REQUEST TO CVS Of MUKTI BANDHAN

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Posted: 14 years ago
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The Telly Chakkar Article is disturbing . That IMV KILLS Jimmy .

The most endearing aspect of this unique serial is the HUMANITY in each character . If uou guys reduce IMV to a black villain ...this serial ends before it even has taken off .

Remember Smriti Irani's serial Waaris . An impressive star cast with actors like Ashish Vidyarthi and Iqbal Khan and modelled on the story of The Godfather...Waaris was VERY promising . It was shelved very soon ...not just bcoz one of the actors got unprofessional mid way ...but also bcoz the script writers made the gross mistake of turning the Godfather too inhuman too early . The senseless killings took away the fizz of the serial .

People are tired of back and white characters . They relate to GREY as Grey is a shade in EVERY human being .

IMV is the USP of this show besides Devki and Vaibhav . Destroy IMV and interest goes .

What makes IMV tick ? He is diabolical but the root of his ruthlessness is humane . LOVE .

He tried to burn Sabina ...kills bank manager ...now kills Jimmy . What story are you planning ?

Is he a Mafia Don ? IMV does not need to kill . IMV can use brains and money to create situations that achieve his goal .

Why would he risk his own butt for ordinary people that come and go like the bank manager and Jimmy ?

He can easily make Nirali HATE Jimmy by paying girls to tell tales of Jimmy , or catch him in compromising photographs .

The Sabina situation can be forgotten and the bank manager situation can be rectified by showing later that IMV didn't kill him after all but was intending to pay him off with crores in his account .

But The Jimmy killing will really screw things up . Badly . It will blot IMV beyond redemption .

We did not come to see this show to see a Sadhvi fighting a Devil . We came to see a Guru defeated by the implicit belief of his disciple in him ...Devki teaching IMV the positive aspect of a materialistic goal .

Devki actually had many positive elders to back her up . Baa , Master Charu, BB . Chandraprabha' return was totally unecessary to the script . How many elders do you guys intend to bring in to GUIDE Devki ? The number is increasing and Devki is still where she is ...she has done NOTHING .

Charu had every element that Chandraprabha had . Detached from material life...a yogini of sorts , depth of thinking , kindness ...Devki had GOT her mother . Why bring in a replica of Charu and addle the already numerous characters ?

Too many cooks spoil the broth CVS . No purpose is accomplished .

Instead of working on the script and developing tracks , you guys increased characters . Bad Mistake .

The only solace in your mistake was that it was Deepti Naval you brought in . Chalo , at least THAT was a relief . We love that actress .

But that does not erase your ERROR of not planning new tracks properly .

With no saas bahu drama ...no bitchy women , a great script replete with grey characters , a credible storyline , and SUPERB DIALOGUES [ the strong point of this serial] this serial can break grounds .

But you are hell bent on nipping it in the bud like WAARIS .

We request you not to turn IMV into a murderer .It will SPOIL this show beyond repair . There will be zero credibility later on .

Keep that family intact till the end ...may his serial run for long .

HOW CAN THIS SHOW BE SALVAGED THEN ?

The answer is simple . Stop Devki sitting at the feets of various elders and gazing respectully upwards in their eyes [ Thats ALL she is doing] ...and set her in action .

1}Show her teaming with Vaibhav and making Mumbai Floats a success . Bring in Sabina , show a personal tussle AND a professional highlight ...and show her winning BOTH . By the end of this track , Vaibhav should GET OVER Sabina . You guys can bring her in later as a hurt party , understanding what she missed out on by buckling in .

2] Show Devki then teaming up with Siddarth on a project ...a doomed project that IMV purposefully gives her . Show that she taps Siddarth's artistic potential and uses it to make THAT project a success .

3] Show Devki with IMV himself on a project coz Vaibhav and Siddarth are tied up and astounding him with the same sharp acumen he displayed . Show us that she stops him from using a ruthless approach and tells him to save it for the last and manages all with her intelligence .

4] Show Devki saving Nirali from a disastrous marraige and a rift between Devki and Nirali .

