RBO Written Update 21s June: Shanak Devices

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Hi guys!! Ermm the update will be a little less detailed today since I saw it on TV and I am doing it from my recollection.😕 I could watch the episode again but I don't feel like lol.😆 Please do point out any mistakes in the dialogues etc for the benefit of other readers if you see any 😊

Part 1

Shaan and Khanak are busy making the cell phone thing with match boxes in Shaan's room when Pappi enters. They see him coming and hide the match box with the newspapers. Shaan pretends to read the newspaper and Khaank stands at the side. Pappi asks Khanak what she is doing there. Khanak says that she is in her husband's room😳 and will he please leave them alone so they can do some Shanak romance😳 because they have been dying for it and so have their fans!😲 (LOL okay yea yea I made that up!!😆 LMAO but seriously I want Shanak scenes! *cries*) Khair Khanak doesn't say anything and grabs a book and leaves. Shaan gets annoyed. Pappi sits at his laptop to watch some po*n😕 (LMAO atleast that's what I think he watches! Why else would he hide it?😆😕) Shaan tries to pry into it, streches himself a but and then casually leaves the room and goes to Khanak. He tells her that Pappi is still there!( He whines actually lol )Khanak says she wil do something and goes to Pappi's room and tempts him with food (And I see him hide the laptop screen from her too!!! Dekhaa!!😡) Pappi gets excited and says sure he would LOVE to eat! Khanak takes him to the kitchen slash Dining Table and gives him dhokla and Sambar and Idli and (Okay iss say zyada I don't know the names of Indian dishes lol the point is she thoosofies him a lot😆) Shaan in the meantime goes back to his room and continues with the match box telephone (And seriously he looks like a darzi while he is doing it!😕😆 )

Khushi is sitting with Adi at the Dhaba in her mini say bhee mini skirt. (Nice thighs waisay! Any guys dream!😆 Urghhh anyway moving on) Adi has told her about Shaan bothering him. Khushi says that Shaan sounds like a nice name. Adi glares at her. She says but Adi is a better name though lol.😆 She asks what does he look like? Adi answers WHY (he is angry) and goes like do you want to take him on a date?😲 She says no she was just curious (but the expression on her face is such that it seems she would like nothing better than to date him! 😆) Adi says that he looks like a monkey!! (Oh shurrup okay!Loser nahi toh!😡) Khushi laughs. She asks him his second problem. He says he needs 10,000 rupees. Khushi gets exasperated and like not again! She assures him that she will give him the money (Okay I am sensing this girl will be a loyal friend? 😊No? yes? ) She then gives him some change to give to the Dhabay wala (and I forgot his name *thinksss like an idiot* Ramu? Hari? Salim? Bapu? WHATT?! Okay I give up!) so that he gets happy that Adi paid himself. Adi smiles at Khushi's generosity and tells her that he missed her so much and was bored without her. She says that now that she has come back there will be a party at night with dance, music and small clothes.

Part 2

Shaan and Khanak have connected the match box threads from one balcony to another at 2 ends of the house. Khanak is sitting with her device (Lets call it device for lack of a better word lol)😆 Shaan is sitting with his. Khanak says Hello? Shaan says hello? (Wah ray it's working!! 😲)Both are blushing devices in hand (Aur ub yay din dekhnay ko mil raha hain that they are blushing with a matchbox in ther arms and not each other! 😭Kill me somebody😭! But it is cute😳 ) Shaan or Khanak (one of the 2 I don't remember) says that they can talk easily now.

Pappi is standing alone at his balcony and says that he can smoke now and no one will find out at all.

Khanak says to Shaan over her device that it is such a beautiful feeling that they are so close but yet so far. Shaan says it is exactly like a movie where 2 lovers are talking to each other before marriage without their parents knowing😆 (I bet you did this with Nattie and Khanak did this with Suraj? No? Laikin there parents toh knew! *beenis gasps* Toh WHO was it!😲) Khanak says it is all a dream, that at one side there are 2 lovers and the other side there is the tortourous society (Zamana! LMAO I love this word zamana for some reason) . Shaan says not society but only Pappi is against their love.

Shaan tells Khanak that they should call this the Mission Talking (ayay hayay baray missions par ho aj kal tum dono!😳 Here's an idea! Get a job!😡) and give the name a Copyright. Khanak says what copy? Shaan expalins that they should put a Copy right on their device so that no one copies it.And in this way the device will be beneficial for all those who fall in love.😆

Pappi has only just begin to smoke when his feet get stuck in the string that is attaching the devices of Shanak together.😲 He pulls on the string getting suspicious. (Okay I have a question! WHYY is this guy suddenly not sleepy anymore?!!) Khanak and Shaan both notice that the string is being pulled and ask each other if they are doing it themselves to which both reply No. khanak then goes to check in the balcony and sees Pappi playing with the string.😲 She gets scared but also sees him with cigarette in the hand. Slowly he keeps pulling the string and the 2 devices come into his hand. He puts 2 and 2 together and realises that Shaan and Khanak were communicating through a match box.😲

