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Posted: 14 years ago
AWWW!!!!
That was very sweet especially the neice part!!!
Loved it to core!!
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Baba, your part 5 title lines got me into deep thinking. This is an interesting story as it started out with Arnu and Khushi in love already! Do your lines suggest that trouble is around the corner? It's lurking and can strike any moment? Daraa diya na Mohini ko miss infinite naamo waali Rakshas😈🤣? sorry sorry I just loved it when Khushi called Arnu 3 sir wala rakshas in the show.

Jokes apart, baba it's amazing how deeply you get into the skin of your characters. You never once have so far failed to mention Arnav holding Khushi's hand each time they walk. Even if one is conscious of Khushi's condition, there is a chance that they'd miss a small detail like Arnu holding her hand while stepping forward. Lekin aap toh aap ho! Aap kaise bhool sakte ho! Haina? Jai ho Baba ki!!! Arrey taarif hi kar rahi hoon aise mooh mat banaaiye haha😉😆.

Baba I loved the detailing where you showed mom wearing the same saree that he had sent her a while ago, and you gave us a visual by giving us the color of the Saree too. Bahot khoobsurat baba! Aur ma bete ka Milan dekh ke mujhe kabhi khooshi kabhi gum ki yaad aa gayi. Jaya-SRK milan was a lovely and touching scene and I felt this scene's impact just as much😳.

I could imagine Savita mom's expression as Arnu hugged her right after touching her feet. That would have been so delightful to watch. The fact that she actually reciprocated and hugged him back was all the more endearing. The dialogue interaction between mother son duo was also very emotional. Took me for a beautiful ride for sure. Mother's affection seeping from her authoritative command about not letting him go anywhere from now on. Arnav's response left me confused and in suspense. Kuch toh gadbad hai, was my first reaction. Chaliye aage aage dekhte hai hota hai kya!🤔

Acha baba can I ask you for a favor? Kya aap mujhe bata sakte ho Savita mumma ka character kaun play karega? I need to visualize her you know😆😛🤪! Haha! I am absolutely adoring Savita Mom's affection towards Khushi. I mean we knew that's how it was going to be... but living it was even more enticing.👏 Their interaction was just as appealing as Arnav and ma's was. It spoke volumes about the chemistry of yet one more Jodi. Arnav's reaction after seeing the love and affection between Khushi and Ma was pleasing. I could imagine what he must've felt at that moment. 🤢

Mami ki entry zordaar. And how dare she push past Khushi😡. Poor ladki ko dhakka diya😭? I am glad he sprinkled more than enough cynicism on her👍🏼. Dammit samajhti kya hai apne aap ko🤢. Lekin dheet characters kabhi sudharte hai kya? Phir se tok diya na😒? This time banning Khushi from entering the house altogether. Uff!!! 😈

She pressed enough buttons that she finally forced Arnu to get direct. This means that Arnu respects and stays in bounds to a certain point and limit, but when things get out of control, he too knows how to fight for his love and for justice. Then he doesn't see who is standing in front of him. That's how it should be in life in my opinion. Try to avoid conflict as best as possible. Lekin jab paani sar se uncha ho jaaye then one has to stand up and fight back. Arnav toh khair ghar ka beta hai! But I know many instances where circumstances are even more delicate than this. It's really hard to judge right from wrong in situations like this. Baba, food for thought, do you think Arjun was right to fight the fight of Mahabharat against his own family?

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Baba off topic for a sec. You must be really nitpicky, perfectionist, and meticulous in your work and in your personality. I thoroughly enjoyed your restlessness and your persistence on fixing the fonts of this part 🤣. You know I love you for all those small things you are all about!!! It was too too cute hamare adorable baba.❤️🤗😳

Okay sorry hehe.. Moving on!!!

Awww Khushi's tears and Arnu's anger got me in all filmy mode. You by now already know that I am a sucker for commanding and strong men (Not to me though haha😆 hate it when my gudsavaar does that to me, unless of course it is a gesture of sheer affection and not a random outburst of manliness🤣). That confidence and arrogance that he imposed on this situation and stayed firm on bringing Khushi in and that too with her Daina pair, was an amazing scene baba👏. It was symbolic of so many things. His protective instinct, his vow to stand his ground, the role he will play in her life in the future, and many such things. Loved the whole scene to the core👍🏼.

