Humari Daastan FF Updated Part 7B Page 40 - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago
My Ty - I can't stop smiling at your reply 🤣🤗❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi0809

Superb Tina!!!... Can imagine Arnav being as ecstatic if he had a bhaanji in the show as you depicted in your work!!... A very cute piece!!.. Will IMPATIENTLY wait for ArHi's convo on the terrace... Arnav is so shararati in your piece, it feels as if his aatma has replaced by Khushi!!

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much Mahi! 😳
Haha - I love your comment about Khushi's aatma going into Arnav! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hieverybody

That is Pure Genius. Loved it to core. Do continue soon!!

Thank you so much! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -vodkatiny-


this was such a sweet scene, i totally loved it, the bonding the love and the understanding between the sister and the brother was just adorable.. waise Baba kya naam socha hai ... Pari? Mishti? Kangan? Mahek? okay, my imagination is running wild, i will wait for you to break it ...😛

Ooo - you have some lovely ideas for names Vodku!! 👏

randomness hai Vodka ka second naam!! ruin karke rakh de romance in Humari Daastan...😆
why i say this... well, when you said, chaunk gaye ..guess what i thought of???? NIRMA SUPER NEELI DETERGENT TIKIA ...🤣
This is the most hilarious thing I have ever read - I'm crying with laughter right now!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
wow !!! kya karega ... kya karega ...😉😛😳

Intezaar karo shishye, intezaar 😆 😉

kash meri maa bhi itni understanding hoti ... lekin ussey pehle Arnav mil jaaye ... haaye ...😍🤢

Arnav bhi mil jayega don't worry! 😉 😃
kabhi Alvida na kehna waala... you naughty ... naughty ... naughty boy .. with the hunter ...😛

ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL


chance pe dance maar le .. oh soneya ... chance pe dance maar pe... haan .. chance pe... chance pe ...aaahnnn...aaa...aaa...aaa...aaa...aaan ... rab ne ...rab ne ...rab ne... Rab ne ... Bana di ... Jodi ... Haye ...

Oops !!! sorry ... song mode main chali gayi thi ...😉
Aapka song mode dekhe hum dance mode me chale gaye the! 😆 🥳
is he going to carry her ?😍

Maybe he will...Maybe he won't...😉


OMG ... ab finally dono akele akele .. main bhi Khushi ki tarah ..☺️ chunni fiddling ... bangles ke saath playing ... aur lastly ... looking around yahan wahan .. saara jahan ... stop making me live this moment in my head baba .. I hate you ... (like i love you 😛)
Hehe...I love you dedh sara too! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
shall refrain from abuse... but ... really !!! too much ... meri Khushi ko sata kyu raha hai ... bechari ... blush kar kar ke ...laal laal behaal ho jayegi ...😛

Tomato jaisi laal 😆

loved the use of lines here Baba ... uska pyaar hi kaafi hai Khushi ke liye .. to make her drink like 7 lakes full of paani ... sorry thats a local saying ...🤣 how how how did he pull her ...dream land...!!!!😳
Embarrassed Love your saying by the way! 😃
super duper cute baba!!!!
Glad you liked it Vodku!! Embarrassed



baba did i ever tell you how much i lob you for making me smile on a sunday night at this odd hour .. if my mom walked into my room she wud think i am talking to my lover ... and wud think i have lost it if i sed i were reading an FF... jokes apart ... this part was short and sweet and i regret not asking you to continue ... cos if u wud have we would have gotten to perhaps see the much awaited ArShi Moment ... in the most divine possible way !!!!

Baba ... you are a rockstar...😉

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No you're a rockstar!! 👏 I lob you for your comments more!!! Embarrassed Hehe I LOLd at the part about your mother walking in 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hamaare dilo ki raani... aaj ka hamara response to your episode, will only be in emoticons and images... hope you enjoy!!!! 😉

Originally posted by: queenofhearts01

Recap: Arnav's smile grew wider and he instantly turned towards the little bundle of joy and went and gently lifted his niece into his arms. Arnav was overwhelmed by the sheer joy and pride he felt after looking at the small bundle in his arms. He tenderly kissed the baby girl's forehead and rubbed his nose against hers whilst murmuring - in a voice laced with joy, pride and affection

'Meri bhaanji.'.
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Part 6
'Haavayein layi hain mohobbat ke paigaam, suniye Humari Daastan'
Anjali laughed and walked upto Arnav,
'Surprise kaisa laga?' she asked, with a twinkle in her eyes.
Arnav turned to look at his Di,
'Itni khushi mehsoos ho rahi hai ki main bata bhi nahi sakta Di!' he exclaimed excitedly,
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
'Lekin aapne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya?' Arnav turned his face in mock anger.

