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Posted: 14 years ago
This update may be shorter, i want you to read it completely if possible, it is the dream , it is the belief, the trust, the body -mind play... hope you can make out that relationship.. what i want to stress is" if you have strong mind then you can fight back anytthing and transmit that energy into a weaker body/mind.. but if you go weak on your mind, then your body reacts the same way, and none of the magic in this world can bring it back. It is not a debate, it is my own experience.. i have seen it thru my eyes, how people fight with certain situations, and still keep that smile on their face.. and it is a small transmission of that state of mind.. I might have gone weaker with my words, but i am trying to say something, dont know how it will reach to you, but it is coming up.
Devika
Please read the above note sattement prior to jump into the next part.. please..just a request..

Part -134

Delhi house

Surender arranging the dolls on the shelf: Suchi , I don't know , but now I want to smile all the time, whenever I close my eyes, it is the smiling face of chudki that is coming in front of me. I can't even concentrate on my meetings. Next month I need to go abroad, maybe I will send Dev only, let him slowly take the charge, he is capable, and he knows, and it is my belief that he can take over everything , and then I will get the nectar for my years of hardwork.

Suchi: um, again started dreaming

Surender: why you said 'again', see everything happened as I dreamed ,r ght?. He married Radhika, and I said she will bring him back to us and that also happned, and now he is more responsible and he has that talent to move forward and I am sure he will surely bring glorious achievements to our business world. I can see that.


Suchi looked at those dreamy eyes, his smiling lips, an said in mind: ha I have seen it, whatever you dreamed , it all came true, and I am sure oneday this will also happen

But then with a smile she said: what if he say, he will go with Chudki

The smile disappered from his face: how can that be possible, she s svery small, and how can he manage her, I am not going because I want to spend time with her, so don't even put such ideas in his head , ok. Did I go with you all when I went for business tours? then

Suchi with a smile: um um, noone has to instill this in his head, he only will say.

Surender looked at Suchi with a serious face, but then Lechu appered in front of their room.

Lechu was looking at the changes in Suchi's room.

Suchi: so what do you say Lechu?

Lechu: what can I say?

Suchi: you think she will like it?

Lechu: I like it

Surender: here is some more

Lechu looked at the pointed cupboard and found the shelf full of dolls.

Surender proudly: you wait, and see what is coming next?

"tantadaaa" Sammy came in with two large stuffed animals

Lechu with parted lips looked at those animals for few minutes and said

Lechu: Oh my, are you planning to scare her?

Surender: what scare?

Suchi: what is this?

Lechu: nothing, mom made her prchanse while coming, and dad made his purchase little bigger as he got an assistant with him

Sammy coming near: ye, don't try to put cockroch in my meals ok. Somehow I am trying hard to change this tiger into a rabbit and you

Lechu softly: so now he is tiger, earlier you said Hitler

Sammy: Lechu, I said that only once right, and that applied when I mentioned how he is at the office but generally he is ...

Suchi: what you both are talking about

Sammy suddenly changing the topic: no mom, so are you going to keep everything in this room only!

Suender: no Sammy, let them come, and let chudki only pick the one she likes

Lechu: and the rest

Sammy: you can have it

Lechu: Sammy

Suchi: Lechu

The phone rang at the Delhi house and Lechu ran to pick it up

Suchi ran behind her: maybe it is Sushma, she told me Radhika and Chudki is there at haweli, now I can't wait to get them here, no need to wait till namakaran, we can have that here

Then looking at Sammy: come, I will make coffee, ok and thne looking at Lechu: if it is Sushma, tell her I will call back later ok.

But Lechu was standing silently

Suchi paused: lechu

She didn't reply

Suchi walked near to Lechu: Lechu who is it?

She just stood there listening

Surender was coming out from hs room

Sammy also noticed the color change in Lechu's face

Suchi went and took the reciever from Lechu"s hand and said: hello

Mohan: ha Suchi bahan, so now Sushma is regaining the consciousness, Dev is busy getting things, and we all are around. Babuji is here too.