And the continuation of this scene, and Arnu's lash out at Mami, further strengthens my curiosity baba. I am now really eager to know your answer to my Mahabharat question. 'Izzat haq se nahi, karmo se milti hai..' Jeez Tinz. That was really interesting. Sent me off somewhere else for a moment😍.

Aww I loved your description of exactly how he handles the situation and how he manages to bring her in. Superb baba! What's more, I loved how Ma's face lightened up as her son's triumph over Mami's stupidity😳. And it was also wonderful to see the two women admire their beloved Arnu's serenity. I too got lost in the moment for a second. ☺️

And for the last Section, oh my god baba kya surprise tha🥳⭐️! It was definitely a twisted little twist😆. Bahot cute sweet lovely tha😳. His journey through finding the news, overcoming the shock, reacting to it, then finally embracing it was just so incredible👏. Makes me wonder, aisa twist? Ab iska story se kya wasta hoga? Is there a shyam in the picture that's coming up😕?

Hmmm looking forward to the next part baba!!! ☺️

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Baba, I put both the parts together so that its easier for me to write and share what I feel about the entire part..I just finished watching the episode so kindly pardon me if I get too senti.. cos the episode just swept me away and took me to a land where I am a stranger! I am very dazed, but I want to reply to your part today itself !!!

'Taqdeer ne kahin likha na ho zindagi main koi toofan, pyar se hi beethe Humari Daastan'

Arnav's reaction to seeing his home after so many years brought tears to Khushi's eyes and just as one pearl of emotion rolled down Khushi's cheek, it fell into Arnav's outstretched hand. Khushi turned towards Arnav and saw him shake his head slightly and just smile. He then took her hand and they both made their way to the front door.

As they both came to a stop, the heavy oak doors opened as if right on cue. Arnav's eyes welled up as he saw his mother dressed in a deep purple sari that he had sent her a few months ago. Arnav's mother - Savita, took in the sight of her young son standing before her after three excrutiatingly long years and also could not stop the moist pools of emotions from forming in her eyes.

Arnav will never let Khushi shed a tear as long as he is with and around her, and even if a she shed them, like in the case of deewars, he thinks even her tears are his haq and he wont let anyone else share them, not even the ground in this case!!ufff .. aisa aap ne nahi kaha hai baba, par main trance main chali gayi hoon' even todays episode, the way he gently wiped her tears'. I was a goner! Anyway back to your scene, what was most moving was, this girl thrives on this man's happiness, when she see's him happy she is happy too!! In that sense she is selfish for the sake of her love, and selfless too .. and this combination is what makes Arnav want to love her and protect her more since he totally understands this woman and the way she functions!! I love this baba.. totally !!!

The mother wanted to show the son how proud she was of him and hence wore the saree he has sent her. Mothers are so sweet na, they do these little things to show off how small gestures from children mean the world to them. Along with the mother I got emotional too !!! Savita auntyji is a darling and I already love her from before, now I love her more !!

Arnav and Khushi both stepped forward as Arnav proceeded to seek his mother's blessings by touching her feet. Savita smiled and ran her hand lovingly through her son's hair and blessed him from the bottom of her heart. Arnav then surprised Savita by engulfing her in a massive hug.

'Aapki bahut yaad ayi Ma.' Arnav said, his voice thick with emotion.

Savita smiled and tightened her hold on her son,

'Yaad toh mujhe bhi bahut ayi Arnav. Par ab tu aagaye hain na, ab mein tujhe kahin nahi jaane doongi - samjhe?'

'Mein toh pehle bhi nahin jaana chahta tha Ma.' Arnav said looking straight into his mother's eyes.

A guilty expression took over Savita's face as she tenderly stroked Arnav's right cheek,

'Jaanti hoon beta, main jaanti hoon.'

This conversation had multiple emotions in them. There was an unsaid, exchange of words that signify the graveness of the issue that both the mother and the sun are tying to brush under the carpet but miserably failing to. What would have gone so wrong that Arnav the son of the house was compelled to leave the house and the mother couldn't control or stop his moving out. Even post his exit from the Shessh Mahal it is pretty evident that the rapport between the mother and the son has remained intact and they have made sure things have gotten better. I don't know what compelled him to return now, but it has to be something major for Arnav to have returned, gotten emotional as well as put aside the bygones !!! Vodkatiny needs a peg !!and then the buzz would give her some food for thought '

Just then Savita saw Khushi bend down to touch her feet. Savita immediately pursed her lips and grabbed Khushi by the shoulders before she could reach her feet.

'Maine tujhse kitni baar bola hai, beti pair nahi choothi!'

