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Arnav Singh Razada 21 of age, one of the richest men on this whole world. Being the most eligible bachelor in America, ladies of all ages just wants to marry him, they could literally die over him. Knowing the fact Arnav just treats all of the 'bimbos' as Arnav calls them' like tissue, all of the girls know that Arnav will not get married to any of them they still can go gaga over him'

Khushi' just Khushi lives her life in an orphanage, her biggest fear will come to life tomorrow as it is her birthday and she will turn 18, she just can't believe she will have to leave the orphanage and live her life on her own, in the ruthless, mean, demanding world of men, Khushi hates men to the core she just can't stand them or understand them, Khushi herself doesn't know when her hatred for men become her biggest fear'

What will happen when these totally two different type of people meet'???

I hope you guyz like the concept please comment and like it, part 1 will be up by tomorrow and if any1 need pms plz just comment by letting me nw, and yea im writing a ff after a really long time, so if they were any mistakes please ignore them as I didn't have time to proof read! Anyways comment😊

and p.s this will get really romantic after 3-4 parts! 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mina, your ff seems very interesting. I love Arnav and Khushi's character descriptions. So Khushi hates men in your version. Please update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hahah nicely said
plz update soon love to read more of ur work
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice ff intreasting cant wait for more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Continue soon it seems interesting!!!
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Mina, nice concept, plzzz continue and do pm me whenever u update
Thanks
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i like it, seems interesting, PM me when you update please😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woww nice introoo
u put a dfferent touch to it by making khushi hate alll "men" lolzz
plzz updateee i wannna read how is the first part 😍
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Part 1

"… and tell him 'sniff sniff' I hate him, I never loved him and 'sniff sniff' and… and, ohh I miss him whom am I kidding I loved him, his expensive gifts the way he made me feel so special 'cry cry' please tell him I love him please… hello helloo, heloo Adi, Adi are you still listening to me? Adi… gosh I can't believe myself… " and the lady named kiren slammed her Iphone across her room and went to cry more

Adi: sir she was a hard one, as soon as I told her that you are breaking up with her, she as most girls do played the hate game first and then cried saying she loves you and all of the expensive things you got her.

Arnav lets out a laugh: yes sure she loved me for only the expensive things I got her and nothing else… and plus she was boring after last night

Adi: sir if you don't mind me saying, but after all last night's all of those girls start looking boring to you…

Arnav laughs it out: oh come on Adi you and as well as all those girls know that I will never marry them but still they sleep with me, not my fault! Arnav makes a devilish smile

Adi: agreed, so for the new project we have to pick out new models, at least five…

Arnav smirks: bring dem on!

At Khushi orphanage she sits packing her clothes; with a sad face she can't believe she is leaving Isha one of her roommate age 13 had a tear in her eye

Isha: I can't believe your leaving what will we do without you she cried, who will tell me bedtime stories?

Khushi trying to be strong: it's okay Isha, I told Ashley she will tell you stories…

Ashley came in the room with Lesley their fourth roommate

Ashley: oh Isha please don't start crying if you cry Khushi will cry and it's her birthday and she shouldn't cry as if you cry on your birthday you cry all year long

Isha tried to smile being the youngest among all of them she was scared

Lesley: but isn't it soo cool that your leaving this boring place gosh I'm 15 can't wait to be 18 and leave

Ashley: yea no kidding you must be excited

Khushi: umm sure maybe…

Isha: I just wish that there was a way that you could stay

Ashley: yea but its rule when you turn 18 you have to live own your own

Isha: fine, but the apartment that you got is so far from her, like about 25 blocks away

Lesley: yea I still don't understand why you didn't get the one that was only 3 blocks away from here

Khushi: because that apartment was owned by a men, and you guyz know I just can't stand men…

Isha: we know that but you never told us why you hate men so much…

Khushi went to the window and looked outside and got a back flash of this man arguing with this lady who was badly bruised when suddenly the man smacked her and she—

Ashley: oh please don't go into the zoomed out world, cum back

Lesley: I got the taxi its waiting outside come lets go

Khushi said her byes to the caretaker and all of the other girls in the orphanage

Sitting in the cab Khushi said I will miss this place I came here when I was 10, living her for eight years really made a difference in my life

Khushi apartment came she got off and went inside it was a one bedroom room, she was living alone.

Khushi said her byes to Ashley, Lesley and Isha, Isha was being hard to let go of her hug but she still let her go

Khushi sat in the apartment all alone she stared outside her window and saw birds flying over the beach which was a beautiful view, she loved the beach, and decided to go there, as it was Sunday and she wasn't wokring.

Adi: So I have called out the ladies whom you want for the ad of bikini's and all of them are really anxious to met you, the mostly because your single again

Arnav: hey was that a taunt?

Adi: umm defiantly…(Arnav raised his eyebrow) defiantly no sir

Arnav: tell dem to get to the location I will meet them over there!