Suchi tightening her forehead: what, I did not get it, what happened to sushma?

Surender came in : who

Suchi: vo Mohan bhayya, he is saying something , I am not getting it, he is saying Sushma gaining consciousness, what something... ha, dev is there, Babuji is there, I don't know

Sammy suddenly took the reciever from Suchi: Babuji, Sammy here,

Mohan: Sammy, one second, let me give to Dev

Soon Sammy took charge of the desperate Bhatt family , and made few calls to his near ones and within an hour he took the driver's seat, leading the family to the hospital.

Surender was trying to clarify with sammy while Suchi was in phone with Rohini

Rohini: ha , it was all fine, but then Rahdika heard a loud voice and when she went down to check she saw Sushma on the floor, and by luck Dev and babuji also came to the scene at the right time. Dev and babuji took sushma right away to the hospital. Radhika and chudki is here. I am getting ready to leave to hospital, Radhika's babuji is coming to pick me up.

Suchi: we will be there soon too. Sammy is with us. So

Rohini: ha, vo,

Suchi: is it the first time happening?

Rohini: I think so, Radhika's babuji is here, let me go ok, I will call you back once I get to the hospital.

The Bhatt family shared their thoughts while Sammy tried to make the situation light by stressing the presence of Dev and Radhika's babuji near by.

Back at the hospital:

Sushma was slowly opening her eyes, and she saw the blurred image of her babuji sitting near to her. Soon the vision got clear and she met his concerned eyes. With a smile she said: did I scare you babuji

Yeshpal tried to bring his voice out, and he cleared his throat once, but the lump did not move...

Sushma: babuji, don't give me that look, I am simply fine, I want to see my strong babuji back

Yeshpal: ha, but then a tear drop rolled down his cheek: but how long I can show that strength. My strength is you and if...

Sushma again with a smile: Babuji

Yeshpal: I am trying to bring the smile because I don't want to leave you alone in this big house, and you are giving me that smile back to give me that strength. Why didn't you tell me when you were not feeling well beta

Sushma: babuji, it is not just me, you also hide it from me , right?

Babuji: beta

Sushma: I know, I can make it from your face, I understood it, so only I did not ask you much. You don't want to ruin the happy moment in our life, right?

Yeshpal looked at her: beta

Sushma: me too babuji, after how many years I am seeing the smile, I am seeing the happiness around, if athma exist then I am sure my mom's athma will be the happiest seeing her son back, his lovely family, his son Dev and his pothi. I still feel it like a dream babuji

Yeshpal: but then what happned now

Sushma: nothing babuji, the black smoke of our past just tried to swallow me, and for that one moment I lost myself

Yeshpal: but it took hours to come back

Sushma: I know babuji, this time it left me for hours, but still it returned back to be near you.

Yeshpal: don't leave me beta, I can't

Sushma with a smile: babuji, how can I leave you now, when we have our chudki nearby, when our Dev is with us all the time, how can I leave , I want to live in this happy moment too babuji, just like you want to.

Suddenly they heard the foot steps, and went in silent

Nurse: I called the doctor, he is coming in

Sushma: can you ask him to discharge me today itself

Nurse: today! Don't know when doctor comes, you only talk to him.

Nurse: is your grandson is back, I send him to bring some medicines

Suddenly Dev jerked his head, and then walked in from behind those curtains, holding the medicne bottles in hand

Nurse: there you are

Dev shook again: ji

Sushma: oh Dev what is the need for all these, anyway we are leaving na, poor radhika and chudki, they maybe waiting for us, how could you leave them alone and come like this,

Trying to get up form the bed: you should have sprinkled some water over my face

Dev: we did

Sushma sat back to bed with her weaker body, and she found how badly her hand is chained to that plastic tubes

Sushma: oh my God, what's going on? what is the need for all these? You should have poured a bucket full of water on my face, than bringing me here

Dev: ji

Sushma: what ji, come now let's go

Dev: dad and all is coming

Sushma: you told them too!! Why? I am fine beta, I was standing near that firepit, that when it got little added fuel, it just suffocated me little bit, that is it. For that you called your dad.

