KRIYA MOMENT - MUjhe Haq Hai !!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Specially for Dhanya 😊


Love is when you shed a tear and still want him, it's when he ignores you and you still love him.


Krishna is dragging Pratigya and coming to their miniature world, the world of KRIYA ..Pratigya is squealing and trying to free her arms and is not looking towards what Krishna has planned , Krishna is relentless Krishna wants to enjoy the rain and Krishna will enjoy the rain with his buttery Half...Pratigya like a recalcitrant mule skids to a halt, digs her heels in and plainly refuses to get wet in the rainsaying that she does not like rain ** De Taali** A disbelieving Krishna exhorts the attraction of the rain, tells quite romantically that when Pratigya gets wet with him ** Ahem, Ahem šŸ˜‰** only then can she enjoy the language of rain ...Krishna walks to the centre , extends his hands like a helicopter ** A-la Titanic style ** shouts in exuberance that when Pratigya gets soaked, so will she enjoy the rains immensely..Pratigya gives an indulgent smile at his childlike enthusiasm..Krishna turns to Pratigya declares that such sort of showers do not come regularly and one must take advantage of it...The cowardly Pratigya refuses to join the rain party , pouting out that she falls ill if she soaks in the rain, But a gushy Krishna promises that he will not let anything happen to his Pratigya, urges her to join him , enjoy the shower...but Pratigya is a saxena , known for their stubbornness and their determination to never be happy ..Pratigya chickens out, refuses to play 'Love-Shmove " game with her ever-ready to play , Bhoothnaat and makes preparation to depart from the venue of their 'Love-match" ** Awww P, Don't be A spoil Sport, Think of the parched souls of IF**..A playfully combative Krishna runs fast grabs her, demanding how can she go off like this and begins to haul her to get soaked, A howling Pratigya protests vociferously ..but goes unheeded as a merciless Krishna just lifts Pratigya and walks into the rain.



"Like the rain I have fallen for you and I know just why you liked the rain. Always calling for you I'm falling for you now, just like the rain."



Krishna carries Pratigya right into the middle of the terrace and twirls her around while the laughter of Pratigya rings out ...Pratigya then chances to look into the eyes of Krishna, reads the emotions there and she too begins to respond to the inner light which is caught in perfect accord by Krishna ...Krishna slowly puts her on the ground all the while maintaining that taut,sizzling connection between their eyes, Their eyes locked into one another, completely unaware of the outer world , yet intensely aware of each other..


"Thou art to me a delicious torment."
- Ralph Waldo Emerson



Krishna bends his head gently rubs his cheeks alongside hers like a mighty tree gracefully and carefully caressing a gentle plant, clinging to him for the existence of her very being.Krishna slowly caresses her cheeks removing the tendrils of her hair and her face become visible like flower unfurling it's petals one by one .. A startled and aroused Pratigya is unable to handle the emotions whipping inside her..she darts back to the safe haven but is quickly held back by the retraining hands of Krishna..who slowly weaves the magic around her once again, softly comes behind her , entwines his arms around her...Pratigya bends her head unable to bear the onslaught of the powerful emotions surging through her, on her ..like a flower bowing its head unable to bear the weight of the heavy showers ,uncomplaining and reveling in the emotions/rain..


"I believe in running through the rain and crashing into the person you love and having your lips bleed on each other."

Billy Bob Thornton


A hug is like a boomerang - you get it back right away.

Bil Keane

Pratigya runs away from Krishna, turning her back to him , her every pore quivering in his presence, each and every inch of her self demanding to surrender itself in Krishna's embrace while Krishna scorches her with his searing glance, a glance which burns her despite the pouring rain , Pratigya slowly turns and gives a sideways glance, HA !A fatal error !!..for there standing away from her but sending vibes, powerful currents of love would be her Krishna...The currents jolt her, tingles her being and races through her body wildly, beats at the great door of her heart, rousing the rampant emotions to its highest magnitude... An emotions that can be dammed only within the arms of Krishna ..Pratigya hurries forthwith to be in the arms of her healer, the medicine man who knows how to treat her fever...Both hug each other tightly and become each others fire that warms their cockles...


Memory is a paradise out of which fate cannot drive us. ~
Alexandre Dumas


Thus ends the nostalgic memories of Pratigya , getting wet in remembrance of memories past




[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=El2VFb1McLg[/YOUTUBE]



ABIDA's creation on the same Song.. Enjoy !!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sjbnhy5jGbQ


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fantabulous out of this world superb
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome n mindblowing ... sis too good...specially ur quotes ..while reading ur post scene was running in my mind again

Edited by kriya2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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K's impulsive stmt ." y do u worry..am here for you" was natural..
they dint over do it with overt expressions or sentiments..made it a normal stmt...that was very good..he is like that..n was well kept in that scene.

otherwise as such the scene was good..

gr8 writing, bache!


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Posted: 14 years ago
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luvllyy threaddd!!!
i always luuubbb d quotes which u post T SIS...
n i luubbb tis sonnnggg alooottt <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sathya Chechi loved it...šŸ˜›šŸ˜³
Seen a different side of P wen she ran and hugged K which never used to show!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Tanthya! I have got to commend you for your fantastic posts. You have a way with words & you are a gifted writer. I enjoy your perceptive insights into the characters minds. This forum is fortunate to have many brilliant writers. Thanks for entertaining all!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderfull post dear, i made a KriYa VM on this song, u cann add this one in ur 1st post
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sjbnhy5jGbQ[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by Abida0201 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice thread
loved it
awesome and wonderful di
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi tanthya- wow ... Brilliant ā­ļø ā­ļøpls check tis poem -i think it suits kriya . A SPECIAL WORLD FOR YOU AND ME. A special bond one cannot see It wraps us up in a cocoon And holds us up fiercly in its womb Its fingers spread like fine spun gold Gently nesting us to the fold Like silken thread it holds us fast Bonds like this are meant to last And though at times a tread may may break A new one forms in its wake to bind us closer and keep us strong In a special world where we belong..

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