Anjali smiled sweetly,
'Arre, aap vahan kaam kar rahe the, aapko bata dete toh aap sab chohd ke yahan aajate.' she explained.
Arnav turned back,
'Hmmm, theek hai. Lekin abse yeh meri hui theek hai - aapke time ho gaye iske saath.'
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Anjali laughed at Arnav's comment,
'Theek hai chote - aap hi sambhalo ise.' she joked.
😉
'Vaise Di - iske naam rakha hai kya?' Arnav asked whilst gazing down at the small bundle in his arms.
'Mamoo ke bina naam kaise rakhte?' Anjali replied.
⭐️😍
Hearing this Arnav's smile grew extremely wide and he cooed at the baby,
'Yeh hui na baat. Aakhir mamoo ke bina, bhanji ka naam koi rakhke toh dikhaye!'
Anjali and Arnav both laughed and headed out to the living area to join Savita and Khushi.
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Savita and Khushi both smiled as they saw Arnav and Anjali come in with the baby in their arms.
'Chaunk gaye na?' Khushi teased Arnav making Anjali and Savita both laugh.
Arnav jokingly scowled at her,
'Tumhein toh main baad mein dekhoonga.' he teased back,
'Lekin Maa - apne bhi mujhe nahi bataya!'
Savita laughed lightly,
'Arre hum bata dete toh phir yeh khushi kaise dekhte tumhare chehra par?'
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Arnav smiled, understanding the immense love his family had for him but his smile quickly changed into a frown when Anjali took his niece from him as she needed to feed her.
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As Anjali left, Arnav began talking to his mother about all that he had seen and experienced abroad whilst both Savita and Khushi listened intently with proud expressions. Whilst Savita laughed and responded to Arnav's tales, Khushi sat silently admiring him and listening to him speak.
Just as Arnav was in the middle of a humorous anecdote, Kaka entered the room,
'Khaana lag gaya hai.' he announced.
An idea suddenly struck Savita,
'Kaka - aap Arnav aur Khushi ka khaana yahan le ayi. Yeh dono upar chaht pe khaa lenge.'
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Khushi blushed and looked down whilst Arnav smiled his biggest smile and winked at his mother.
'Lekin aap Ma?' Khushi asked.
'Humein abhi bhook nahi hai Khushi.' Savita replied with a teasing look on her face.
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Arnav then sprung up and engulfed his mother in a bear hug.
'I love you Ma!' he exclaimed.
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Savita chuckled,
'Haan haan - ab maska mat lagao aur Khushi ko leke upar jao.'
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Arnav bowed to show his agreement and took a crimson Khushi up the stairs to the balcony.
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As Arnav and Khushi reached the rooftop of the house, he removed his hand that had been supporting her from around her waist and opened the door leading to the roof. As Arnav busied himself in opening the door, Khushi started fiddling with her chunni - an old habit of hers that came out whenever she was nervous.
Arnav turned around and smiled upon seeing Khushi fiddling with her chunni, he stepped closer to her and whispered,
'Dar kyun lag raha hai - main tumhe nahin khaa jaoonga.' he asked with a mischevious smile.
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Khushi smiled as she looked up into Arnav's eyes - becoming momentarily mesmerised by the sheer love she saw in them. Arnav's voice pulled her from her daze,
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'Ab chaliye madam, peht mein poore ka poora zoo daud raha hai.'
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Khushi laughed,
'Daht.' she scolded lovingly and they both stepped out onto the moonlit rooftop.
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So!! That was part 6 my lovlies! Hope you enjoyed it! Don't forget to leave your suggestions and views!
Love Always
Tina
xxx

You are a complete 🤪 and thats why we loveee youuu like crazy!!!!
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paagalll 😍
Edited by mohini4u - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i just read ur FF, it's reeally good!!👍🏼 Please PM me when u update😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Baba ... aap yahan aaye the .. aur maine miss kar diya ... DAMNNITTT!!!😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
Baba, i couldnt help but post this song after reading this part for Arnav and Khushi ...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=El2VFb1McLg[/YOUTUBE]

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Posted: 14 years ago
Tina...where have you been?🤗🤗
Love the update dear!! Arnav is just too delicious in this FF!!! Love him!!!!😍😍
Anjali, Savita and Mamoo ki bhanji were lovely...😃
Khushi was super cute...as always!!
Thanks for the PM...Looking forward to the next part on this and KYT!! Update soon...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome, awesome, awesomeee !! Gossshhh Im in love with this Arnav ☺️ He's so romantic 😳 Beautiful chapter Tina 🤗

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