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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -vodkatiny-

Baba, I put both the parts together so that its easier for me to write and share what I feel about the entire part..I just finished watching the episode so kindly pardon me if I get too senti.. cos the episode just swept me away and took me to a land where I am a stranger! I am very dazed, but I want to reply to your part today itself !!!

Arnav will never let Khushi shed a tear as long as he is with and around her, and even if a she shed them, like in the case of deewars, he thinks even her tears are his haq and he wont let anyone else share them, not even the ground in this case!!ufff .. aisa aap ne nahi kaha hai baba, par main trance main chali gayi hoon' even todays episode, the way he gently wiped her tears'. I was a goner! Anyway back to your scene, what was most moving was, this girl thrives on this man's happiness, when she see's him happy she is happy too!! In that sense she is selfish for the sake of her love, and selfless too .. and this combination is what makes Arnav want to love her and protect her more since he totally understands this woman and the way she functions!! I love this baba.. totally !!!

Once again, I am floored by the way you manage to understand the characters in my stories better than me! 👏 Aapke analysis ko humara salaam!
The mother wanted to show the son how proud she was of him and hence wore the saree he has sent her. Mothers are so sweet na, they do these little things to show off how small gestures from children mean the world to them. Along with the mother I got emotional too !!! Savita auntyji is a darling and I already love her from before, now I love her more !!
I'm so pleased that you liked the character of Savita! I wanted to show her as a absolute sweetheart!! 😳
This conversation had multiple emotions in them. There was an unsaid, exchange of words that signify the graveness of the issue that both the mother and the sun are tying to brush under the carpet but miserably failing to. What would have gone so wrong that Arnav the son of the house was compelled to leave the house and the mother couldn't control or stop his moving out. Even post his exit from the Shessh Mahal it is pretty evident that the rapport between the mother and the son has remained intact and they have made sure things have gotten better. I don't know what compelled him to return now, but it has to be something major for Arnav to have returned, gotten emotional as well as put aside the bygones !!! Vodkatiny needs a peg !!and then the buzz would give her some food for thought
Once again the depth of your analysis and the understanding within it has left me speechless! 😃
Lage rahiye Vodku - aise hi lage rahiye! 😆
So was Khushi the reason for Arnavs going away? Was he responsible for her accident? Are the raizada's guilty of hurting this little girl? Well the rapport seems more than just guilt and sympathy ' they treat her like family' Auntyji knows of their relationship and also approves of it ' But why did she purse her lips' erm'. Khushi doesn't know why Arnav had to leave three years ago??? Baba, you are getting me even the more tensed now 'even 3 shots of vodka don't help !!! bahut naa insaafi hai re !!!
Baba - aur naa insaafi! 😲 Ho hi nahi sakta! 😆 I wanted to clear up why Savita purses her lips (sorry it wasn't clear!) I made her do this in order to show the fact that Savita is mock-angry at Khushi for touching her feet as she has been told by Savita not to do so! Hope this helps!! 😳

I could imagine Arnavs expression, a satisfied look on his face seeing two of his fav women bonding so well ' soch raha hoga .. chalo mere liye accha hai .. kam se kam TV serial waaley problems toh nahi hongi saas-bahu waaley '

😲 Aapko kaise pata Arnav saab yehi soch rahe the?! 🤣

Chalo main toh sochti hoon, Dhaka diya meano ne, toh kam se kam Arnav ki bahon main diya ' kahin aur karti toh uss maami ko main '' Serves her right, Arnav is not a man who doesn't observe, he clearly saw what happened, and he gave it back to her as well ' sorry ' again, my dimag'. When mami came, all tht was playing in my head was the bgs used for mami on the show !!!

OMG - aap bhi sorry bhol rahe ho?! Humari vocab se yeh shabd hata ke khud istemaal kar rahe ho?! 😡😡

She not only doesn't know what to talk where, this woman spits venom when she opens her mouth ya !! And whats with the apshagu n and all' din bhar gahr pe baithi yehi sab sentiments follow karti hogi ' she doesn't leave an opportunity to insult Khushi .. but I wonder if all this is harmless.. and if she talks all this, why cant one control her .. doesn't she have someone who would shut her up '.

