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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

loved part 5 ...

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continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part -6

Maan is walking in his room with rest less. Again and again geet innocent face is appearing in front of his eyes. Her innocent eyes questioning him lot. He went to dadima room dadi and anni both are there.

Maan: dadi I want to talk to you.

Dadi: what happened maan.?

Maan: dadi have you noticed geet becoming panic day by day. She is not come out from her pain. We have to do something .anni what you say?

Anni: yes you are correct bhai. Even I observed. Dadima I had one suggestion. Every one has to help.

Maan: tell na what can we do?

Anni: bhai we have to keep her busy. We have to give her plenty of work. First we have to make her to come out from her room. We have to find out her other interest we have to divert her mind in other ways. Mey be it can help her to come out from her pain.

Maan and dadima both agreed. They started their plans from that day itself. Dadima call geet and ask her to take care of kitchen bcoz nakul is not well. Geet agreed. Slowly dadima transferred some responsibilities to her.

The new schedule is started in geet life. now she is become very busy person in khuruna mansion. Everybody needs geet. Dadima need her for walk and she will help her pooja. Nakul need her in kitchen for small tips for his cooking. Anni need her for everything.. Now geet become the soul of KM. Morning to evening everybody will call geet for some reasons. same time vikky came from his trip and he also joined with her. Nobody letting her to be alone .vicky become a close friend to her .Some how geet slowly come out from her pain.

Anni came to maan room. He working with his lap top.

Anni: I want to talk to you

Maan : tell me anni.

Anni: bhai I want to take geet for shopping.

Maan: anni , no she can not go outside, you know very well still police not tracked brij.

Anni: but how long she will hide here. Maan pls she needs to come out. I want to buy her some dress bcoz she don't have her own dresses. She is using all mine. But she need her own and her own taste.

Maan shocked. How come I forget . yes she need some new cloths.

Maan: anni even ill come with you.

Anni: but bhai we are shopping our dresses how can you will be with us. We are not comfortable.

Maan understood. "Ok But be care full .go with securities".

Anni and geet went shopping maal. Geet is looking happy mood. She is really want to come out from KM and take fresh air. She is very kind full to everybody. in her heart maan , dadima , anni was grown high.

Maan at office . he is working in his cabin. Anni called. "bhai bhai where are you" her voice was cracked.

Maan smelled something fishy" what happened anni"

Anni" geet missing"

Maan:"what ? haw anni ? how could you so much irresponsible. Where are you"

Anni told the name of shopping mall while crying.

Maan rushed to shopping mall.

Already anni and securities are started to search. Maan informed police also. He is very much sure brij has done some thing to geet. Mall is very busy. Maan searched geet every where and not found her. His heart is filled full of pain. When he lost sangetha same thing he felt in his heart. He is worried about geet too much.

Finally he failed to search her .he walked to parking place thinking about geet. Suddenly he found small gold chain with pendent which is belong to geet.he take the chain his hand it means she is here . He started searching all cars madly. One car started to move from there to entrance. Maan ran to that car and he stopped. Geet inside the car hold by brij and her mouth pasted by gum tape .she is struggling to come out from his grip.

When she recognized maan her eyes were widened. She is become relief. Maan open the door and grabbed geet to him. brij try to protest but maan given hard punch on his face. He hold geet one hand and he pulled out brij. Brij is not expected. He is searching geet in delhi lost few days . he know very well that she is in KM. but he couldn't enter bcoz of tight security. He is eagerly waiting for geet to come out from KM. today he got the chance to caught geet but again he missed her. His eyes are started to burning. Some how he want to harm geet. But this is maan singh khurana how can he let him to touch geet.

Maan clearly remember on death day of sangeetha. Even that day he clearly observed brij shooted his soul in front of him. that day he was helpless . he can't save sangeetha that day but not today. His eyes are splitting fire. He pulled brij out side like a animal and started to give him punch. Very soon his face swollen and started bleeding from his nose and mouth.

Before maan go mad police arrived their control the situation. Police arrested brij. At the same time anni joined maan and geet. She is relief bcoz geet is fine. She know very well maan attached with geet bcoz she is looking like sangeetha . if anything happens to geet he can not forgive him self. Geet in shock . maan hold her tightly and protectively ,he carried her to car . Anni joined them.

Maan make his way to KM.

When they reached KM Maan went to his study room. Very Next movement he is in front of Sangeetha photo. His eyes filled with tears today he is very happy bcoz Brij arrested. Maan" Sangeetha. I am happy today why you know brij arrested finally he is going to punish but I am sorry your hole family destroyed but I saved Geet. Some how ill make her to move from all this issues. I swear you I help her in future. I don't leave her alone. He kissed her lips. He felt that sangeetha is more giggling in picture.

Precap: Geet decides to join KC.
Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments.

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Thanks for all new friends bcoz you all ar encouraging me to write this FF. when I have written first two part I have not expected so much support from your part. Bcoz I am not a prophetinal and this is my first FF. I want special thanks to Muskanji and MeetPremeer they given lot of suggestion to improve my FF.

Edited by varsha-sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
fabulous part varsha
Just loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
great part...nice to see brij getting heavily punched by maan...good that he got arrested.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dear
i just read ur ff
it is superb
pls send me the pm
and add me in ur pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART -7

Maan is busy in his work. Vicky entered "maan bhai I want to talk to you"

Maan-tell me Vicky?.