5} Show Rajvi saving Viranis from Viraj with Devki's help .

If at all u guys want to show IMV's ruthless punishments ...show characters like Viraj , Jimmy etc punished by him...but definetely not MURDERED .

These are mere IDEAS . So many of them are there . You guys just have to THINK .

Lastly , set FIRE to the plodding romance of Vaibhav and Devki . All this will increase TRPS .

You guys are keeping the heroine twiddling her thumbs and just showing elders spouting philosophies after philosophies . How long will this go on . Set her in ACTION .😃











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Posted: 14 years ago
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so this was the post you were talking about... hmmm

well I can relate to some of your arguments.. but I do have apprehensions about some.. will come back at leisure and give my arguments in favor or not.. 😆

again All i can say is lets not get carried away by some article- the legitimacy of that site has been questioned time and again.. more on your points later like I said.. badly need to hit the shower😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Enjoy the shower . Read Edit Add in blue and give ur thoughts .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok... good topic.. but let me start with a disclaimer.. my very long rant may not suit readers who are scared to jump the edge.. or live in their little bubble.. having said that.. my perceptions are just mine.. they don't count as perfect.. just personal..

Arguments in favor:

A big AGREE ... on the need for action on Devki's end.. i was rather disappointed with her calm inaction in proving herself innocent and salvaging her cos. repute.. while effort don't necessarily need to fruit.. just like Vaibhav's didn't but at least he made the effort.. ideally I would have liked Devki to be a lil proactive in helping him.. which she still can in the mumbai floats project..

Its true that IMV doesn't need to be shown to resort to murder in occassions which can be handled more strategically and politically.. the need for dire measures better be convincing.. I can get myself to buy the manager murder theory.. that he was probably not willing to jeopardize his career and future and take the blame for money...

I agree on the need to strong development, progression and climax of each track.. while the swing air track developed well.. the progression and climax could have been handled much better.. it was a damp squid at the end..
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now the long unsuitable rant bit..

Arguments not in favor of Kools perceptions..

One of the reasons I love this show.. is definitely the balance in characterization.. where one character isnt shown to be the smartest.. and the be all and end all.. every character have their strengths.. and it comes to how and when it can be used.. that's what makes the storytelling come in the genre of a mahabharat.. or a LOTR.. the similiarities will be etched.. subsequently

one at a time

Devki: well D is a 24 yr old who has immense potential when it comes to business acumen and a rare positive streak in her personality that can warm ppl towards her.. having said that she is JUST 24.. I would rather see her as real and not ideal.. I would rather see her being guided by a Vaibhav, Charu etc where they can in terms of experience and insight.. esp where she lacks them in accord of immaturity.. so I dont think she is in a position yet to do great things outside business.. and she does need help.. case in point.. the LOTR reference by chance of fate Frodo is chosen the ring bearer.. but he was inept in taking the whole crusade through.. he had his strengths but he needed an Aragorn, a Gandalf, and definitely a Sam..

while I agree on her being more proactive in her own life.. and being a point of influence in IMVs by some quirk I dont want to see her instrumental in Sid, Rajvi, or Nirali's life.. they have it in them to resolve their issues and get help of ppl in position of doing it.. so I loved that Charu helped Sid see through the turmoil in Rajvi.. I loved that Rajvi and Sid fought their own demons with each other's help. why did they not do it before.. sometimes the timing in life is very imp. and this was the right time I guess.. So I would ideally not like Devki to assume prime importance and meddle everywhere..

Return of Sabina: I have been witnessing this constant rant of Sabina needs to come back.. but only one question.. come back and do what. .fall from grace in the name of encompassing romance.. well sorry to say that people who claim to love her don't admire her for her inner strength.. that made me proud of her.. for having the courage to step back.. coz she knew the imp of a family not having got one herself.. for not wanting Vaibhav to let go of his family.. for not wanting to wreck his marraige.. for having dignity in her feelings for Vaibhav. .she had a grand purpose of making Vaibhav see thro some things.. and rediscover himself.. thanks to her I love Vaibhav.. but her purpose is over.. why should she come back.. to prove how strong VD are and unbreakable etc.. not needed IMO.. to wreck their equation.. well then all her convictions stand wasted.. for chemistry.. hmm there are 567426575 other shows with better lead chemistry in terms of sizzle.. in reality a lot of us have had episodes.. in our past.. some we love.. some we lock.. but how many actually come back.. 😛 I think the golden period of VS is over.. and the future of VD dont need S.. they have been treated well.. and I see potential in their camaraderie without dramatization

