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Posted: 14 years ago
😒too short but very nice👏
update next soon pzzz👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
congrats on the new thread muski!!
waiting for more!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Dreams
part 17

Maan

His love oozes from the angry words he says to her,
His love is in the harshness of his actions towards her
His love is in the guilt he feels in each and every cell of his body
His love is in his care and concern he portrays towards her..
Geet
Her love is in her silence when he is angry at her
Her love is in her being respectful towards him and his Daadi
Her love is in her eyes..when she sees feels his pain
Her love is in the concern that she feels towards him
Both of them loved each other in their own ways
Both of them were scared due to their life experiences
Both of them did not know where they stood in each other's lives today
It is a matter of many more chapters since..
Their destiny and their dreams are going to be written by MUSKANP.
Love
Rachana

Two days had passed after the party & Maan maintained his distance from her. He wondered if he was actually wat simran said he was. To think abt it he had been worse with Geet.
Maan went to her room.. she fumbled & got up at once.
Her reaction to him only made him believe he was mean.
do u want to work or something
ji?
she hid the book that was in her hand & looked at him in surprise
he narrowed his brows & inched closer.
She gulped her saliva & looked here & there. He put the hand around her & took the book. She instantly left it & clutched her dupatta on either side. She nervously moved away. He snatched the book & turned his back flipping the pages.
Yah kya hain
Daadi came in laughing.. she wants to learn hindi I believe.
Maan '
good
Daadi smiled
Maan '
Daadi I want her to join office be more independent types
Daadi '
but wat will she do
Geet got really scared ' wat will I do? Main ne kabhi job nahi kiya
Maan '
do u want to study then
Geet excitedly nodded her dream to complete her masters.
Maan for the first time saw her excited in something.
Maan '
join some course or do wat ever u want to do.
the least did he know wat she wanted to study & where.

This was the most beautiful thing she felt could happen to her. Her admission, her scholarship every thing was in place all she had to do was speak to them & confirm her enrollment. It was more of research work she had to submit. She probably had to just attend some classes but that was latter while submitting the paper. As of now she could start working on her research work. One mail & she would be all set.

A week had passed Geet spend the whole day in the study room on the computer. Maan came back late at night & saw Geet struggling with the computer. He wondered wat was she doing in study first then wat the hell was she doing with comp.
Tum yeh kya kar rahi ho
she stood up instantly.. getting startled by his sudden voice.
Ji yeh .. woh.. main..
she was really finding it difficult to adjust with windows.. she was so used using apple
yeh windows mujhe use nahi karna aata
Maan taunted..
yeh tumhare room ka window nahi hain
she made a baby face.
Challo hato.. I will explain it to u.
how could she learn anything around him, she gets so scared.. then tensed..then her heart seems to slip & she gets lost.. then as she gets close.. his closeness reminds her of his anger.. & she gets scared again.. she jumped up..
nahi main karloongi
he rolled his eyes & left her alone.

Geet worked on the economic model she had created, that had got her lot of acclaims.
Maan came in with a glass of milk for her. She made a cute face.
He made her drink. While leaving he forgot his file on her table. After he left, her eyes fell on the file. She causally flipped threw it & found out it was some gaziabad project. She spend the whole night reading the file. She dossed off on the file. Maan came in the morning to fetch the file just to see her sleeping on it. He shook his head & carried her to the room. She looked at him with her droopy eyes with her hands around his neck ..her eyes widen & screamed instantly seeing herself in his arms.
Geet he said calming her.
Aap..kya kar rahen ho?
Kuch nahi kar raho hoon.. tum wanha study main he so gayen thi..
she fretfully shook herself in his arms. He frowned & laid her on the bed. She immediately pulled the spread to cover herself.

Later in the day Geet got ready & looked for the file in the study. She restlessly looked around & asked Daadi where the file was.
Daadi '
kaun si?
Geet '
unki gaziabad project ki file
Daadi '
aaj usi ka tho presentation hain..I think he would have taken with him. Sab kuch aacha hogaya tho we will get the project.
Geet - nahi nahi.. woh teehk nahi hoga.
She restlessly went out & told the drivers to take her to maans office. Daadi tried to stop her but she just rushed out. Daadi tried to reach Maan but he didn't answer the call.

