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sunny

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Posted: 14 years ago

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@sunnyp1414

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Give your frank feedback here or PM me.

Whenever will come online will try to resolve any queries.

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halfbloodprince

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Great story sunny. I cannot give actual feedback as I am on mobile. But this is just brilliant.

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visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Well done, Sunny.👏 It's not easy writing a combined story.

Will read it and let you know soon.

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halfbloodprince

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I liked the twists and turns which you introduced in this story.

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sunny

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I would love everyone who read story to give frank feedback. Even if negative feedback do give it. It will help me in future.

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halfbloodprince

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Posted: 14 years ago

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You are right but everything is fine and I couldn't find any mistakes.

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Debasree

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Very good Sunny...u post it here also...
Sorry but i cant find any negatives from ur story...it's just flawless...😃
Court scenes r specially just superb...

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