Arre - ab Arnav aagaye hai na - Mami ko seedha yeh karenge 😆
Arnav is such a darling, he knew he couldn't repair the damage once he was done, he atleast let her know, all these sentiments mean nothing to him, as long as he had herr, and as though to show the same he instantly grabbed her arm!! I love the way this man is so protective of Khushi, even when it comes to guarding her against his own family. Khushi may not have told him she was hurt, but he gauged the same and acted in time!! A stitch in time saves nine '..

I'm so glad you liked the way Arnav reacted!! The protective instinct he feels towards Khushi is a major factor in HD!!

Haye Arnav ke iss stubborn childish yet determined tone pe main mar jawan '.

NAHINNN! Mariye mat! 😳
'Beta, lagta hai ki videsh mein reh kar tum apne sanskaar bhool chuke ho. Apne barhon se aise Wah wah !! itne chote umar main itne bhale vichaar '. Taaliyan ' taaliyan ' !!!do you speak outta personal experience? Are you a rebel child baba???
Arre nahin nahin rebel nahin! 😳

Awww the love and the warmth in this house, just makes me wanna be a part of it myself .. it has so much love, so much nostalgia and so much of apna-pan !! baba baad main batana, how do you imagine and visualise these things in your head ? I am very curious to know how you set all this up !!! brilliant is the word cos you write it here and I see it there in my head with my minds eye

I'm so touched by this comment Vodku! Ek din aaram se aapko zarur bataungi ke yeh ideas kahan se aate hain humare paagal dimaag mein! 😉
Arnav turned around to see Kaka standing behind him.

Okay with the oak doors et all, I pictured the sheesh mahal and I imagined Arnav walk in and exclaim as he saw the little bungle joy!! What a surprise ' yeh badey kamal ki family hai ' love em !!!Arnav and the baby ' this man is such a family man !! love that about him '..

I'm glad you got that Arnav is a family man! This will again be an important feature of him in HD!! 😃
My heart went out to the two of them since I am very attached to my siblings myself and cannot imagine living without them myself .. the times I have tried have been extremely hard 'so this bit got me super emotional Baba' aapko dil ke wo taar choone ki aadat hai, jissey sabse emotional baatein judi ho .. not done na baba '.not fair '.😛
I know how you feel! 😊 Aur Bar aur humare FFs mein sab fair hai vodku 🤣

Awww'this is sooo cute !!!! mujhe Arnav jaisa koi cute sa ladka laado na Baba, aise characters ko create karoge toh humare raaton ki neend khara nahi hogi toh kya hogi '..

Arre don't worry - Baba kuch jadoo chalte hain! 😆

Baba, I read the entire part again, and I realised through the two -parts, you smoothly established the Raizada house hold and some of its characters and the mystery element in the story ... the behaviour of the family, each of them had a story to tell in itself .. and I love the way you have intertwined the past with present with just subtle gestures and actions making the protagonists involved in some way or the other ' the new element in the form of the baby, could become a weak element in the story as Arnav has taken to her/so easily '. I know my mamas are very fond of me, I can imagine how Arnav will dote on her !! waiting to see what happens next baba !!!


Baba you never cease to surprise or amaze me come what may ...


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aap aisa karte kyun ho Baba ...!!!

Sorry abt the kanjoosi with the emote icons, i had typed this on word !!!😳

Dost kabhi kanjoosi nahi karte Vodku! And you and Monz have always given me more praise and love than I deserve! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Edited by mohini4u - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: queenofhearts01


Once again, I am floored by the way you manage to understand the characters in my stories better than me! 👏 Aapke analysis ko humara salaam!

well, its like a partnership deal !!! aap likhte ho toh mera dimaag kaam karta hai .. aur fir aap aisa react karte ho...🤣 is mutual appreciation society ko main kya naam doon ???😳

I'm so pleased that you liked the character of Savita! I wanted to show her as a absolute sweetheart!! 😳

and she has turned out to be as well...you have succeed Baba👍🏼 aur maine Nicks ke comment se savita aunty ka face bhi dekh liya ...and i instantly smiled since, she has such a pleasant face...!!!its now going to be easier to love her more be-jhijak ...❤️
Once again the depth of your analysis and the understanding within it has left me speechless! 😃
Lage rahiye Vodku - aise hi lage rahiye! 😆