Adi: yes sir as you say

Khushi opened her mat and lay underneath the sun, in her casual Capri jeans and a simple baby sleeve shirt, Khushi got her book out put on her typical chasmish glasses and got reading

Arnav reached their with her crew and models

Arnav: Hello ladies

All the girls in two piece smile back and say hi back, Arnav went specially to hug each one…

Arnav: Adi,

Adi: yes sir

Arnav: these are only four girls… I asked for five

Adi: yes sir I just got the news the fifth model had fell sick at the last moment

Arnav: great what do we do now; you now I hate it when I plan something and it don't go that way… goshhh

Adi: maybe sir sum1 on this beach can fill the requirement

Arnav: Adi your a genius

Arnav looks around and sees Khushi

Arnav: wow that girl is HAWT

Adi: sorry sir

Arnav: I mean go get her here, while we will shoot with the other models single and in between time you go and get

Adi: as you say sir

Adi walks over to Khushi

Adi: excuse me ma'am

Khushi looks up from her specs and sees a man standing there, she got a little scared but tried not showing her fear to him

"What do you want" Khushi asked the man in complete attitude

Adi: I am here from the ASR Fashion Company, and ma'am you're the lucky winner, because my sir, the head of ASR FC wants you to be in his ad

Khushi thought for a moment… how men can this happen, men can't be generous so what can this be all about, like daal mein jazur kuch kala hai…

Khushi: what kind of ad is it?

Adi: it's a bikini ad, with you and 4 other lucky girls

Khushi: what, how can you even I will wear a bikini?

Adi: umm, we will pay you

Khushi: do you think I need money…?

Adi: umm no—but---

Khushi: but whatever get lost, and tell you AS- whatever the last initial was to get lost, gosh I can t believe you men, your disgusting…

Khushi leaves the place in total anger

Adi goes back to Arnav

Arnav: so where is she??

Adi: she is umm—

Arnav: getting ready…

Adi: no actually she is not coming…

Arnav: what the F*** why not??

Adi: because she said she won't wear a bikini

Arnav: did you tell her she will get money???

Adi: yes but she said she doesn't need any money… and that men are disgusting….

Arnav: what the hell, in one day two things aren't going my way, how can that happen Gosh that is totally…. Wait a minute, isn't she the same girl…

Adi turns around: yes it is, maybe she changed her mind

Arnav: off course how could someone say no to a life changing event… this time I will go and meet her personally and the work the charm

Khushi thinking to herself, 'gosh where did I leave my book, that guy made me leave in such a hurry that I forgot my book here somewhere'

Arnav cleans his throat standing behind Khushi; Khushi turns around to see who it is…. Arnav thinks 'wow she is beautiful… her eyes, her lips… maybe I could date her more than a week'

Khushi again starts in her complete attitude: yes?

Arnav: Hi I am ASR, you might have just herd of me…

Khushi thinks 'maybe he is here to say sorry, IMPOSIBLE men can never apologize as it hurts their ego'

Arnav: and I just want to tell you that you made a great choice by coming back

Khushi: excuse me I didn't come back for your stupid two piece ad, I came here looking for my book

Arnav: wow good looks and attitude, what a deadly combination

Khushi: you know what talking to a man, is completely like banging your head on a wall, which I refuse to do, so I am leaving to hell with my book

Khushi stomps to leave, when Arnav holds her hand and turns her around, making her face bang into his chest, Khushi slowly looks up to see Arnav's face about two inches away from her own face, Khushi tries to leave but Arnav has his hand on her hand which is on her back making her impossible to leave, while her other hand is resting on his shoulder.

Khushi: yeh kya batameezi hai? Leave me or I will call the cops

Arnav smirks: really and how do you plan to do that?

Khushi: what?

Arnav: you can't move a inch and you think you can call the cops, and plus I don't think the cops will arrest me as I'm ASR

Khushi: male ego, I just hate that, let me go your hurting

Arnav loses his grip on Khushi's back

Arnav: how's that? Better?

Khushi: look I won't do that ad, so find someone else… please

Arnav: why won't you do that ad, because you're scared of you parents, don't worry I will talk to them

Khushi: look I think you're getting a little to personally… leave me

Arnav: being personally with girls is my favorite hobby! Arnav winks at Khushi

Khushi gets really scared: look (gulps down her saliva) if you don't leave me I will, I will

Arnav: you will agree to do the ad?!

Khushi: no, never {Khushi by this time is really nervous, scared and ready to puke kind of position} and down goes her tear

Arnav: oh my god you will cry… holy shit man, look don't cry, I don't handle tears well

Another tear goes down her check

Arnav: okay fine you don't want to do the ad, you don't have to, I understand –Arnav lets her go- but please just don't cry… hey what's that filmy line… yea I hate tears pusba, Arnav give a little smile

While Khushi just stand their stunned and thinks 'thank god': I m leaving

Arnav: do you need a ride, I will drop you home…

Khushi: no thanks, you have already done enough, all I wish is too never see you again

Khushi leaves from there

Arnav stands there and thinks: oh we will meet again, we will definitely met again… because we have to get even, no one can say no to Arnav and can get away with it… I just have to find out how to meet her again…{Arnav smiles, and picks up Khushi's book and opens the first page} oh so her name is Khushi… so miss. Khushi get ready because you have challenged ASR and I don't like to lose, I will make sure that I get you into a bikini no matter whatever I have to do. By know I have probably made a expression on her!

Arnav goes to Adi: Adi I need all of the information about that girl, where she lives, who's in her family, where she works etc etc

Adi: yes sir, you have got it!

Khushi reaches her apartment: gosh I just can't believe men, they are so annoying like err, who would have taught a man can be scared of tears… but just thanks god I felt form there, I just hope I never meet him again.

Recap: who's there, look I am not scared of you I will really hurt you Khushi said that in complete fear

I hope you guyz like part 1, part 2 will be up by tomorrow or Monday for sure, like I will try for tomorrow so keep checking, and thanks for all of the comments, hope I get more readers after part 1… thanks again… and if anyone wants pm, just send me a friend request so it will be easier for me… and yea I am new to this forum and very excited to make new friends… anyway thanks again!

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