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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Gals_11
awesome update yaar.. dis is getting interesting.. so d raichands r back to dehradun..gr8.. continue soon.. thanx for d pm..lol.

Thnx a lot dear😊😊😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan
It was amazing Shrish... really happy you have turned it into a FF... 😃
I can see you will bring a different shade to the character of Abhi...looking forward to read more...please carry on... love u 🤗

Thnx tanzie.U r happy & every1 is shouting on my head 2 update soon.Today i jst updated & they wnt more😆😆.Ofcourse now u'll get 2 c Abhay through my eyes.Ya i WILL CARRY IT.

LUV U TOO🤗

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: zoozoo123
Srishti...Lobed it yaar...Touched my heart..Jo sirf Abhay ke liye res hai...😆😆😆...2nd Update nhi dikha ..which page is it...Jaldi se Abhiya ko aamne saamne lao...n Jaldi se update karo...n pm me...apne comments se tumhara sir khane aaya karungi...😆😆😆...

Thnx vidya.I m pleased.2nd part is on 1st pg only.U have 2 wait 4 tht.Ya sure I'll add u in my frnd list😊.Khao main tumhara khaongi😆😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: pari_smart
Superb update... loved it... I hope Abhiya meet soon and thanks for not adding birdie in this ff... And thanks for adding CWB I am his fan too... Waiting for next update... thanks for the PM

Thnx a lot.I'll try 2 update soon😊

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vijayata123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

super awesome update!👏 Does Abhi knows abt his past n PiA??? Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: heena_mehta
nooo i m so late ...

bt koi nai ...coming to d point...shrish ,outstanding...u av done a fantabulous job...ur ff is so lively...i m loving this new abhay like nything, his so damn wowww...abhay ko itna serious dekh dekh ke pkyek me, nw its so refreshing to look him like this...oh GOD i cn't wait for abhay-pia's first meeting..n misha n abhay's grandma i m specially looking forward to their role specially after abhay -pia's obviously😉...ab jaldi bta nxt part kab post kar rahi hai...

i cn't wait...

luv u🤗

Chal koi nahi.Thnx a lot heena.Oh I m pleased.Evn I wnt 2 c Abhay lke dis so I did it through my FF.U have 2 wait 4 Abhiya meeting.Its not misha & abhay's grand ma.But tashi & Abhay's grandma.U have 2 wait 2 c every1's bonding😉

Luv u too🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Vivilaciouss_me
Shristi da idea f ur ff is just mind blowing..too gud..its gud dat u made it an ff..n dis 3rd chaptr ws amazing! Wana read more n more! Plz update soon..cnt wait fr da nxt!

P.s. Hey pm me plz!!

Thnx a lot dear.Ohh but ppl r eating my head 2 update soon.I'll try 2 update soon.Ok I m adding u in buddy list😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Deepi20
Super awesome update! Can't wait till Abhi and Piya come face to face! Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

Thnx a lot.U have 2 wait 4 tht😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: pkyek55
super awesome update!👏 Does Abhi knows abt his past n PiA??? Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

Ur all question will b answered in my FF.Thnx a lot😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 4

Khanna family departed 4 their mansion while Raichands departed 4 Dobriyal's mansion.

Khanna's Mansion

Abhi entered his house all lost suddenly Tashi pushed him hard.Abhi came out of his dreamland & ran behind her.Both sis-bro were busy baeting each other,teasing each other.Finally Mrs Khanna have 2 pull their ears 2 stop their childish behavior.

Mrs Khanna:Wht the hell u guys r doing?Come on u both r elder now & Tashi ur bro jst came 2day only & u started irritating him.

Tashi: y u always support bro.I sometime doubt whether I m real daughter or not?

Abhi(teasing her):How many Times I told u v brought u frm hospital's dustbin

Tashi:Dad luk wht bro is saying?

Mr Khanna:Hey Abhi don't say anything 2 my princess

Abhi:I guess dad aapko mistake hua hai.U r calling a witch as princess(winking)

Mr Khanna: Tashi give me tht stick frm which I used 2 beat Abhi in childhood

Abhi luks at his mom with puppy face

Mrs Khanna:Don't u dare beat my baccha.(Luking at Abhi)Oh baby no one will beat uAbhi hugged his mom

Tashi:Don't worry dad I m wid u

Abhi:Hhah whtever me & mom always win

Grandma interrupting in b/w.Bas bhi karo.Our bacha jst came he must bhi hungry.

Abhi:Yes sexy I m so hungry.

Dadi pulls his ear & makes him sit in dinning table

Abhi: Y everybody is behind my ears

Radhika(Mrs Khanna) serve him food

Abhi: hmm mom food is delicious.How much I missed ur hand food

Radhika: Toh aur lo na bacha.Kitna patla ho gaya

Tashi: U r calling him patla Mom.Look at his tummy

Abhi:Oye blind.I have one of the hottest body & luk at my 6 abs.Gals die 4 me

Tashi:Mom look at ur lovingly son if he can say so much infront of u.Wht he must have done at ur back in London(😉)

Abhi: Shut up u kubri manthra(old lady in ramayan who used 2 bharkao kakyi).Mom trust me ur Abhi is as pavitra as Ganga

Tashi: Oye bro Ganga maili ho gayi paapiyo k paap dhote dhote😆

Abhi:Toh sure toh nahane gayi hogi tabhi maili ho gayi😉

Radhika: Shut up both of u.Tashi let him enjoy now as soon as his dream will come.She will tie him wid her pallu jst lke a puppy😆

Tashi: Oh mom thts grt.I can evn imagine him as puppy & a collar in his neck & my bhabhi holding the rope haha🤣

Abhi: Shut up u moti.Waise u imagined me as puppy evn imagined ur bhabhi so tell me is she hot?😉

Tashi:Bro u really a jerk

Abhi: Thnx 4 the complement my darling chudail sis

Both ran after each other throwing pillows & cushions at each other

At Dobriyal House

Pia reached Dobriyal house wid her mom-dad(Chandeena).As soon as Misha saw thm she jumped wid excitement.She hugged Pia so tightly tht Pia was feeling suffocated.

