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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww nice part but really very very sad . It feels like every single happiness was snatched away from Maan. Geet atleast was a baby but he would remember this whole life. I feel like crying for Maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wowww baby Totally Loved :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...

rashi paid for her mistake...

poor maan ...he lost all his loved ones...
that why he use to hate geet ...

thanks for pm..
count soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Update dear and apart for demanding an update , I was wondering how r u. U r nvr online and I don't c u on any1 else's ff as well :(
too busy?
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... i read last 5 parts in one go . maan have painful past feeling bad for both maan and geet past update soon cant wait to read more
Edited by kuhu18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Update dear and apart for demanding an update , I was wondering how r u. U r nvr online and I don't c u on any1 else's ff as well :(
too busy?

I will try to update😊... i am fine, my studies are tough so barely got time to do anything else. But finally, its weekend. right now i am in uni, and was checking what everybody else is doing...thats what i do come for few minutes, see what every1 is doing or read my favourite story update😊...what about you?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 12

Present

Maan came out of the shower, and changed into comfortable trousers and vest. He moved outside into the room. Geet appeared to be in deep sleep. He checked the time, only 2:30. He picked up his car keys and wallet and quietly left the room.

Geet sat up slowly in bed. She checked her mobile 2:30 a.m. where was maan going at this time when he had just came back ?

…………………………………………..

Geet sat beside maan and dadi ma during the pooja in the mandir. Then, they gave away clothes and food to the poor. Maan and dadima both were very quiet, so geet didn't say anything but when maan dropped them home and simply left, geet stood there for a long time there realizing that this distance could break their relationship.

…………………………………..

Many miles away, in another mandir a woman clad in white saree performed pooja. Her was face devoid of any make up, her curly black hair in a braid which reached below her waist, her eyes close, her expression serene. Anyone on seeing will believe in fairies, queens and princesses. The pooja finished and the woman opened her eyes and gracefully rose to her feet.

Her P.A gave money to pandit as she turned and went outside the mandir. A servant gave her the packed clothes and food bundles which she passed to the poor. When she was done, she went down the stairs where two cars were waiting. She slid into one and the car moved forward.

After 20 minutes, it stopped in front of a large building. Rashika rathode aka rashi came out of the car as a guard opened her car door. Another opened the office door, she strode inside confidence and authority in each step, her expression serene. People stood from wherever she passed. The new comers looked in awe while the older ones respectfully lowered their gazes.



She went into her office and everyone settled back. Rashi sat on her chair and her secretary, a 40 year old women trained by her father started telling rashi about her today's schedule.

...


Night


Geet waited for Maan still in her white colour shalwaar kameez. It was around 11, and he was still outside. dadi ma was sleeping, all servants had gone to the servant quarters. The whole house was empty, geet walked on the terrace, the wind loosing her hairs from the braid.


Geet looked up at the dark sky, nothing was visible. Feeling restless she moved back into room, and opened one of the magazine at the table but it was some business magazine and didn't held her interest. She put it back and decided to wait for maan out in the lawn as the silence in the house was too much for her.


The wind had stopped. Geet started pacing in the garden. Then, she felt a drop of water on her face followed by another. She looked up as the sky opened and rain starting falling. Instead of runing inside, geet opened her arms and let the rain soak her.


All the tension, and worries melted in the rain and she let herself enjoy the rain...


…...20 minutes later...


Maan drove the car through the gate into the drive way. The gatekeeper closed the door and ran back to his cabin beside the gate.


Maan parked the car and came out of the car. He was still sad but he had it under control now, he didn't want to add to dadi ma's woes. He was about to enter inside the house when he saw a flash of white from the corner of his eyes. He turned but no one was there. He peered more closely in the rain but still nothing. He was about to turn when geet came out from behind a pillar, a huge smile on her face.


Maan saw that she was totally soaked. She came under the porch roof.


Maan,'' pagal, you will get sick.''


geet,'' I love rain. I used to sneak upto roof in hoshiyar pur in rain and spent whole night in it.


A smile touched maan's face and he said,''yes, and you hurt your foot once during your enjoyment.''


geet smiled back,'' and you heard my shout from your room and came up and carried me to my room.''


maan still smiling said,'' hmm, come on lets go and sleep. It was a long day.''


geet shook her head in a no.'' you know what I wanted to do that day?''


maan relaxed against the door frame,''what?''


geet threw a handful of water at him. Maan closed his eyes as water droplets splashed on his face leaving freshness behind. He slowly opened his eyes and looked at the beautiful nymph standing in front of him. She had a daring smile on her face.


Maan smiled back and turned to go inside. Then, he felt soft hands on his back, there touch seeping into his body. He slowly turned back to her, his eyebrow raised. Geet turned him in a direction, her eyes trained on his. She moved closer, closer, more close and raised herslf until their breath mingled.


Her soft lips touched his and maan's eyes closed and then, she pushed him into the rain. Maan fell flat on his back onto the grass, rain falling over him in quick bursts until he was soaked. He heard peels of laughter and sat up to see geet laughing.A sleeping mischievous part inside him awoke.


Maan called her, ''geet?''


geet still laughing,''hmm?''


maan said a single word as he got up,''run''.


And she ran dodging him into the house, they circled around the sofa, then table. Maan caught her dupatta but she threw it off her shoulder and ran back outside. Maan followed her into rain. He finally caught her in the lawn. His arms encircling her and picking her of feet. He spun her in circles.


Maan,''admit your defeat.''


geet giggled.


Finally, maan dizzy from all the spinning, let geet go and laid on the grass. It was still raining. Instead of running, geet laid beside him both trying to look up at the sky in the rain and failing.

Finally, they closed their eyes and just laid there.


Then, maan felt long tresses moving on his face. He opened his eyes and saw geet leaning over him.


Geet,''have you ever danced in rain?''


Maan,''no.''


geet's face lit up,''lets try it.''


maan,''no music?''


geet,'' hmm we will turn on your car radio.''


maan,''everyone will wake up.''


geet,''dadi ma has taken sleeping pill and servants are back in their quarters, in this heavy rain no one will hear it.''


then, Geet rummaged through his pockets and took out car keys. She ran to the car and got inside but got all confused by the dials. Maan patiently leaned over her and turned on the radio. That done but looked at each other. Then, maan smiled and got her back in the rain. The soft music played in the background.


He placed his hand on her waist and her one hand on his shoulder and captured other in his hand. They moved slowly to the music, rain still falling over them.


Hona tha pyar
Hona tha pyar, huwa mere yaar

Hona tha pyar
Hona tha pyar, huwa mere yaar

maan awireled geet in a circle. Her back pressed into his chest for a moment, then he turned her face toward him.


Aaye nazar chehre hazaar
Hona tha pyaar, huwa mere yaar
Hona tha pyaar


geet moved forward unconsciously melting into him suddenly the water was like fire. geet placed her head on his chest

Tere dil ke sheher mein ghar mera ho gaya, ho gaya

Sapna dekha jo tu ne woh mera ho gaya, ho gaya


maan trailed his fingers from her waist on her back in upward direction. On reaching her neck he raised her head and looked deep into her eyes.


Doobe to yoon jaise bahaar
Hona tha pyaar, huwa mere yaar
Hona tha pyaar


geet murmered,'' I love you.''

Thaame dilon ki baahein, hum aate saalon mein, saalon mein

Paaye jawaab hum ne tere sawaalon mein, sawaalon mein



maan replied, the words slippping from his mouth,'' I love you too.''


he bent his head and took her lips in a long kiss still swaying to the music, caught up in the moment.

Suddenly, the sky lightened and her face became more clear. The aristocratic jawline, the straight proud nose. Maan looked at her replica of her mother and stilled.


Khwaabon ki dor toote na yaar
Hona tha pyaar, huwa mere yaar
Hona tha pyaar


geet finally asked,'' is your love stronger than the reason you hated me?''


maan thought about it and replied,'' I don't know.''

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update...
love dis song...
update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice i like it this Part alottt <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
u know smthng... i hate u... tom i have a xm and ur here updating and i am forgetting my studies and living in ur update... if i fail its gona be ur responsibility... huh...


bt yeah... loved the update... its still full of mystery... only time will tell the future of these lives.. bt i hope for the best... and dear i have a request.. i want to see a more confident geet.. cos in future she has to face a lot of difficult situation... maybe even widout maan.. though i hope nt... bt as per ur style of story development i think there will be serious misunderstanding between them...


and i hv one more request can u start a new season for manmeet as well... thats my fav ff and u finished that so early... i want to know so much more about those maan & geet... 😒

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