Vicky - " bhai , geet wants to continue her studies. Can I help her to join my college"

Maan-- " really good idea?. Go on"

Vicky- " another request bhai she wants to join KM ?

Maan really wondered .his eyebrows knotted " why she wants work in KM. did she is missing anything here. Ill speak to her?"

Vicky ? "bhai she is here . one minute?.geet ?geet come in.."

Now maan understood that she is not dare to ask directly so she requested vicky to help her. Geet came inside.

Maan-" what is this geet? What is the problem ? why you want to earn? we all here for you why you want to do job"

Geet-' no sir , you mis understood me. I want to join KM bcoz to gain some knowledge. Some how I am feeling bore here after you all left. So even I want to continue my studies. Some thing I should gain..pls don't mistake me.."

Finally she wants move on in her life .this is good .really good sign. She can't sit here life long. Maan agreed.

Maan- " ok from tomorrow you can join KM?as a secretary"

Vicky shocked bcoz he know very well that nobody willing to secretary for MSK. Bcoz of his anger attitude every three months they are changing. "poor ..geet"

geet decided to work morning in KM and evening going to college .

Within a week maan arranged admission for her college. Now she is very happy that she can continued for her further studies. Still she had two weeks holiday to join college so she decided to join KC. Maan agreed. Only dadima felt bad bcoz if geet go to work again dadima will be alone again. But she knows geet needed change.

Geet get ready with her traditional suit to for KC. Anni and vicky started laughing to her. Geet embarrassed. She didn't understood why they are laughing. She checked her self front and back every thing is ok but she stared at both of them.

Anni stepped near to her and she try to understand her "geet you are looking perfect like behanji, you know in khurana construction nobody will ware this type of dress. Better you have to change your dress?.."

"Then what they ware ?doesn't this look decent ?" geet confused.

" arey no geet?. There everybody ware modern cloths like minis, midis?jeans?pls understand you are not a normal hosaipur girl .now you are khurana construction MD Mr.Maan singh khurana ka secretary. Maintain some dignity yaar."

"no need?." A voice come by behind. " geet jaise tum hu , vaise ahci hai Anni just keep quit" he stared at her. Anni and vicky kept quite. He turned to geet. "hum challe.."

Geet- nahi, I coming with vicky ?"

Vicky made his collar up .maan gave a disgusting look and he went out.

Vicky dropped geet in front of KC. "geet be brave any thing else you can call me?" geet nodded.

New day ,new work started in geet life.

Maan introduced her to adi and sasha and ask them to explain her work and he went to cabin.

Adi showed her cabin .geet went and sit and taken a long breath. Just she love the atmosphere of KC.

Very first day geet proved her self in KC. Adi comes to know that she is very clever in learning her works.

Even her work style also just amazing. Very soon she made a magic with everybody including sasha. Actually sasha will not join with anybody some what leader ship ego in her but still even she also not escaped from geet magic.

Its already evening 6.00pm. everybody left the office. pinky come to geet.

Pinky -"geet challe"

Geet- "nahi yarr, abi kuch kam baki hey.tum chalo"

Pinky: "geet where r you staying"

Geet blinking. She don't want to tell her that she is from KM. bcoz she want to be free with everybody. she want to enjoy like a normal employee. So she requested maan and vicky to hide her identity.

Pinky noticed that maan is coming from his cabin she escaped from there. Even geet also escaped from pinky.

maan went to drawing room. Geet still waiting for him . but maan is busy in checking new designs for his new project. Geet is almost tired. She just leaned back of her chair. She really don't know how she slipped to deep sleep. Maan finished his work and he came out. Hole office staffs are left the day. It is pin drop silence. When about move from there he noticed geet cabin lights still on. He wondered and went inside.

There she was leaning back in her chair. Her closed eyes gives her more innocent look. Some thing she blabbers in her sleep He couldn't understand. Slight smile slipped from her lips. His gaze not moved from her. Same to same what sangeetha will do in her sleep.. this is the first time he observed her with out her knowledge. He don't want to disturb her, he lost just watching her. Her green color traditional suit gives her traditional look. Her earrings were just leaned on her cheeks. Her loosen hair which is escaped from her plat just disturbing her sleep.

Maan moved too near her. Just he leaned on her .his hand moved to her face. He want to know the smoothness of her skin. He want touch her. He want to truckled her hair to back of her ear. Before touching her his mobile disturbed him. even geet wake up and maan quickly moved back. "Ye kya ho rahe muje"

Geet not sure where she is?.she confused some time?.to understand the situation its taken few minutes. "maan sir aap?."

Maan-" geet what you don't want to go home its already 9:00.pm"

Geet-" sorry sir, I am waiting for you. I don't know when I went to sleep. muje bahut jore se nindh aya tha. Kya hena before I am not work so much. Today I have worked too much . abi chaliye .dadima mey be waiting for us' she packed her stuff and ready to move.

Precap: Maan falling to Geet.

Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments.

FRIENDS PLS DON'T FORGET TO PRESS LIKE BUTTON.

Edited by varsha-sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great part...glad to see trying to come out of the trauma...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
great part
dear
hope u give some pics for familir
like geet sleeping on the chair
and mann gaze at her
so pls
mann falling great
part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
loved it... interesting story line...please add me to yr pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
nice part
happy to see Geet is moved on
hmmm Maan is falling for her
intersting

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