By then the doctor came in.

Dev and Yeshpal walked out from the room. Dev was extremly silent, suddenly he noticed the waddling gait of his dadaji as he took his steps outside the room

Dev just held him by his shoulder and then helped him to stand straight.

His dadaji stood for few seconds to regain his strength, and then looked into Dev's eyes thanking him silently

Dev did not say anything, but helped him to move further , near to a chair. Yeshpal sat there with weaker body, Dev stood next to him, but then he noticed his dadaji's forehead sweatting lvery badly.

Dev sat on his knee: Dadaji , areyou ok, Buva will be fine.

Dadaji looked into Dev's eyes helplessly and said: I thought I am strong, but her one fall, made me to realize how old I am, and how weak I am

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thanks for reading my post, will meet you on monday here.. for now have a good weekend.

Devika

:)

Part 135 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45347624

Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
di superb updates di...so shushma's mystery going to reveal...I think there isa connection malathi and shshma...what can be...
thanks di lovely update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very well written dear,i liked it! Sushma and her dad are so weak and sensitive...now that this happened everyone will ask whts up...so then priya/malathi story will be out...eagerly waiting for their reaction! What i liked the most is how the baby is affected all the family so positiveky and sweet, dev's dad and his dreams was too cute...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Devika.

thanks.. ye you only asked for that baby time ,r ight.. so i am happy if you liked it...i don't think rahdika will be knowing surender's past, then alathi herself should ahve told her, malathi a her present state is detached form all these relationships, that is why she was able to face suchi without any mental disturbance. and she treated radhika and dev also well, becasue her charactor grown beyond the shocking status, but Radhika's assumption was right, even though sushma diverted it..
but now the album will bring out another connection, which i scrubbed on for past episodes... maybe i mentioned but now dev will see it with his eyes.. so let see hwot hat will come out. also there is chance for dev to know surender's past, but in case, then it will stay within him, it won't be a talk or discussion for later in his mind. let se how that will come out..
yes the bridge, i am building it, with all your support, so ask me, so that i can clarify myself why i wrote it that way.. because the visuals are in my mind i am just copying it back here,... so thank you so much..
:)



You are really increasing my curiosity---I keep trying to remember the seeds you threw along the way. Now they are germinating---yes Malathi's story was Malathi's flashback----and she has left her past behind and achieved that peace within herself to be able to not have that sadness or resentment towards anything or anyone...(very few achieve that)...

But now I am wondering "what was Radhika's assumption?...and what is Dev going to unravel--now I have to go back and the past episodes to see if I can unravel the mystery before you bring it out for us...
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Posted: 14 years ago
So Sushma's past caught with her--the black smoke of memories, things she had tucked away in that uncleaned storeroom...

As I said earlier, there are only a few people who can "forget" the past---for most it is pushed to a corner, just to surface...In case of Sushma, the picture in the album triggered the chain of reaction---

Sushma's health and Dadji's worsening health -will that have an influence on Dev? Radhika's disappearance brought Dev from US to India and now will this have an effect on his future plans?????????

And what is the story of Malati/ Priya and what is the connection to Sushma? Does that have to do with why Sushma also never married----

You are taking us down this winding road, full of mystery---

Waiting to read more-------------
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Posted: 14 years ago
Interesting Update
Those all are happening which is related to Sushma...
can't wait for next part...
Looking forward to see more...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Well wrritten !! waiting for the next...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update, waiting for the mystery to unfold..
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Posted: 14 years ago
This mystrey is leading to where -waiting to know..

Once this mystery comes out who will be effecting more..

Interesting Devika...
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update spcily luv asrampart ...dis part add xtra buty in whole story ...where we forgot ..u remind us those valuable moments...rad spend...n den creat mystri wid malati...where our thought end ur began...dis iz a creativity of a gr8 writer...one name have my mind...J.K.ROWLING ...who creats d magic of Hary poter's world...u made such a dream world of AVINA...realy we lost in dis world
again tnx alot...

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