Pia:Leave me Misha u r killing wid ur hug

Misha(winking):If I m not wrong v r already dead.

Pia: haha U & ur private stupid jokesMr Dobriyal comes & hug Pia

Mr Dobriyal:Pia my beta missed u so much.Dont u have time 2 meet ur papa.How r u?

Pia Was emotional but being vampire tears were not coming frm her eyes

Pia:Papa I missed u a lot.I m f9 Mom-dad r taking grt care of me

Mr Dobriyal gave a weak smile 2 Chand & haseena

Madhu came & joined thm she too hugged Pia

Misha took Pia 2 her room away frm every1

Misha:Hey Pia I missed u a lot

Pia:I missed u too

Misha: Hey Pia u still seems sad come on forget him.I m sure even he wnts 2 c u happy

Pia:U r saying 2 forget him. How can a heart 4get his heartbeat, how can body forget it's soul so how can Pia forgets Abhay(tears roll down frm her eyes.Only Abhay had the power 2 make impossible possible.He made a vampire cry)

Misha: but atleast try 2 b happy not 4 us but 4 him.Ok let me tell u 2morrow my frnd Tashi's bro will celebrate his b'day & u'll come wid me

Pia: No misha u know I hate parties.I wnt 2 leave alone

Misha: No excuse.U r coming.Khannas r rich ppl I m sure they will invite Raichands also

Pia: Oh I'll think.

After one hour of chat Raichands leave 2 their house.

At night(Abhi's room) Abhi was sitting alone thinking something.Radhika enters

Radhika:Wht happen son?

Abhi: nothing Mom.Mom r u sure I came here 4 1st time?😕

Radhika: Yes,Y son?

Abhi: oh nothing jst lke tht

Radhika: Comeon beta u can tell me I m ur mom

Abhi(Smiling): Mom I dont know y but I feel I have been here b4.On my way 2 house I saw jungle & it was pulling me.I feel tht I knew tht jungle 2 well.Something is here which is pulling me.I dont know wht but it is strong.

Radhika(bit worried): aisa kuch nahi hai sometime v do feel lke dis.U go 2 sleep I guess its an effect of long journey.

Abhi:I guess u r right

Radhika worriedly thinking was astrologers prediction coming true?

Abhi tried 2 forget everything.He tried 2 sleep but was unable 2 sleep.He was to excited 4 his 18th b'day.

Abhi 2 himself:Jst 15 more minutes & I'll turn 18 yay.I m sure my family will wish me 1st.12'O clock they will wake me & will wish me.I shuld act as if I m sleeping so he goes 2 bed

Pia's room

Pia saw everything in room wid her mist eyes missing Abhay badly

Flashback

Pia was fuming wid anger

Pia(😡):Abhay dont u dare come 2 me.U will sleep at left side & I'll sleep at right side

Abhay: Pia.Its jst 2nd day after our marriage & u r already fighting wid me.

Pia: Oh so u mean I start fight.C u r showing ur true colour after our marriage.😭

Abhay: arey baba dont cry I m sorry(holding his ears).My princess I cant c u cry & wht ur side & my side comeon v both belong 2 same side

Pia: Keep ur chessy dialogs wid u.And stay away

Abhay without listening her jst pick her up & lay her down in bed.

Abhay: My jaan somebody ever told u how sexy u luk whn u gets angry

Pia: And somebody told u how idiotic u luk wid ur stupid dialogs

Abhay pull her closer & kiss her hard.He was all over her .Soon Pia's gave up her anger melt she wrap him around her arms.They both were kissing each other passionately continuously(Blur😉) I m bad at writing romantic scenes so spare me😉😆😆

Clock strike at 12 midnight

Pia near window looks at sky

Its exactly been 18 years since u left us Abhay.Ur Pia is so dead.Ohh how I wish I can b wid u.Plz come back have some mercy on me.Ur Pia is craving 4 u,calling 4 u.Are u listening(Tears roll down).

On other hand Abhi suddenly wake up wid jerk.He stand near window & luk at the same sky

Y I m feeling so restless?Y my I feel as if someone very special calling me?Y my heart suddenly sinks.(Tears were coming out of his eyes & he was confused y😕)

Same wind was caressing both.It was touching Pia 1st & thn whisppering in Abhi's ears & thn touching Abhi & whispering in Pia's end.The smell of their divine love was making atmosphere happy

Episode khatam.Both were shown in same frame.One side Pia was luking at sky wid mist eyes on other hand Abhi was luking at sky wid mist eyes.

Precap: Abhi will go 2 Raichand mansion

Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago