The Telly Chakkar Article is disturbing . That IMV KILLS Jimmy .
The most endearing aspect of this unique serial is the HUMANITY in each character . If uou guys reduce IMV to a black villain ...this serial ends before it even has taken off .
Remember Smriti Irani's serial Waaris . An impressive star cast with actors like Ashish Vidyarthi and Iqbal Khan and modelled on the story of The Godfather...Waaris was VERY promising . It was shelved very soon ...not just bcoz one of the actors got unprofessional mid way ...but also bcoz the script writers made the gross mistake of turning the Godfather too inhuman too early . The senseless killings took away the fizz of the serial .
People are tired of back and white characters . They relate to GREY as Grey is a shade in EVERY human being .
IMV is the USP of this show besides Devki and Vaibhav . Destroy IMV and interest goes .
What makes IMV tick ? He is diabolical but the root of his ruthlessness is humane . LOVE .
He tried to burn Sabina ...kills bank manager ...now kills Jimmy . What story are you planning ?
Is he a Mafia Don ? IMV does not need to kill . IMV can use brains and money to create situations that achieve his goal .
Why would he risk his own butt for ordinary people that come and go like the bank manager and Jimmy ?
He can easily make Nirali HATE Jimmy by paying girls to tell tales of Jimmy , or catch him in compromising photographs .
The Sabina situation can be forgotten and the bank manager situation can be rectified by showing later that IMV didn't kill him after all but was intending to pay him off with crores in his account .
But The Jimmy killing will really screw things up . Badly . It will blot IMV beyond redemption .
We did not come to see this show to see a Sadhvi fighting a Devil . We came to see a Guru defeated by the implicit belief of his disciple in him ...Devki teaching IMV the positive aspect of a materialistic goal .
Devki actually had many positive elders to back her up . Baa , Master Charu, BB . Chandraprabha' return was totally unecessary to the script . How many elders do you guys intend to bring in to GUIDE Devki ? The number is increasing and Devki is still where she is ...she has done NOTHING .
Charu had every element that Chandraprabha had . Detached from material life...a yogini of sorts , depth of thinking , kindness ...Devki had GOT her mother . Why bring in a replica of Charu and addle the already numerous characters ?
Too many cooks spoil the broth CVS . No purpose is accomplished .
Instead of working on the script and developing tracks , you guys increased characters . Bad Mistake .
The only solace in your mistake was that it was Deepti Naval you brought in . Chalo , at least THAT was a relief . We love that actress .
But that does not erase your ERROR of not planning new tracks properly .
With no saas bahu drama ...no bitchy women , a great script replete with grey characters , a credible storyline , and SUPERB DIALOGUES [ the strong point of this serial] this serial can break grounds .
But you are hell bent on nipping it in the bud like WAARIS .
We request you not to turn IMV into a murderer .It will SPOIL this show beyond repair . There will be zero credibility later on .
Keep that family intact till the end ...may his serial run for long .
HOW CAN THIS SHOW BE SALVAGED THEN ?
The answer is simple . Stop Devki sitting at the feets of various elders and gazing respectully upwards in their eyes [ Thats ALL she is doing] ...and set her in action .
1}Show her teaming with Vaibhav and making Mumbai Floats a success . Bring in Sabina , show a personal tussle AND a professional highlight ...and show her winning BOTH . By the end of this track , Vaibhav should GET OVER Sabina . You guys can bring her in later as a hurt party , understanding what she missed out on by buckling in .
2] Show Devki then teaming up with Siddarth on a project ...a doomed project that IMV purposefully gives her . Show that she taps Siddarth's artistic potential and uses it to make THAT project a success .
3] Show Devki with IMV himself on a project coz Vaibhav and Siddarth are tied up and astounding him with the same sharp acumen he displayed . Show us that she stops him from using a ruthless approach and tells him to save it for the last and manages all with her intelligence .
4] Show Devki saving Nirali from a disastrous marraige and a rift between Devki and Nirali .
5} Show Rajvi saving Viranis from Viraj with Devki's help .
If at all u guys want to show IMV's ruthless punishments ...show characters like Viraj , Jimmy etc punished by him...but definetely not MURDERED .
These are mere IDEAS . So many of them are there . You guys just have to THINK .
Lastly , set FIRE to the plodding romance of Vaibhav and Devki . All this will increase TRPS .
You guys are keeping the heroine twiddling her thumbs and just showing elders spouting philosophies after philosophies . How long will this go on . Set her in ACTION .😃
Edited by koolsadhu1000 - 14 years ago