Feelings that wont Change - A Multi-fandom fic

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey m Aliza, new to IF, Well kinda new , and apparently m not very good at making frnds cuz I only got a single one in my list lol (thanks dmgkaran4eva for being so kind!)

So I decided to use what they call a writer's only weapon , A pen, in my case a 'keyboard' to get more familiar with ppl out here 😊

So that's enough about me, lets get to the Fic

They say "people change with time" they are right! Or atleast that's what everyone who knows Riddhima will think is true. The Happy- go-lucky, always-smiling, Talkative Ridzi turned into a Quiet, Serious, introvert Riddhima with time. But why?

Love Birds from childhood, Mayank and Nupur, a happily married couple, or that's what it seemded like, filing for divorce, Why?

Geet, A stranger, with a "too good to be true personality".But is it truly what she is or is she hiding something? and really is "Too" good to be true?

Warning: some known to be positive characters might be depicted as negative ones and the protagonists might be related differently to the other characters as per the show, which is purely for entertainment purpose, no offence shall be taken.

So what do guyz think? Anyone interested? Want me to continue?

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice concepts...
Pls continue... N pls pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Riddhima's POV

Anjali appeared on the doorway, wearing a richly embroidered Green Saree which fitted her perfectly and looked as if it was made only for her, Her smile was wider then ever and her eyes sparkled.

What got my eye was the look of satisfaction on her face.

She was my cousin, my friend, my biggest competitor and last but not the least my teacher, I learnt a lot from her, When we were young , everyone use to compare us, infact still do, maybe its cuz we are just an year apart, shez older and Better. She always was but I never accepted it. She always studied hard to get good grades but I just got them without making an effort. I was louder, more confident, more social, got along with everyone and got more attention from everybody which deep down inside made me feel I m better then her.

But today I realized how wrong I was. She has everything today, Shes 22, the youngest software engineer in the whole country, Her parents are proud of her and Shez getting engaged to the guy she loves, She met him when she went to US to do some course and the guy's parents knew rite away that she is the girl they wanna get their son married to and asked for her hand in marriage from Anji's parents. Lucky!

At least shez happy, I thot and smiled.

Isn't she looking so pretty Riddhima?? Asked nikki completely awed by her sister's beauty.

I nodded in approval and smiled.

Anjali reached the car and seated herself next me.

Anjali:Omg! We are runnig late!

UV: Well, u took the longest time to get ready!

Nikki: arrey to mangni bhi to ussi ki hai na!

Sid: Exactly!

UV: Bhai app to bhabhi ki har baat pe yehi bolte hain :P 'Exactly!' 'Rite!' 'Correct' :P

Nikki giggled, Sid chuckled and Anji made a face.

Anji: UV tum kissi waqt chup nai reh sakte? Why do u have to comment on every single thing?

UV: Mai kyun chup rahun :P mai riddhima thori hou :P

I looked up at him, he was looking at me too, waiting for me to react but I looked down at my book again. I am a medical student and I had exams the following week which gave me a good excuse to burry myself in the books.

Anji: tum kyun humesha iske peeche pare rehte ho! Khabardaar jo meri behan ko ainda se kuch kaha to!

I smiled at her.

Anji: achaa abhi tum bhi kitabou mai se nikloo or mujhy batao how do I look?

Me: u look really pretty! Someones gonna faint when he sees you.

UV: someones gonna faint alright! *lol*



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Anji: uff! Isse kaun le ke aya hai yaar! Nikalo isse yahan se!

UV: abb mai chalti gari se nikal jaon?

Nikki: oh ho tum dono bhi na abb bahre ho jao!

UV: (to anji) Haan auntie! Abb tumhari shaadi hone wali hai abb to bhari ho jao!

Anji: she was talking to you too.

Sid: ohh god! U guyz are still fighting! Look at riddhima chup ker k bethi wi hai !

Nikki: aur nai to kya! Dono se choti hai likin zada mature act kerti hai !

