OS...Love Beyond Pains..updated final part page 14 - Page 9

awesome update
i m so sad that it is finished write some more

beautiful ending
finally maan got back his memory

wonderful ending

wow !!!!!!!! awesome ... superb ...

Originally posted by: piya-

Today u left me speechless...

What a piece of writing this was...fantabulous, magnificent and totally out of this world👏

U portrayed each n every emotion so beautifully n i really appreciate that u did not make sameera negative...n at the same time dadima ne bhi sameera ko maaf kar diya

the feelings that geet was going through was beautifully written...i mean i could actually visualize and feel her pain through your writing

she was actually going through a mixed set of emotions

happiness...coz she found maan n she was pregnant

sad... coz she coudn't stay with maan...her life...n at the same time could not reveal her true identity to him...

belief...that one day true love will win and maan will recollect his memory

I really appreciate this work Silky... this was totally out of this world

Regarding maan... i felt bad for him wo andar hi andar ghut raha tha...but finally loved their reunion

U have written that this is d end of ur story but i will say this is a new start...

N next time u r going to write an FF...n u will listen to me if u really consider me to b ur friend

love-Piya

Originally posted by: piya-

Today u left me speechless...

What a piece of writing this was...fantabulous, magnificent and totally out of this world👏

U portrayed each n every emotion so beautifully n i really appreciate that u did not make sameera negative...n at the same time dadima ne bhi sameera ko maaf kar diya

the feelings that geet was going through was beautifully written...i mean i could actually visualize and feel her pain through your writing

she was actually going through a mixed set of emotions

happiness...coz she found maan n she was pregnant

sad... coz she coudn't stay with maan...her life...n at the same time could not reveal her true identity to him...

belief...that one day true love will win and maan will recollect his memory

I really appreciate this work Silky... this was totally out of this world

Regarding maan... i felt bad for him wo andar hi andar ghut raha tha...but finally loved their reunion

U have written that this is d end of ur story but i will say this is a new start...

N next time u r going to write an FF...n u will listen to me if u really consider me to b ur friend

love-Piya

well piya thanku so much for ur encouraging comments...really means a lot to me...i swear...well i just wrote what came in my mind...without thinking...i just kept on typing and finally i posted that...!!
now coming to the ff part i dont have that caliber to write a complete fiction...ur my dear friend but please mujhe dharam sankat mein mat dalna...after my ss it will be end of my writing...!!!
but once again thanku so much dear for trusting me...🤗

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

i too have been saying this for long time now

abhi ss uska chal raha hai

but we want ff silky

hope ul listen to us😃

sai please yar...tuje pata hai i dont have that caliber to write ff...i started writing because of u...u insisted so i wrote my first OS...u insisted so i started with a ss...and then u insisted me to post this OS on GF ...i did that...ab or nahin yar...please...!!!
writing ff's is not my cup of tea...!!!
sorry guys...please forgive me for that...so sorry...!!!

Originally posted by: minnie_tweetie

well piya thanku so much for ur encouraging comments...really means a lot to me...i swear...well i just wrote what came in my mind...without thinking...i just kept on typing and finally i posted that...!!
now coming to the ff part i dont have that caliber to write a complete fiction...ur my dear friend but please mujhe dharam sankat mein mat dalna...after my ss it will be end of my writing...!!!
but once again thanku so much dear for trusting me...🤗