Khushi smiled and held onto Savita's hand,

'Kya betiyon ko aashirwaad ki zarurat nahi hoti Ma?'

Savita smiled before lovingly placing her hand on Khushi's head,

'Ma ka aashirwaad humesha beti ke saath hota hai. Maangne ki zarurat nahi hoti. Aur maangna hi hai toh gale lag kar mangna theek hai!'

Both women laughed ad hugged each other as Arnav looked on - his face a picture of bliss as he saw the heart warming interaction between Khushi and his mother.

So was Khushi the reason for Arnavs going away? Was he responsible for her accident? Are the raizada's guilty of hurting this little girl? Well the rapport seems more than just guilt and sympathy ' they treat her like family' Auntyji knows of their relationship and also approves of it ' But why did she purse her lips' erm'. Khushi doesn't know why Arnav had to leave three years ago??? Baba, you are getting me even the more tensed now 'even 3 shots of vodka don't help !!! bahut naa insaafi hai re !!!

I could imagine Arnavs expression, a satisfied look on his face seeing two of his fav women bonding so well ' soch raha hoga .. chalo mere liye accha hai .. kam se kam TV serial waaley problems toh nahi hongi saas-bahu waaley '

Just as he was about to tease the two, his Mami's voice came floating through the hallway.

'Arre Arnav beta! Tum aagaya!' His Mami screamed and pushed past Khushi to trap Arnav in a hug.

Arnav grimaced and cheekily replied,

'Mami, main yahan karah hoon toh aagaya hoon na? Yeh kaisa savaal hua?'

Everyone laughed at Arnav's cheeky retort and his Mami lightly smacked his arm before going to stand by Savita.

Chalo main toh sochti hoon, Dhaka diya meano ne, toh kam se kam Arnav ki bahon main diya ' kahin aur karti toh uss maami ko main '' Serves her right, Arnav is not a man who doesn't observe, he clearly saw what happened, and he gave it back to her as well ' sorry ' again, my dimag'. When mami came, all tht was playing in my head was the bgs used for mami on the show !!!

'Chalo chalo Arnav andar aajao ab. Apna daiyaan per pehle rakna.'

Savita then turned to Khushi and said,

'Khushi tu bhi Arnav ke saath andar aa.'

'Arre Didi, kyun apshagun ko nyota de rahi hain aap? Khushi apna daiyaan per pehle toh nahi rak sakti na.' Mami exclaimed, her voice conveying her deep dislike for Khushi.

Arnav and his mother immediately looked at his Mami - or Manorma. Anger immediately taking over both their expressions.

'Manorma!' Savita scolded.

'Didi - maine kuch jhoot toh nahi kaha na? Arnav beta itne dinon baad lauta hai. Aisa mauke par kuch ooch neech na ho isliye maine-'

'Mami please. Kuch mat kahiye. Khushi kabhi bhi, kisi bhi tarah mere liye apshagun nahi ho sakti.' Arnav said, rage dripping from his every word.

Meanwhile Khushi had been looking towards the ground, wishing that the tears that had pooled in her eyes would not fall. Just as she felt the tears threaten to run down her cheeks, she felt Arnav's hand grab her arm.

She not only doesn't know what to talk where, this woman spits venom when she opens her mouth ya !! And whats with the apshagu n and all' din bhar gahr pe baithi yehi sab sentiments follow karti hogi ' she doesn't leave an opportunity to insult Khushi .. but I wonder if all this is harmless.. and if she talks all this, why cant one control her .. doesn't she have someone who would shut her up '.

Arnav is such a darling, he knew he couldn't repair the damage once he was done, he atleast let her know, all these sentiments mean nothing to him, as long as he had herr, and as though to show the same he instantly grabbed her arm!! I love the way this man is so protective of Khushi, even when it comes to guarding her against his own family. Khushi may not have told him she was hurt, but he gauged the same and acted in time!! A stitch in time saves nine '..

Taqdeer ne kahin likha na ho zindagi main koi toofan, pyar se hi beethe Humari Daastan'

Khushi immediately looked up towards Arnav, her vision blurred by the tears she was so desperately trying to keep within the confines of her eyes. Arnav was staring straight ahead at his Mami,

'Mein agar is ghar mein aaonga toh Khushi ke saath. Aur vaise bhi, mere hote hua aap ne yeh kaise soch liya ki Khushi apne daiyan pair ke saath andaar nahi aa payegi?' Manorma pursed her lips and replied in a snarky tone,

Haye Arnav ke iss stubborn childish yet determined tone pe main mar jawan '.