Geet walked straight to the reception & asked for Maan.
Every one in the office knew she was his wife. They stood up instantly. It was like automatic seeing her respect just flowed. She set her duppata & asked again.
Pinky lovingly welcomed her '
mam sir is just signing the deal for gaziabad wala project.
Geet got tensed & asked pinky to take her to his cabin.
Suniyen she called .. he almost dropped the pen that was in his hand. He consciously looked at clients & at Geet.
He cleared his throat & walked towards her tum teehk ho?
Geet '
ji
she blushed & looked down almost forgetting everything seeing him looking at her lovingly.
Maan '
tum mera cabin main wait karo ..I will sign the deal & join u
Geet '
ji
then immediately she came back
suniye na
he rolled his eyes & looked at her.
Ji main woh kah rahi thi
umm
aap yeh deal ..
she took a deep breath.. & said it in one breath..
don't sign this deal
the clients looked at him.
Who is she?
Maan proudly said ' my wife Geet Maan Khurana
Geet smiled weakly & looked at Maan again.
He didn't know how to explain it to her. By now he knew she was educated enough to operate computers & doing some course. But had no clear idea abt her hold on her subject. He didn't want to refuse her, but this was business.
Maan excused themselves to his cabin. She followed him.
He closed the door the moment she came in & shouted
yeh sab kya hain Geet?
Thats it she lost track of every thing. Tears threatened to fall & she knotted her duppata & stood mum.
He caressed his temple & paced restlessly .. he exhaled sharply & just walked back to the conference room. He took the pen & went to close the deal. He just couldn't sign. He closed his eyes. & stood up.. sorry this deal is canceled. He went back to his cabin & took her home. Through out the drive he was angry & cursing himself. He couldn't have said anything to her. He led her into the house & again shouted..
tumhari problem kya hain?
Daadi came running hear him scream '
kya baat hain Maan
Maan exhaled & inhaled furiously ' issi se pucho? Pucho issen se ki issen us gazibaad walwen project se kya problem hain.
Geet crouched behind Daadi feeling sacred.
I was abt to sign the deal & she just walked in from no where & says no.. don't sign.
Daadi almost smiled..
iss ne kaha aur tum mangayen.
Maan was irritated enough. ..pucho issen?
Daadi lifted her chin.. she looked so sacred..-
tum aisen pucho gi tho yeh kya bolen gi
Maan calmed down.. teehk hain.. bolo
Daadi softly patted her back.. bolo beta
Geet looked at him.. & immediately looked at Daadi.. -
Daadi woh project jo expected rise in market value hain na woh wrong hain.
Maan looked curiously at her.
According to projected economic rise & present slash down ke karan I don't really think we can achieve such high projection

Maan ' I am already getting buyers for it
Geet ' that will only lead to more complication.. u will be stuck with few buyers @ high price & then it will be stagnant & u will have to slash down .. latter on.
Maan looked at the figures & wat she exactly said. He was still not sure.. he took the file & spend the day with adhi trying to reach to her point, wondering how could they miss it or she is getting confused with something. He was so lost in the project that he didn't get back to her asking how she knew abt it. But he did have that in back of his mind. Projecting an economic scenario is not a lay mans job. He did notice it & was sure to get to her on that.. but first thing first .. was to analyze the project.

Well all this landed her in more trouble when the next day the project went to Maan's competitor & he grabbed very high mileage. It was quiet controversial especially the reason why he left it. Media questioned his business ethics & standards. Maan refused to comment & at home poor Geet more angry glares from him.

-dreams part 17-

-PREV PART 16 NEXT PART 18-
Thanks a lot for all the lovely comments & likes
me off for week end.. will be back on monday
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
woww me first
though accidentally

part 16
nice update
all the pain of maan is
described beautifully


Edited by nan_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
BEATIFUL
DIDI
HOPE I NEXT PART ATLEAST MAKE HIM TO KNOW THAT SHE IS EDUCATED

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Posted: 14 years ago
Off for weekend 😭
Anyways... I think U really need rest after completing so many parts in such a short span of
time...!!!!! 😊

Update was gr8... Geet wants to study n fulfil one of her dream...!!!! Thats good...

Loved the way Maan left frm there without signing the papers... 😆 😆 😆 He cud not sign after shouting
at her...!!!! I wish Maan asks her how she knew so much n then she wud explain him evrything in detail... Maan will be astonished..!!!! 😆

Hmmm.. Project gone to Maan's rival n Geet getting angry glares 😆 😆 😆 Loved the update over all...!!!!!

Thanx for updating Di... Dunno how to wait till Monday... Lets see...
Till then.. Bye!!!!
N take care..!!! 😃
Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 16

ohh god she is so fragile... how could maan become so harsh 2words her he knew it by now tht she is so fragile...

so geet started filling for maan... maan is still guilty.
she know maans anger was cuz of betrayal
ohh dam maan should know now tht she lived a life of princes... she had never seen parking lot 😲

pls continue...
w8ing...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update yaar, it was touching maan is suffering with his guilt when will he come out all that, geet is not able to get whats all happening to her,but still love them to see comforting each other's pain.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome updates loved them. Wish u could give more, but have a safe n wonderful weekend.
Edited by Ambibamby - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsome!! Me waiting 4 d nxt...

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