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Posted: 14 years ago






Drea-ea-ea-ea-eam, dream, dream, dream
Drea-ea-ea-ea-eam, dream, dream, dream
When I want you in my arms
When I want you and all your charms
Whenever I want you, all I have to do is
Drea-ea-ea-ea-eam, dream, dream, dream
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrats for new thread..Muskan are u update any more part?
I hope Geet speak..that she don;t know hindi..
Simran true color came out..I hope Maan gonna do?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: febinyusuff







Drea-ea-ea-ea-eam, dream, dream, dream
Drea-ea-ea-ea-eam, dream, dream, dream
When I want you in my arms
When I want you and all your charms
Whenever I want you, all I have to do is
Drea-ea-ea-ea-eam, dream, dream, dream


febin are thse ur creations😆..if yes, then u r damn good gurl
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique


febin are thse ur creations😆..if yes, then u r damn good gurl




Reva,

Nope dear, I really wish if they were mine.. but these are Everly Brothers beautiful song.. Dreams

http://www.stlyrics.com/lyrics/ridingincarswithboys/dream.htm
Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
congratulations on the new thread!!!!!!!
loved both the updates... i just want u to reveal geet's identity b4 maan!
as soon as possible .. i cant see her getting humiliated!!
love u muskan di.. ur ff,ss are awesome.. pls update aparichit , maitri too!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Dreams
part 16

Simran wanted to slap her back but her parents came running & took her away. dehka aagyen na aapne aukat pe.. gawaner..mannerless she screamed as she was dragged out from the scene

When did it happen-I don't know!

How did it all change-I don't know!
You were a stranger, she-my love.
but, today I know a different meaning of LOVE...
With her I screamed, I shouted, I flaunted,
With you, I just want to hide you within,
With her it was just skin deep,
For you, my love can even make the oceans feel shallow!
I showered her with my love,
On you I eaped contempt...
She was happy, but you are not,
And to this guilt forever I am condemned!
How could I even fail to believe you?
How could I miss that innocence that oozes from you?
How could I become such a devil?
How could I expose you to such peril?
I feel disgusted, I feel so sick...
the fear in your eyes always pricks,
How much I wish to hold you close,
The apprehension that you hide I can see up and close!
The simplicty, the innocence, the twinkle in your eyes,
Yet my mere sight causes it to die...
How unfortunate can I be?
Want to make you happy, but wiped off your glee...
I don't even know where the guilt finds its space,
For the love I have for you fills each inch...each ounce...each fragment of my being...
Guess my guilt has seeped into the love,
Fail to separate, and fail to club.
I will wait for you forever,
Will watch you from a distance, admire you as a mother.
The fatherly feeling makes me swell with pride,
But, do i deserve it-the question haunts my stride!
You are now my soul...the reason for my existence,
My child's mother-the best on all pretence!
Love
Swati

Maan shot an agonized look to Geet. She did know the anger was because of the betrayal. He grabbed her hand & tried to walk away.. when the spot light fell on them while crossing the hall he turned her angrily & spun her around.. dancing furiously to the music that followed. He slipped his hand around her waist & tucked her closer. She looked down & at him. His eyes was spiting fire. He was mad. He had no idea wat he was doing. He spun her again & turned her around to hold her again in his arm.

He lifted her & spun her around. She didn't move .. he moved her around. She just followed him like his shadow.. soothing his anger which was at peek. She wondered why it was she who had to be at the brunt of his anger always.
Why did u have to stoop low
Why did u hit her

he spat in anger, she wanted to let go..she growled as he spun again. She glared at him angrily hissing let go. He didn't move, though she saw his chest rise as he took a huge breath. He didn't understand why was she being so indifferent. It was not her to raise her hand or show off.. did he make a mistake in understanding her, like he did with Simran.

mujhe chodiyen...

He muttered something under his breath .. she leaned closer to listen...a second later he pulled her close and twirled her round. Geet was plastered to Maan's torso. His arm at her waist didn't steady her rather it welded her to him. His breath feathered her forehead. His hard thighs cradled her then shifted provocatively between her legs as they danced, evoking a strange hollow ache in deep in her with a threatening fear.

she felt his every movement close, partly because her hands were trapped against his chest. His heart pounded fast and strong beneath her palm, despite his anger and hurt.

I had enough she gasped as he swung her round and back down the dance floor. This was too much, too dangerous especially to the little one.

he was still very angry she could make out.
U don't want me in ur life either.
All the pleasure she felt in the evening shattered in that moment, like fragile crystal smashed down. The heady excitement of the evening faded to something brassy and shallow.

She stepped back to break his hold but his grip tightened.
He tucked her closer angrily & took her out with him. They walked through the corridor to the parking lot. She was not used to the place. She had never been to a parking lot. She always had her car pick her from the door step. Even in her college days every gate of the college had a car waiting for her. She could step out from any gate & get into to the car & other cars would just follow. This place full of cars parked looked so scary in the darkness. She looked here & there & then she felt a solid wall behind her and Maan's powerful body trapping her against it.

aap .. she gulped.. wat r u doing? It was meant to sound outraged. Instead her voice was uneven & weak with the aggression of conflicting emotions. She should loathe this forced intimacy, the press of his body. Yet she felt concerned for him, all the while she knew he was upset his heart was wounded

Maan cupped her face in warm palms and lifted her chin. She looked deep into eyes the color of a heart broken soul which now belonged only to her.
Main ne tumhari zindagi barbad kardi.. he closed his eyes.. a tears escaped & fell on her cheek.
I didn't mean to
He leaned forward touching his forehead to hers. His hands tunneled her hair, sending threads of shivery sensation down her spine, across her shoulders. Wat was happening to her why she felt so vulnerable to his very touch. Why seeing him in pain hurt her. Her hands betrayed her & reached to his cheek to wipe his tears.. he angrily snapped her hand.. nahi... I don't deserve anything. he caressed her scalp and rubbed his nose against hers. She melted into him closing her eyes.

U don't have to love me.. he screamed.. don't.. don't love me.. he dipped his head to her shoulder & buried into her cascading dark long hair. His hands slipped her waist & tucked her sacred.. scared of losing her. Scared of his deeds, scared of mistakes. She slowly rested her hand on his waist unsure if it was ok. Her warm touch send currents down him.

She didn't say anything she was little scared. Scared of herself. This conflicting emotion in her.

Later at night Maan came to her room..she was turning restlessly caressing her arm that was bruised when he held her tightly. He felt ashamed. He took an ointment & went to her room. Turning her gently, he pulled her form into his arms and cradled her gently. Her wounds were grievous. How could he be so harsh on her. He carefully applied the creamy ointment. She chuckled in her sleep. He softly patted her to ease her pain so that she could slip into deep sleep.


-PREV PART 15 NEXT PART 17-

thanks sweeties
please leave me comments & likes
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I really wanted to be first in commenting this time..

sorry guys... 😉


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Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
How low must he be feeling that his own fiance ruined Geet's life.. that was surely not what he had expected in his wildest dreams!

He still has a long way to go before he understands her, before he matures and understands himself.. Its like he's undergoing a learning phase, a very painful learning phase where you face you damnest demons yourself, where you just cant hide from consequences..Geet is mirroring his own self to him .. There could not have been a more contrasting couple..

LOved this update.. do post the next part soon.

Edited by ninand - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

😭 tooo short

one more plase

please one more😔

me waiting😍

Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...one more 2 go

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