UV: Yea rite :P Mature :P

Everyone was quite for a minute.

Anji: Acha ridzi tou bata m I making the rite decision?

Me: I m sure u are. 😊

Anji: Yea I guess khair ajj tum pehli baar unse milou gi na? u excited?

UV: baatein to chk karo iski :P "unse" pagal! Wesy bhi usne kyun excited hona hai :P hez ur going to be husband! Not hers!

Anjali, Nikkita, UV, Sid and Me are all cousins. Anji and Nikki are sisters, they r my father's older brother's daughters and UV and Sid are my father's oldest brother's sons. We were best buddies when we were young then UV and Sid moved to Dubai, My parent's decided to move to US when I was 15. We later on moved to El Salvador 3 years ago but that's another story.

Right now we all got together again for Anji's engagement, and even though I had exams the following week I still had to come cuz my parent's had already missed Sid and Nikki's wedding cuz of me.I didn't want them to miss another function.

"ok we are here!" Sid announced.

Anji: omg! Omg! M freakin out! Do I look fine?

Nikki: Yes u look great!

I think anjie transferred some of her anxiety to me too cuz I started getting a queasy feeling in my stomach myself.

We all got out of the car and made our way to the huge mansion infront of us, it somehow looked familiar, I tried remembering where I had seen it before but couldn't think of anything.

Sid: kya huwa?

He shook me out of my thought.

Me: umm ahh nothing 😊

Sid: are u ok?

Me: yea 😊

Sid: Riddhima theres something wrong with you, I can tell, you are not the same anymore, is there something you wanna share?

Me: asi koi baat nai hai.

Sid: r u sure?

Me: Haan mery psychologist bhai! Abb chalo we are getting late!

My phone rang.

Me: Ohh..its mom…u go, I'll be right there..

Sid: ok!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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(on the phone)

Me: hey...

Mom: Umm where are u?

Me: outside the mansion.

Mom: Look Riddhima we decided that u really are not ready for this, so we'll just go back. U don't need to come in.

Me: Nah mom' m good.

Mom: Riddhima meri baat samjho , just stay there I'll be right there with you.

Me: mom'kyaa baat hai? App mujh se kuch chuppa rai hain?

Mom: nahi beta asi koi baat nai hai

Me: so then its decided, we are staying. U guyz already missed out on so much cuz of me, I just don't wanna be the reason again.

Mom: Riddhima, we are ur parents sweety.

Me: Thanks mom, m comin in.

Mom: But

Me: Mom! No buts m comin in now bye.

Why was she insisting that I shudn't go inside when she was the one who brought me here on the first place, the weird feeling grew in my stomach and I headed toward the door.

The sound of music made my heartbeat somewhat stable. Music is my remedy !

Nikki: arrey Riddhima tum yahan ho! Hum tumhe kab se dhoond rai thy!

Me: kyun?

Nikki: arrey tumhe Anji k "Mr.Rite" se ni milna?

Me: yea'how can I miss that.. 😊

Nikki: to khari khari yahan kya ker ria ho chalo.

She held my hand and took me deeper inside the room, we stopped at a spot. All the others were standing facing the other way,A familiar scent filled the air.

It couldn't be, my body froze, heart sank , tears started to form in my eyes.

Riddhima control urself! It can just be a coincidence I told myself.

Nikki: Armaan..ye hai humari Riddhima !

"Armaan" that name.

No this couldn't be happening.

He turned. His eyes bored into mine.

"Shes my bestest czn ever!" I heard anji's voice in distant

My heart started beating a hundered times faster.

I saw anji hold his hand. His eyes still staring rite into mine.

Me: Excuse me..i gotta go..

Anji: but..Riddhima..suno to ..kya huwa?

I didn't stop to answer and just left, I just walked, ignoring all the greetings and all the questioning eyes, as long as I found a room where I could be alone. Where I could cry all I want.

Edited by AlleybBells - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Precap : Sometimes strangers prove to be better friends, Riddhima meets a stranger too, who gives her the courage to face the reality.

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