'Beta, lagta hai ki videsh mein reh kar tum apne sanskaar bhool chuke ho. Apne barhon se aise baat karte hai kya?'

Arnav, refusing to back down retorted,

'Barhe hone ka ye matlab toh nahin ke koi kuch bhi bole. Agar barhe choton se ye umeed rahkte hain ke voh unki izaat karein toh phir barhon ko yeh bhi samaj na chahiye ke izaat haq se nahin, karmon se milti hai - chahe insaan barha ho ya chota.'

Wah wah !! itne chote umar main itne bhale vichaar '. Taaliyan ' taaliyan ' !!!do you speak outta personal experience? Are you a rebel child baba???

With this explanation, Arnav stepped inside the house with Khushi by his side. He lent support to Khushi by gripping her right arm in order to allow her to place her right foot inside the house along with him. Seeing the way in which her son handled the situation, Savita smiled - her face adorned with motherly pride.

As Manorma walked away in a huff towards the kitchen, Arnav took a moment to take in his surroundings.

'Theen saal,' he thought to himself, 'theen lambe saal. Lekin aakhir mein ghar aahi gaye.' A peaceful smile graced his lips as the feeling of being within his own home and amongst his loved ones washed over him - clearing away any tension Manorma's comments had brought.

Both Khushi and Savita looked at Arnav, both women blissful at seeing someone they both cherished so much looking so at peace and happy. Just as all three went to sit on the sofas in the large living area, a cough from a fourth person grabbed Arnav's attention.

Awww the love and the warmth in this house, just makes me wanna be a part of it myself .. it has so much love, so much nostalgia and so much of apna-pan !! baba baad main batana, how do you imagine and visualise these things in your head ? I am very curious to know how you set all this up !!! brilliant is the word cos you write it here and I see it there in my head with my minds eye '.

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Arnav turned around to see Kaka standing behind him.

'Ji Kaka boliye.' He asked.

'Voh Baba, aapke liye phone aaye hai.' replied Kaka.

'Kaka - pehle toh aap mujhe tum kahiye aap nahin. Aur doosra, kiska phone aya hai?' Arnav said.

'Voh toh pata nahin Baba, naam kuch samajh mein nahi aya.'

'Theek hai Kaka mein aata hoon. Ma - main abhi aya.'

Aah !!! my naughty kaka ' playing pranks on my Arnie '. I told you, there is something nice abt this kaka ' and I love him !!!!

Khushi and Savita both knowingly smiled at each other as Arnav followed Kaka into one of the study rooms where the phone had come. As he stepped into the room he saw something mysterious lying on the sofa. Perplexed, Arnav moved closer to the sofa and grew even more confused when he realised that there was in fact no phone call. As he moved closer, he saw a tiny baby wrapped up in a soft pink blanket. Arnav was taken aback when he heard a voice behind him,

'Apni bhaanji kaisi lagi Arnavji?'

Okay with the oak doors et all, I pictured the sheesh mahal and I imagined Arnav walk in and exclaim as he saw the little bungle joy!! What a surprise ' yeh badey kamal ki family hai ' love em !!!Arnav and the baby ' this man is such a family man !! love that about him '..

Arnav turned around to see his older sister - Anjali standing before him. He immediately went up to her and engulfed her in a huge hug, which Anjali readily returned. Both Arnav and Anjali had grown up extremely close to each other and these three years apart had been extremely difficult on the siblings.

My heart went out to the two of them since I am very attached to my siblings myself and cannot imagine living without them myself .. the times I have tried have been extremely hard 'so this bit got me super emotional Baba' aapko dil ke wo taar choone ki aadat hai, jissey sabse emotional baatein judi ho .. not done na baba '.not fair '.😛

As the two pulled away from each other, Arnav looked at Anjali and asked,

'Saach mein Di - yeh meri bhaanji hai?'

Anjali laughed at the innocence in Arnav's childish face,

'Kothe - hum jhoot bol rahe hain kya?'

Arnav's smile grew wider and he instantly turned towards the little bundle of joy and went and gently lifted his niece into his arms. Arnav was overwhelmed by the sheer joy and pride he felt after looking at the small bundle in his arms. He tenderly kissed the baby girl's forehead and rubbed his nose against hers whilst murmuring - in a voice laced with joy, pride and affection

'Meri bhaanji.'.