Lagey Raho ... ka zamana ab kab ka beet chuka .. Ab Amerika chulne ki baari hai ... Baba ... aap likhenge nahi toh, hum analyse karenge kahan se .. aisa socho ke agar aap badal ho toh hum barsaat .. 😛 pehle aap garjo .. fir hum barsenge ...🤣🤪
Baba - aur naa insaafi! 😲 Ho hi nahi sakta! 😆 I wanted to clear up why Savita purses her lips (sorry it wasn't clear!) I made her do this in order to show the fact that Savita is mock-angry at Khushi for touching her feet as she has been told by Savita not to do so! Hope this helps!! 😳

oh !!! aur main kahin dooor dooor dooor chali gayi apne analysis ka note book aur pen leke ... kabhi kabhi aise reality checke dete rahiyega baba ...😳

😲 Aapko kaise pata Arnav saab yehi soch rahe the?! 🤣

Arnav ke baare main hum nahi jaanenge toh kya aap jaanoge ...🤣 arey woh humara on-screen pyaar hai for the time being .. and its always good know and stay informed of what slowly kills you na baba !! 🤢😉

OMG - aap bhi sorry bhol rahe ho?! Humari vocab se yeh shabd hata ke khud istemaal kar rahe ho?! 😡😡

duh !!! aapke vocab se issi liye hataya taake hum usey bejhijak istemaal kar sake haina ...🤣haha .. sorry sorry !!! errr... sorry nahi ... 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Khush ?????????😳

Arre - ab Arnav aagaye hai na - Mami ko seedha yeh karenge 😆
Nafrat ko bhi pyaar se jeeta ja sakta hai baba.. aur mujhe toh lagta hai ... Mami ji ke liye Arnav ji ka sarcasm hi kaafi hai ...only if she gets it that is ..🤣😉

I'm so glad you liked the way Arnav reacted!! The protective instinct he feels towards Khushi is a major factor in HD!!

yes and thats what we love the most about the men we love dont we, the way they are protective towards us, we grow up being protected by our fathers, we think its our right and hence take it for granted, then when someone in a theater tries to act smart with you your brothers protective instinct kicks in..you feel your brother has grown up !!!! however, when a lover does it for you the feeling is totally different Baba ...😍 aur uspe ASR !!!! mujhe goli se maarne ke saare plans aur ammuntions tayar karke aaye hai lagta hai Baba aap toh ...waise i dont mind ...!!!😛😉🤢

NAHINNN! Mariye mat! 😳

arey arey ... itni jaldi kahan ... abhi toh aapka itna kaam dekhna baaki ... aapka sar khaana baaki hai !!! aur most importantly ... abhi toh main jawan hoon 😉 strong hoon, aur har roz boost peeti hoon!! i am here to stay 😛
Arre nahin nahin rebel nahin! 😳
😆😆😆 aap kehte hai toh maanna hi padega na ... well mannered child ...finger on the lips types ...🤣

I'm so touched by this comment Vodku! Ek din aaram se aapko zarur bataungi ke yeh ideas kahan se aate hain humare paagal dimaag mein! 😉

will wait for that day with all my ❤️ baba ...😍
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I'm glad you got that Arnav is a family man! This will again be an important feature of him in HD!! 😃
i totally love family men !!! very apna types... since aap dono ne filmy-pan ki baat kar ki hai, toh main apne wish list bhi thama deti hoon aapke saamne .., gaane, colorful sherwaanis, kurta pyjamas, ghar ka naashta, bachpan ka jhoola ... nani ke saath masti ..ma ka godh main sar rakh ke sona ...behen ko tang karna .. well well .. the list is endless ... umeed karti hoon, kabhi na kabhi kahin na kahin in sab ki jhalak dikh jaaye ...😛
I know how you feel! 😊 Aur Bar aur humare FFs mein sab fair hai vodku 🤣

very smart !!!!!😉 and point taken ...🤣

Arre don't worry - Baba kuch jadoo chalte hain! 😆

haye ... sacchi ...😳 ❤️❤️ my heart is beating, keep sound repeating ... i am waiting for him ...rabba vey ... rabba vey .. rabaaa vey ...😆😉☺️ fir mat poochna ... maine kab kaha tha ...🤣

Baba, I read the entire part again, and I realised through the two -parts, you smoothly established the Raizada house hold and some of its characters and the mystery element in the story ... the behaviour of the family, each of them had a story to tell in itself .. and I love the way you have intertwined the past with present with just subtle gestures and actions making the protagonists involved in some way or the other ' the new element in the form of the baby, could become a weak element in the story as Arnav has taken to her/so easily '. I know my mamas are very fond of me, I can imagine how Arnav will dote on her !! waiting to see what happens next baba !!!


Baba you never cease to surprise or amaze me come what may ...


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aap aisa karte kyun ho Baba ...!!!

Sorry abt the kanjoosi with the emote icons, i had typed this on word !!!😳

Dost kabhi kanjoosi nahi karte Vodku! And you and Monz have always given me more praise and love than I deserve! 🤗

and you have given us happiness without asking for it, and showered love like you always knew us, loved and we always belonged together ...

aapne pehle jawab nahi diya ... fir se poochti hoon ... Iss mutual appreciation society ko main kya naam doon?

Get well soon Baba darling ...!!!!

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issey bhi zyada jhappis aur non geeli puppies ...!!!aur ... many many pyaars dil se ...

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Edited by -vodkatiny- - 14 years ago
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Thank you! 😆
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omfg !! haah read it for the first time plz pm me ! this is good! plz PM
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omfg !! haah read it for the first time plz pm me ! this is good! plz PM

Thank you so much! 😃
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Recap: Arnav's smile grew wider and he instantly turned towards the little bundle of joy and went and gently lifted his niece into his arms. Arnav was overwhelmed by the sheer joy and pride he felt after looking at the small bundle in his arms. He tenderly kissed the baby girl's forehead and rubbed his nose against hers whilst murmuring - in a voice laced with joy, pride and affection
'Meri bhaanji.'.
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Part 6
'Haavayein layi hain mohobbat ke paigaam, suniye Humari Daastan'
Anjali laughed and walked upto Arnav,
'Surprise kaisa laga?' she asked, with a twinkle in her eyes.
Arnav turned to look at his Di,
'Itni khushi mehsoos ho rahi hai ki main bata bhi nahi sakta Di!' he exclaimed excitedly,
'Lekin aapne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya?' Arnav turned his face in mock anger.
Anjali smiled sweetly,
'Arre, aap vahan kaam kar rahe the, aapko bata dete toh aap sab chohd ke yahan aajate.' she explained.
Arnav turned back,
'Hmmm, theek hai. Lekin abse yeh meri hui theek hai - aapke time ho gaye iske saath.'
Anjali laughed at Arnav's comment,
'Theek hai chote - aap hi sambhalo ise.' she joked.
'Vaise Di - iske naam rakha hai kya?' Arnav asked whilst gazing down at the small bundle in his arms.
'Mamoo ke bina naam kaise rakhte?' Anjali replied.
Hearing this Arnav's smile grew extremely wide and he cooed at the baby,
'Yeh hui na baat. Aakhir mamoo ke bina, bhanji ka naam koi rakhke toh dikhaye!'
Anjali and Arnav both laughed and headed out to the living area to join Savita and Khushi.
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Savita and Khushi both smiled as they saw Arnav and Anjali come in with the baby in their arms.
'Chaunk gaye na?' Khushi teased Arnav making Anjali and Savita both laugh.
Arnav jokingly scowled at her,
'Tumhein toh main baad mein dekhoonga.' he teased back,
'Lekin Maa - apne bhi mujhe nahi bataya!'
Savita laughed lightly,
'Arre hum bata dete toh phir yeh khushi kaise dekhte tumhare chehra par?'
Arnav smiled, understanding the immense love his family had for him but his smile quickly changed into a frown when Anjali took his niece from him as she needed to feed her.
As Anjali left, Arnav began talking to his mother about all that he had seen and experienced abroad whilst both Savita and Khushi listened intently with proud expressions. Whilst Savita laughed and responded to Arnav's tales, Khushi sat silently admiring him and listening to him speak.
Just as Arnav was in the middle of a humorous anecdote, Kaka entered the room,
'Khaana lag gaya hai.' he announced.
An idea suddenly struck Savita,
'Kaka - aap Arnav aur Khushi ka khaana yahan le ayi. Yeh dono upar chaht pe khaa lenge.'
Khushi blushed and looked down whilst Arnav smiled his biggest smile and winked at his mother.
'Lekin aap Ma?' Khushi asked.
'Humein abhi bhook nahi hai Khushi.' Savita replied with a teasing look on her face.
Arnav then sprung up and engulfed his mother in a bear hug.
'I love you Ma!' he exclaimed.
Savita chuckled,
'Haan haan - ab maska mat lagao aur Khushi ko leke upar jao.'
Arnav bowed to show his agreement and took a crimson Khushi up the stairs to the balcony.
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As Arnav and Khushi reached the rooftop of the house, he removed his hand that had been supporting her from around her waist and opened the door leading to the roof. As Arnav busied himself in opening the door, Khushi started fiddling with her chunni - an old habit of hers that came out whenever she was nervous.
Arnav turned around and smiled upon seeing Khushi fiddling with her chunni, he stepped closer to her and whispered,
'Dar kyun lag raha hai - main tumhe nahin khaa jaoonga.' he asked with a mischevious smile.
Khushi smiled as she looked up into Arnav's eyes - becoming momentarily mesmerised by the sheer love she saw in them. Arnav's voice pulled her from her daze,
'Ab chaliye madam, peht mein poore ka poora zoo daud raha hai.'
Khushi laughed,
'Daht.' she scolded lovingly and they both stepped out onto the moonlit rooftop.
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So!! That was part 6 my lovlies! Hope you enjoyed it! Don't forget to leave your suggestions and views!
Love Always
Tina
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Superb Tina!!!... Can imagine Arnav being as ecstatic if he had a bhaanji in the show as you depicted in your work!!... A very cute piece!!.. Will IMPATIENTLY wait for ArHi's convo on the terrace... Arnav is so shararati in your piece, it feels as if his aatma has been replaced by Khushi!!