Return of CP and why cldn't Charu do what CP can: hmm here lies dwelling in the real psyche and bg.. IDK if the makers will put so much thought themselves.. but let me try.. so CP in theory is dead.. and its her re-incarnate parimita who's back.. I genuinely see her as a cameo like Sabina.. the comes as an inspiration.. and makes some people stand face to face with their worst fears.. of Devki.. knowing her mom wasn't as much a victim as she has made herself believe. .that her mom took the option of abandonment for her own sake.. and for other's and that's Ds test if she can come to terms with reality.. without living with bitterness.. and I believe she can with Vs and Charu's help.. and no I dont feel sorry for her anymore.. coz I dont believe that only the biological mother has the innate quality of affection and mothering.. sometimes the biological mother is incapable and a foster mother is.. this is a classic example.. novel concept..

Now the paradoxical yet imp point.. while i DONT want Sabina's return for V.. I do want CPs return for IMV.. coz he has conveniently put the motive of his diabolics ways of getting back at BB and D and most of his revenge deal on CPs death.. so now that he sees her alive in her skin.. and peaceful and happy in some place.. what does he do.. does he give up on his lifelong revenge.. was his so called motive the only motive.. or has it progressed to something else.. Talking of IMV.. I would go on with him in a separate post coz I have loads to say there.. in short. .CP is an amazing reality check for him.. that exposes his psyche.. not his redemption per se.. but a mirror.😊 and why cant Charu do what CP can.. coz a human being wants to believe somethings only when it comes from a certain person.. let's not pretend thats not true.. and there's no telling that he may still disregard CPs way of life.. but he is more emotionally attached to her.. so he may have to believe it..😆having said that..I do agree that the CP track started before its time. .there are other things I would have liked to see progress and develop b4 this came😆
Edited by sonali.19281 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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now on the very controversial viewpoint.. that may come across as blasphemous😆 but I had to get there..

IMV: ok I dont know how anyone sees him.. but I try. .and cant come to one opinion.. he has traits of Dhritarashtra in Mahabharat: a man born blind and blinded by the gross injustice done to him on that accord.. so blinded that he supports the ill-doings of his sons sitting quietly.. likewise IMV is blinded by his emotions for CP. .and the injustice meted to him.. that he has lost sight of fair treatment himself.. he has some traits of Godfather.. in that he is the lord of his empire.. and has set it up from scratch.. but was Godfather all clean.. is his motive to get rid of ppl in his way justifiable coz he is a mafia.. and do ONLY mafias and dons kill ppl.. hmmm let me talk about GURU the movie.. a ruthless businessman abashedly has nothing else other than ambition as a motive.. again to some based on Dhirubai Ambani.. had no shame in resorting to illegal ways when it came to his rise.. and his business..

Similarly IMV has been shown to be an aggressive businessman with no tolerance for anyone that comes in his way.. and although he proclaims he chose this way coz of the insult met to him.. I think m a little layered to just believe that and be happy.. it may have been his primary motive.. but his self-indulging narcissism that grew from it.. took it somewhere else.. so in all these yrs of business do you all want to believe that getting rid of the bank manager in this way was the first instance of murder he resorted to.. hmm just coz we havent been told.. otherwise.. what abt a union leader or any client or anyone that came in his way.. he was easily convinced of erasing the basti if V wasn't a roadblock.. maybe uprooting some hapless villagers.. who knows..
getting rid of Sabina.. maybe by killing her.. in the burning fiasco..

