost in each other's eyes silently expressing dere Feelings to each other

Hey shona hey shona

Geet feels shy as his gaze was burning her nd she quickly rans into his embrace

Tumhein pata to hoga

Ki mere dil mein kya hai

Chalo kahe deti woh

Kabhi nahi jo kaha ha

Shilpa gets up from her chair nd moves towards d Window feeling slowly humming to herself wen Armaan came to her from behind nd hugs her

Tumhi mere har pal mein
Tum aaj mein tum kal mein
Hey shona hey shona

Geet places her one hand on Maan's Cheek singing along expressing him her feelings nd touches her forehead wid his

Hey shona hey shona

Shilpa closes her eyes nd rests her head on Armaan's Shoulders

Music...

Maan nd Geet were Feeding each other Ice-cream. Maan cames in naughty mood nd in next bite he instead of feeding her puts d mouth in his mouth. Geet gives him a complaining look to which he makes a baby face nd again puts spoon in front of her mouth nd wen she opens her mouth he agains puts it in his mouth. Geet gets annoyed nd move away from him. Maan goes to her to manofy her but she didn't looked at him. He says sorry to her by holding his ears

Tum jo gussa bhi karo
To mujhe Pyaar lagta hai jane kyon

she didn't said anything nd started going other side wen Maan holds her wrist to stop her nd goes close to her

Main to jo bhi kahun
Tumhein iqkaar lagta hai jaane kyon

Geet smirks slowly but didn't face him maintaining her angry posture crossing her Arms in front of her chest while singing

Chodo bhi yeh ada paas aake zara
Baat dil ki koi kehdo naa

Hey Shona Hey shona

He slowly hugs her from behind, kisses her ears nd rests his head wid hers.

Hey Shona Hey shona

She too melts in his arms nd finally gave in his love

Music...

Armaan nd Shilpa were enjoying dere romantic candle light dinner nd after dat dey do a small romantic Dance. He places his hands on her waist while her hands were around his neck nd dey were lost in each others eyes

Sari duniya ko chod ke mene
Chaha hai ek tumhein

She rests her head on his chest nd closes her eyes while singing. A drop of tear came out from her eyes


Mene zindagi se manga hai to
Sirf manga hai ek tumhein

He slowly wipes away her tear nd kisses on d top of her forehead


Abb ise chah mein
Abb ise raah mein
Zindagi bhar mere
Tum ho na
Hey shona hey shona

Hey shona hey shona

She draws back from d hug nd looks into his eyes. Den she raises on her toes nd kisses his forehead nd den again hugs him. He smiles nd hugs her even more tight

Tumhein pata to hoga
Tumhi pe mein fida hoon

Maan slowly tucks away d lock of hair dat falls on Geets face behind her ears nd touches his forehead wid hers

Tumhi hai jabse hai chaha
Hawaon mein udta hoon

Armaan slowly cups Shilpa's face nd kisses on her forehead


Tumhi mere har pal mein

Geet goes into Maan's embrace resting her hand on his cheek


Tum aaj mein tum kal mein

Hey shona hey shona

Hey shona hey shona

Shilpa looks in Armaan's Eyes nd blushes nd Armaan looks at her lovingly nd slowly hits his forehead wid hers


shooona hey shona
Hey shona hey shona

Geet pulls Maan's nose in loving Manner to which Maan too pulls her cheeks to respond back his love

Music...

(hey hey hey)

Maan nd Geet nd Armaan nd Shilpa hugs each other nd gets lost in d moment of dere love which dey will cherish forever.


OK Guys so dis is it. i knw its again a Not So very Happening update nd a short one too couldnt able to type much due to fever. even m not sure whether u guys going to like dis. seriously guys i dnt knw wat i was typing watever came in my mind i typed dat nd nw i dnt think dat its happening. so anything from u all i.e. Jutas, chappals even rotten tomatoes r also acceptable. hit d like button if u all like it nd do leave ur Comment/criticism its necessary😊😊😊

Luv Aakriti😊😊
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Awesome n romantic part
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