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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey guys, sometimes I write poems for fun and here is one based on this lovely romantic blockbuster hit show, "Kaisa Ye Pyar Hai." Many people don't understand it, and I'm like, "You need to be a true KYPH fan to understand it." 😆 But anyways, let's see if you guys get it. Here it is:

The Fate of True Love

"Give it your best shot now!" the coordinator shouted.
I took a deep breath as air gushed down my throat.
My vocal cords filled with energy as I began to sing the melodious tune.
My eyes closed in deep concentration as flashbacks of sweet memories flooded my mind.

His face, his smile, his style…
My voice rose higher with harmony as people listened with admiration.

His dancing, his talking, his singing…
My lungs yearned for another breath as my voice rose to the climax of the song.

His love, his promises… his deceit…
My eyelids burst open quickly breaking the cruel flashbacks, as my breaths came in short gasps.
Water burned my eyes and I fought against the pressure of their will to break out.

I looked up slowly.. only to greet his face again…
My heart cried out the words "Why?" while my brain urged to rebuke him.
He continued to glare at me with ferocious eyes and a smug smile.
Sneering at my ability, he retorted the word "pathetic," at me.
I thrust my hand sternly in front of his face glaring back at him, and heatedly stomped out of the room.

Much to my despair and defeat, one tear strolled down my cheek slowly.
Closing my eyes, my head throbbed in anger, as my heart cried out desperately, "Why couldn't you be who I thought you were?"

As if in response, he turned around watching her walk away…
And wiped a tear that managed to fall from his livid, yet anguished eyes.
"Why couldn't you be who I thought you were?" he whispered softly.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow..that is beautiful..did u write it urself..? if yes..thats some awesome writing!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Yea I wrote it myself ha.. Thanks guys!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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LoVelY LoVelY!!! 👏


Btw...CAN U DO MY ENGLISH HOMEWORK....lolz....jk 😛
Edited by CraZyLiLMe21 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Nice work, loved the last two stanzas...both the characters have changed so much! Neither is like what they were before
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: reeps

Nice work, loved the last two stanzas...both the characters have changed so much! Neither is like what they were before



Saach mein yaar.. Both of them have through such extremes I wonder if they can ever really reunite.. 😭

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Posted: 19 years ago
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how kAN I SEE Kaisa Ye Pyar Hai ON INTERNET
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: koolgirl88



Saach mein yaar.. Both of them have through such extremes I wonder if they can ever really reunite.. 😭

verry nice di and i agree with you😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow......... such a nice poem

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