Awww'this is sooo cute !!!! mujhe Arnav jaisa koi cute sa ladka laado na Baba, aise characters ko create karoge toh humare raaton ki neend khara nahi hogi toh kya hogi '..

Baba, I read the entire part again, and I realised through the two -parts, you smoothly established the Raizada house hold and some of its characters and the mystery element in the story ... the behaviour of the family, each of them had a story to tell in itself .. and I love the way you have intertwined the past with present with just subtle gestures and actions making the protagonists involved in some way or the other ' the new element in the form of the baby, could become a weak element in the story as Arnav has taken to her/so easily '. I know my mamas are very fond of me, I can imagine how Arnav will dote on her !! waiting to see what happens next baba !!!


Baba you never cease to surprise or amaze me come what may ...


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aap aisa karte kyun ho Baba ...!!!

Sorry abt the kanjoosi with the emote icons, i had typed this on word !!!😳

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kal jo aapke saath hua, aaj mere saath hua Baba ...😕 the fonts are all messed up ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
And Arnav ne Mami ko accha jawaab diya..unka muh band karwadiya😎
Ooh dono saath mein ghar ke andar gayye
Arre wahhh ek choti si bachhiii cutiie anjali ki bachhi!!! Hayye hayye!
Loved it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
love the part 5 ...amazing
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Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Hey Tina!!!

Love the update hun. This is becoming my standard dialogue for your FF's, and others for that matter, par kya karein? They really are fantastic, and I love them. You really are a genius!!!
Loved Arnav's answer to Mami!! The entry of Anjali and his niece was so cute as well.
Great job angel, keep it up!!!!
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Hey Zeba! 😃
Thank you so much for your lovely comment!
Hope you keep enjoy ing HD! 😳
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Thank you! 😳
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Originally posted by: hieverybody

AWWW!!!!

That was very sweet especially the neice part!!!
Loved it to core!!

Thank you so much! 😊
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Originally posted by: mohini4u

Baba, your part 5 title lines got me into deep thinking. This is an interesting story as it started out with Arnu and Khushi in love already! Do your lines suggest that trouble is around the corner? It's lurking and can strike any moment? Daraa diya na Mohini ko miss infinite naamo waali Rakshas😈🤣? sorry sorry I just loved it when Khushi called Arnu 3 sir wala rakshas in the show.

Oh ho - don't think Monz just read and dhak dhak! 😆 Hmmm...whether or not trouble is around the corner - you'll just have to wait and see! 😉 Haha - I love her nicknames as well! 😛

Jokes apart, baba it's amazing how deeply you get into the skin of your characters. You never once have so far failed to mention Arnav holding Khushi's hand each time they walk. Even if one is conscious of Khushi's condition, there is a chance that they'd miss a small detail like Arnu holding her hand while stepping forward. Lekin aap toh aap ho! Aap kaise bhool sakte ho! Haina? Jai ho Baba ki!!! Arrey taarif hi kar rahi hoon aise mooh mat banaaiye haha😉😆.

Aapko kaise pata hum mooh bana rahe the? 😆

Baba I loved the detailing where you showed mom wearing the same saree that he had sent her a while ago, and you gave us a visual by giving us the color of the Saree too. Bahot khoobsurat baba! Aur ma bete ka Milan dekh ke mujhe kabhi khooshi kabhi gum ki yaad aa gayi. Jaya-SRK milan was a lovely and touching scene and I felt this scene's impact just as much😳.

OMG - biggest compliment anyone could give me Monz!!! 🤗

I could imagine Savita mom's expression as Arnu hugged her right after touching her feet. That would have been so delightful to watch. The fact that she actually reciprocated and hugged him back was all the more endearing. The dialogue interaction between mother son duo was also very emotional. Took me for a beautiful ride for sure. Mother's affection seeping from her authoritative command about not letting him go anywhere from now on. Arnav's response left me confused and in suspense. Kuch toh gadbad hai, was my first reaction. Chaliye aage aage dekhte hai hota hai kya!🤔

I'm glad that you thought something was wrong - that is exactly the reaction I was going for! 😉

Acha baba can I ask you for a favor? Kya aap mujhe bata sakte ho Savita mumma ka character kaun play karega? I need to visualize her you know😆Tongue🤪! Haha! I am absolutely adoring Savita Mom's affection towards Khushi. I mean we knew that's how it was going to be... but living it was even more enticing.👏 Their interaction was just as appealing as Arnav and ma's was. It spoke volumes about the chemistry of yet one more Jodi. Arnav's reaction after seeing the love and affection between Khushi and Ma was pleasing. I could imagine what he must've felt at that moment. 🤢

I've been thinking about who would play the character of Savita too and I have decided I would like it to be Supriya Pilgaonkar (she plays Badi Ma in Sasural Ghenda Phool). Embarrassed I'm glad you liked the relationship between Savita and Khushi as this is something that will be explored in greater depth in the future.