Shanak get worried and meet up in Khanak's room saying that will complain to Gangu Bai. Khanak says she has an idea and goes to the living room with a camera. Pappi is busy trying out Gangu's cell phone but it is not responding. Khanak takes loads of pictures of Pappi who even poses for them proudly (there are some ppl who just LOVE posing he seems to be one of them)😆. Just then Shaan comes from behind and says great nice picture. He asks Khanak to zoom the camera and sees a Cigarette in his hand (So guys that was the plan! 😃To catch Pappi redhanded with a cigarette and blackmail him! And I remember May saying the exact same thing on the DT! May you wantt to restart prediction column?😃) Pappi gets worried. Shaan and Khanak tell him that if Gangu finds out she will be most displeased. Khanak goes ont o say that it is one of the 100 rules of Gangu that no smoking and no drinking. Shaan also makes a sorry face saying that Pappi is in trouble then and they have to tell Gangu now. Pappi imagines himself beig beaten up by Gangu and requests Shaan not to tell Gangu. Shaan agrees but then makes a snide comment about the phone call pappi was making to Gangu and feigns he doesn't know why he was making it! Pappi assures him that he will not make the call (In other words he will not phoro Shaan's bhaanda! So wait? Pappi now knows? That they are 'going out' only right? Not married right?😕) Pappi leaves all scared. Shanak Hi-5 each other (and awwwKhanak looks so short and the Hi-5 was so cte! Must watch 2 seconds of the show! LOL)😍


Part 3

Khanak wakes up in the morning and says Namshkar to god on the bed. She looks around the room and sees it is a mess. She sees Khushi sleeping on the bed in a sleeveless top and under her chadar. She thinks that the room is ina mess hence she should wake up Khushi and tell her to keep her stuff in place. She says to Khushi "Ess-suse me" (Now WHY could she have not said Sex-cuse?! It would have brougth back old memories na!😆) Khushi doesn't wake up or pretends to ignore. Khanak says "Suniyay" she ignores. Khanak says "Bahenji" and Khushi immediately gets up in shock. (Okay is it only me or is there an overdose of the word Bahen-ji being used in Odhani! Hmph! I always get to update the baheji epis! As if it's not been a part of my life for 4 years in Uni!)

Khushi wakes up and says to Khanakk that is she out of her mind to call her Bahenji? It is such an uncool word! Khanak tells her to keep her clothes in cupboard to which Khushi angrily exclaims that she woke her up in the middle of the night to tell her this?! Khanak says its morning. Khushi says that it is not morning till she wakes up! (Oh so that is why Adi calls you Sunshine? 😕)Khushi asks Khanak who the hell are you? (Like seriously CVs! ALL cool people are not always hating on Village people okay!! Cool people have feelings for village ppl too!😲) Khanak introduces herself and says that she doesn't like the room all dirty. Khushi says how dare she call her stuff dirty and she should have a zipper on her mouth. Khushi says something lie yo understand? You better understand! (looks like a movie ka dialogue🥱)Khanak says that if the room is dirty god laxmi does not come in their house which Khushi takes to mean as a girl (*yawnnn* old stuff🥱) khushi says which planet has she come from? And then goes like you are so funny to Khanak (*Beeni kinda dislikes Khushi now*)

Just then Adi comes in the room (HOWWW can guys randomly walk in girls' rooms! At this rate Shanak toh should be sleeping together in this house! Hmph!) Khushi disses Khanak in front of him ( I think I don't remember properly) Adi sides with Khanak saying that Khanak is absolutely right and Khushi should keep the room clean and ever since Khanak has come not only rooms but the whole house is clean always. He flirts with Khanak again and Khushi notices. He pulls him on the bed and says that could he not get any other female to flirt with? What happenedd to his status? Adi says that Khanak is a simple girl and their enemy is Shaan and they need to tackle him first. He tells her to get dresssed and come out


Part 4

Pappi brings low cal sandwhich and drink for Khushi in the living room. He flirts with her and she flirts back by taking off his glasses, wiping them on her skirt and placing them back Basically Pappi seeems to be crushing on Khushi. Oh btw Khushi is wearing a really short blue frock ( and if I didn't love the colour I would have been dissing the frock right now lol but i like it <3) She asks him to help her get ris o her enemy to which he agrees. He asks who is the enemy she says Shaa. Pappi falters hearing his name.

Adi stands outside the bathroom in which Shaan is shaving. He tells Shaan to come out.Shaan says he will stay. Adi says he has money hence Shaan will have to leave.Shaan says gangu will not kick him out since he paid rent in advance. Just then khushi comes and goes to the bathroom door and says in her aggressive tone to leave the house or else! Shaan turns around in his hero style (Ahhh larki daikh kar hosh urna suna tha----larki ko sunn kar hee hosh ur gayay?! Tsk tsk) He argues with the girl after composing himself. Shaan says he will not leave under any circumstances. Khushi says to who the hell does he think he is? Who is heee? Shaan says he is a singer! Khushi ek dum say becomes calm and excired and says "Singer?" in an intersted voice. She seems to have some interst in his singing talent. She asks what sort of a singer. Playback?Shan who is mast shaving away says that no he has rather had a rock band! Khushi asks the name of the band. Shaan says he doesn't have one yet and is looking for work. Khushi makes a face as though she saw something ugly (Beta baahir nikalnay doh usko! Phir dekhna kaisay hawa nikikti hain! LMAO😆) she says Oh gosh you are a struggler? Puhleezee. She again starts yelling to leave the house or else! (LMAO nice palti!)😆

She leaves the room. Just then Shaan comes out and looks around (Aww your chikni shave is of no use now! Wohh toh gaee!LOL) He says to Adi that he could not do anythig so he sent a girl?! Adi says she is his best friend okay! Adi tells him again to leave or else! and Shaan who is in his cool dude attitude completes the sentence for him and says "else It wont be good for me right?" And then he folds his hands in a We'll see attitude.