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
That is Pure Genius. Loved it to core. Do continue soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: queenofhearts01

Recap: Arnav's smile grew wider and he instantly turned towards the little bundle of joy and went and gently lifted his niece into his arms. Arnav was overwhelmed by the sheer joy and pride he felt after looking at the small bundle in his arms. He tenderly kissed the baby girl's forehead and rubbed his nose against hers whilst murmuring - in a voice laced with joy, pride and affection

'Meri bhaanji.'.
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Part 6
'Haavayein layi hain mohobbat ke paigaam, suniye Humari Daastan'

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Anjali laughed and walked upto Arnav,
'Surprise kaisa laga?' she asked, with a twinkle in her eyes.
Arnav turned to look at his Di,
'Itni khushi mehsoos ho rahi hai ki main bata bhi nahi sakta Di!' he exclaimed excitedly,
'Lekin aapne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya?' Arnav turned his face in mock anger.
Anjali smiled sweetly,
'Arre, aap vahan kaam kar rahe the, aapko bata dete toh aap sab chohd ke yahan aajate.' she explained.
Arnav turned back,
'Hmmm, theek hai. Lekin abse yeh meri hui theek hai - aapke time ho gaye iske saath.'
Anjali laughed at Arnav's comment,
'Theek hai chote - aap hi sambhalo ise.' she joked.
'Vaise Di - iske naam rakha hai kya?' Arnav asked whilst gazing down at the small bundle in his arms.
'Mamoo ke bina naam kaise rakhte?' Anjali replied.
Hearing this Arnav's smile grew extremely wide and he cooed at the baby,
'Yeh hui na baat. Aakhir mamoo ke bina, bhanji ka naam koi rakhke toh dikhaye!'
Anjali and Arnav both laughed and headed out to the living area to join Savita and Khushi.

this was such a sweet scene, i totally loved it, the bonding the love and the understanding between the sister and the brother was just adorable.. waise Baba kya naam socha hai ... Pari? Mishti? Kangan? Mahek? okay, my imagination is running wild, i will wait for you to break it ...😛
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Savita and Khushi both smiled as they saw Arnav and Anjali come in with the baby in their arms.
'Chaunk gaye na?' Khushi teased Arnav making Anjali and Savita both laugh.