Mami ki entry zordaar. And how dare she push past Khushi😡. Poor ladki ko dhakka diya😭? I am glad he sprinkled more than enough cynicism on her👍🏼. Dammit samajhti kya hai apne aap ko🤢. Lekin dheet characters kabhi sudharte hai kya? Phir se tok diya na😒? This time banning Khushi from entering the house altogether. Uff!!! 😈

Ab Mami ki entry toh humesha hi zordaar hogi! 😉

She pressed enough buttons that she finally forced Arnu to get direct. This means that Arnu respects and stays in bounds to a certain point and limit, but when things get out of control, he too knows how to fight for his love and for justice. Then he doesn't see who is standing in front of him. That's how it should be in life in my opinion. Try to avoid conflict as best as possible. Lekin jab paani sar se uncha ho jaaye then one has to stand up and fight back. Arnav toh khair ghar ka beta hai! But I know many instances where circumstances are even more delicate than this. It's really hard to judge right from wrong in situations like this. Baba, food for thought, do you think Arjun was right to fight the fight of Mahabharat against his own family?

I'm intrigued by your question about Arjun Monz and I would like to give you a response after some more thought! 😉 But once again I'm extremely glad that you picked up the fact that Arnav does his utmost to respect his elders - but at times is pushed to his limits. Angry

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Baba off topic for a sec. You must be really nitpicky, perfectionist, and meticulous in your work and in your personality. I thoroughly enjoyed your restlessness and your persistence on fixing the fonts of this part 🤣. You know I love you for all those small things you are all about!!! It was too too cute hamare adorable baba.❤️🤗😳

Hehe - ab kya karein - nothing short of perfect for my wonderful readers! Embarrassed

Okay sorry hehe.. Moving on!!!

Arre - aapne sorry kaha Monz!!! Angry

Awww Khushi's tears and Arnu's anger got me in all filmy mode. You by now already know that I am a sucker for commanding and strong men (Not to me though haha😆 hate it when my gudsavaar does that to me, unless of course it is a gesture of sheer affection and not a random outburst of manliness🤣). That confidence and arrogance that he imposed on this situation and stayed firm on bringing Khushi in and that too with her Daina pair, was an amazing scene baba👏. It was symbolic of so many things. His protective instinct, his vow to stand his ground, the role he will play in her life in the future, and many such things. Loved the whole scene to the core👍🏼.

Ab hum itne filmy hain Monz ki aapko humare FFs mein khoob sara filmi-pan dekhne ko milega! 🤣 Once again - overwhelmed by your amazing and profound understanding of the Arnav I have created! Embarrassed

And the continuation of this scene, and Arnu's lash out at Mami, further strengthens my curiosity baba. I am now really eager to know your answer to my Mahabharat question. 'Izzat haq se nahi, karmo se milti hai..' Jeez Tinz. That was really interesting. Sent me off somewhere else for a moment😍.

Don't go anywhere! Vaapis aajaiye!! 😆

Aww I loved your description of exactly how he handles the situation and how he manages to bring her in. Superb baba! What's more, I loved how Ma's face lightened up as her son's triumph over Mami's stupidity😳. And it was also wonderful to see the two women admire their beloved Arnu's serenity. I too got lost in the moment for a second. ☺️

Awww - I love that you got lost in that moment! Aisa hi humare FFs mein ghoom jana okay?! 😆
And for the last Section, oh my god baba kya surprise tha🥳⭐️! It was definitely a twisted little twist😆. Bahot cute sweet lovely tha😳. His journey through finding the news, overcoming the shock, reacting to it, then finally embracing it was just so incredible👏. Makes me wonder, aisa twist? Ab iska story se kya wasta hoga? Is there a shyam in the picture that's coming up😕?

So relieved that you liked the entry of our newest character! Hmmm...Shyam ka suspense hum bhi zara der se kholenge...😉

Hmmm looking forward to the next part baba!!! ☺️

Just as I am looking forward to reading your take on it! 🤗🤗🤗🤗
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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