Precap

Adi confronts Khushi of taking a Uturn with helping him get rid of Shaan. Khushi explains that he is a singer from her industry and hence could be useful but he is struggling and strugglers are so wannabe types and so not cool! She tells Adi she will kick shaan out of the house and not to worry!

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-SYS- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beee!
IF isn't letting me like your update!
Anyway thanks for it!
Now can you text me already?!?!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Haha IF is weird sometimes! Hang on let me ask my brother in any case lol! and did you even read the update?

I think i have been too hating in the update! So i want to apologize if anyone felt bad! waisay toh everyone knows me here well to know i don't mean anything i say i don't need to say it but i was just reading it and i felt hmmm did i not do tareef of the epi in the update? LOL
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(there are some ppl who just LOVE posing he seems to be one of them)😆


i like it..lmao
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OF COURSE I read it!
In fact-hehe I read the update only😃
And its all your fault!

And I think I am rubbing off on you😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beeennniii *muwah* you make even a mudane epi fun...LOL...I so missed her "sexuse me" too...thats the first thing that came to my mind...LOL...I bet Shaan thought her the right words or what Sexuse me really meant...ROFL...cuteness the Hi5 really...and Pappi...The new girl is ok...OTT right now..but hopefully will adjust soon...Hopefully...Amd yes nice thighs...LOL...exactly my comments while watching the epi...LOL
Oh and those string phones do work..as kids we made plenty with paper cups...LOL...And yes he looked like a tailor...Kash I had one as Handsome as he...ROFL
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Wow !! Beenzy I mean...you wrote so much based on memory ????

I bow to you !!!1

As always it cracked me up !!!!

At first when I read that Khanak tells pappi that she is in her hubby's room and tehy should better be left alone..😲😲...I was like😕😕...W** !😲!!! Is Beenii sleepyy or drunk or something😆😛😆 !!!!

I was really shocked until I read your red one that u made it up out of frustration for Shanak scene🤣 !!!Lmaooo

Beautifully written...Thanks for teh way you wrote it !!! Always in element !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SYS-

OF COURSE I read it!

In fact-hehe I read the update only😃
And its all your fault!

And I think I am rubbing off on you😆


Hehe nooo i was expecting a weird episode na i told you so i was already prepared to be hating on it pehlay say! 😆LOL i am usually never so dissing in updates you know na 😆
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Originally posted by: kubare

Beeennniii *muwah* you make even a mudane epi fun...LOL...I so missed her "sexuse me" too...thats the first thing that came to my mind...LOL...I bet Shaan thought her the right words or what Sexuse me really meant...ROFL...cuteness the Hi5 really...and Pappi...The new girl is ok...OTT right now..but hopefully will adjust soon...Hopefully...Amd yes nice thighs...LOL...exactly my comments while watching the epi...LOL

Oh and those string phones do work..as kids we made plenty with paper cups...LOL...And yes he looked like a tailor...Kash I had one as Handsome as he...ROFL


Haina> haina? It WAS mundane na!! Like yumna called me before it even aired and i told her my fears! I told her today will not be a nice episode to update and i was so depressed even before the episode :( lol Ahhh her thighs were really very prominent they were so hugeee!!😲 and YESSS i knww we made a project once! and it worked it was so much fun!

I swear they can give us that ridiculous pleeje and thunkoo but no sexcuse me?😭 I wanted to laugh ! but khair rememebring that made me smile lol Remember what dhamak we did on the forum when it had aaired?!! Sehjal toh had gone crazy laughing!!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Manita-

Wow !! Beenzy I mean...you wrote so much based on memory ????

I bow to you !!!1

As always it cracked me up !!!!

At first when I read that Khanak tells pappi that she is in her hubby's room and tehy should better be left alone..😲😲...I was like😕😕...W** !😲!!! Is Beenii sleepyy or drunk or something😆😛😆 !!!!

I was really shocked until I read your red one that u made it up out of frustration for Shanak scene🤣 !!!Lmaooo

Beautifully written...Thanks for teh way you wrote it !!! Always in element !!!!


Haha Manita not exactly memory i toolk a pencil and paper and wrote the scenes in order and jotted a few points of khanak khushi conversation because it was long! But yes rest was memory

Haha I swear the day i really WANT shanak and i dont get them i need to MAKE them happen! LMAO drunk?! Haha you;re so funny!

Thank you Manitaaa <3

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