randomness hai Vodka ka second naam!! ruin karke rakh de romance in Humari Daastan...😆
why i say this... well, when you said, chaunk gaye ..guess what i thought of???? NIRMA SUPER NEELI DETERGENT TIKIA ...🤣
Arnav jokingly scowled at her,
'Tumhein toh main baad mein dekhoonga.' he teased back,

wow !!! kya karega ... kya karega ...😉😛😳
'Lekin Maa - apne bhi mujhe nahi bataya!'
Savita laughed lightly,
'Arre hum bata dete toh phir yeh khushi kaise dekhte tumhare chehra par?'
Arnav smiled, understanding the immense love his family had for him but his smile quickly changed into a frown when Anjali took his niece from him as she needed to feed her.
As Anjali left, Arnav began talking to his mother about all that he had seen and experienced abroad whilst both Savita and Khushi listened intently with proud expressions. Whilst Savita laughed and responded to Arnav's tales, Khushi sat silently admiring him and listening to him speak.😉😆😳😍
Just as Arnav was in the middle of a humorous anecdote, Kaka entered the room,
'Khaana lag gaya hai.' he announced.
An idea suddenly struck Savita,
'Kaka - aap Arnav aur Khushi ka khaana yahan le ayi. Yeh dono upar chaht pe khaa lenge.'

kash meri maa bhi itni understanding hoti ... lekin ussey pehle Arnav mil jaaye ... haaye ...😍🤢
Khushi blushed and looked down whilst Arnav smiled his biggest smile and winked at his mother.

kabhi Alvida na kehna waala... you naughty ... naughty ... naughty boy .. with the hunter ...😛
'Lekin aap Ma?' Khushi asked.
'Humein abhi bhook nahi hai Khushi.' Savita replied with a teasing look on her face.
Arnav then sprung up and engulfed his mother in a bear hug.
'I love you Ma!' he exclaimed.

chance pe dance maar le .. oh soneya ... chance pe dance maar pe... haan .. chance pe... chance pe ...aaahnnn...aaa...aaa...aaa...aaa...aaan ... rab ne ...rab ne ...rab ne... Rab ne ... Bana di ... Jodi ... Haye ...

Oops !!! sorry ... song mode main chali gayi thi ...😉
Savita chuckled,
'Haan haan - ab maska mat lagao aur Khushi ko leke upar jao.'
Arnav bowed to show his agreement and took a crimson Khushi up the stairs to the balcony.
is he going to carry her ?😍
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As Arnav and Khushi reached the rooftop of the house, he removed his hand that had been supporting her from around her waist and opened the door leading to the roof. As Arnav busied himself in opening the door, Khushi started fiddling with her chunni - an old habit of hers that came out whenever she was nervous.

OMG ... ab finally dono akele akele .. main bhi Khushi ki tarah ..☺️ chunni fiddling ... bangles ke saath playing ... aur lastly ... looking around yahan wahan .. saara jahan ... stop making me live this moment in my head baba .. I hate you ... (like i love you 😛)
Arnav turned around and smiled upon seeing Khushi fiddling with her chunni, he stepped closer to her and whispered,
'Dar kyun lag raha hai - main tumhe nahin khaa jaoonga.' he asked with a mischevious smile.

shall refrain from abuse... but ... really !!! too much ... meri Khushi ko sata kyu raha hai ... bechari ... blush kar kar ke ...laal laal behaal ho jayegi ...😛
Khushi smiled as she looked up into Arnav's eyes - becoming momentarily mesmerised by the sheer love she saw in them. Arnav's voice pulled her from her daze,

loved the use of lines here Baba ... uska pyaar hi kaafi hai Khushi ke liye .. to make her drink like 7 lakes full of paani ... sorry thats a local saying ...🤣 how how how did he pull her ...dream land...!!!!😳
'Ab chaliye madam, peht mein poore ka poora zoo daud raha hai.'
Khushi laughed,
'Daht.' she scolded lovingly and they both stepped out onto the moonlit rooftop.

super duper cute baba!!!!
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So!! That was part 6 my lovlies! Hope you enjoyed it! Don't forget to leave your suggestions and views!
Love Always
Tina
xxx



baba did i ever tell you how much i lob you for making me smile on a sunday night at this odd hour .. if my mom walked into my room she wud think i am talking to my lover ... and wud think i have lost it if i sed i were reading an FF... jokes apart ... this part was short and sweet and i regret not asking you to continue ... cos if u wud have we would have gotten to perhaps see the much awaited ArShi Moment ... in the most divine possible way !!!!

Baba ... you are a rockstar...😉

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