so that bulldozer trait in him has been there IMO for quite a while.. and the revelation of it comes as a shock to babuji and PK.. but I really wanted to ask them.. did they never expect him to do it.. likewise.. its clear a lot of us NEVER expected him to do it. .as for me.. I hardly know what to expect.. and nothing comes as a rude shock.. and if showing him resort to murder is the last nail of showing him slide down the abysmal pit of sin before penitence or redemption can come in.. if that's the storyline. .why scare off it.. I admire IMV for some of his viewpoints.. and I do know I wont expect him to rape anyone.. but I do expect him to get rid of ppl if need be in terms of his ambition. but then again it rather be convincing like I mentioned.. and again.. in terms of fiction redemption sorta comes after a grave sin.. just like Valmiki.. he was supposed to be a dacoit that killed millions before he took Ram's name for redemption and the emanation of Ramayan.. so why are we so scared.. to see IMV as the dark lord.. they r not black villains.. neither was Sauron nor is Valdermort.. that's demeaning their complexity.. are we scared of judging them.. well m scared of it being unreasonable.. but that's where story telling comes in.. will the makers imbibe the willing suspension of disbelief.. and I am willing to wait😊

I know LONG POINTLESS RANT.. but you cant crib. .COZ I TOLD U SO.. rite at the beginning 😆
Edited by sonali.19281 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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So I would ideally not like Devki to assume prime importance and meddle everywhere..

I agree . But Sonali they are only going on increasing the ELDER CAST and spouting sermons . That won't increase TRPS . I personally LOVE the sermonizing as the dialogue delivery is great . But I can understand what the viewer wants .too . To this very excellent point you made , I suggest they show it as seperate tracks in such a way that it happens gradually ...not overt meddling that other serils show ,Thats a shudder shudder . Oh hell , I think ur RIGHT . More I think abt ur statement , more I fall for it

.I think the golden period of VS is over.. and the future of VD dont need S..

I AGREE . Oh HOW I agree ! Don't want Sabina back AT ALL ...but it seems to be what viewers want ! So I suggested it ...if u notice , adding that it better be REALLY over by end of the track .I guess sonali its not over for viewers as it got no closure from the CHARACTERS . When V chooses D over S once and for all , the rants will STOP .

More will follow sonali , am re reading ur analysis as i get time and will answer u in bits and pieces .





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Posted: 14 years ago
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[hmm very good kools, i agree with most of ur suggestions
even i dont want imv to be a murdered, but now i have accepted this,
from now on i cant feel sorry for him.
yes he will be the most interesting and engrossing character for me,
reg devki and vaibhav , i agree with u wholeheartedly👍🏼just give d some time, she is still aan early bird, she needs to be polished well by vaibhav , then we will all see what we want to see😉
and i wanna see d in shorts , or minis😛, plsss cvs🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Kools.. like i said... all these are my personal perceptions.. and I dont believe it could be popular perception..😆 So I am no where close to what the audience wants.. but what I want😆.. and till now most of the things that have happened are close to my liking..

@Anmol Paaji: D in minis or shorts🤣🤣.. I can see tht.. arey Sabina being an actress wasn't shown in anything other than sarees and salwars..for some reason.. altho Nirali is shown..😆 so I dont get the parameters here.. but one things for sure.. if she does adorn them it will be for Vs benefit only😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonali.19281

@Kools.. like i said... all these are my personal perceptions.. and I dont believe it could be popular perception..😆 So I am no where close to what the audience wants.. but what I want😆.. and till now most of the things that have happened are close to my liking..


@Anmol Paaji: D in minis or shorts🤣🤣.. I can see tht.. arey Sabina being an actress wasn't shown in anything other than sarees and salwars..for some reason.. altho Nirali is shown..😆 so I dont get the parameters here.. but one things for sure.. if she does adorn them it will be for Vs benefit only😉😆

not only for him , for my and kools benefit also😉, , she is so pretty ,i am happy these days we get to see her only in salwaars, sarees r res for spl occasions also,
now d time to get more bold for us 😉
i am absolutely fidaa over her, i ahve stopped her jaap these days😆cos i have to do upodates, thoda neutral hona padta hain , in the beginning i used to do d jaap endlessly here😆😆

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