Friends. Important aspect of life-Poem |Thanks P#5

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Hey Guys.. 🤗🤗
I was supposed to write a passage for my class assembly ... 😎 😎
And I though about writing a poem! 🤓 A poem dedicated to the one of the most important aspect of one's life .. 😳😳

😃😃"Friends.." 😃😃

I wrote all I felt after changing into a new school.. 😛😛 Missing my oldies badly😭 but the new ones have made me overcome that feeling without knowing themselves..

This poem is also associated with MJHT.. 😃 There we learned the true meaning of friendship from the lovely actors.. 👏

Friends are truly the best people on this earth.. 🤗 So, know here I am with my new poem.. 😉 Please do drop in your views.. 😍 I'll be waiting for them.. ☺️

.. Nivriti ❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I sat down there in my alley,
remembering the moments spent in the valley.

All I knew that I was all alone,
And all the happiness had just gone.

Moments spent together flashed again;
In the droplets of the rain.

but came an angel with smile,
Rose the sun of hope for a while.

All she said was come with me,
We shall set all the worries free.

And here I am around,
My friends, together bound

Friends are the most best thing that can happen to you,
If ever sorrow or worry overcomes you!

Great times you spent,
Are nothing to repent.

Life is incomplete without their love,
They bring happiness and grief is shoved.

Friends are the marvellous creation of the almighty,
Thanks to him with all the mighty.

Friends are the best thing that can happen to you;
If ever sorrow or worry overcomes you.

What they would do is just smile,
And your stress runs a mile.

So I know who to turn up on,
Ready to help you always to move on.

Friends are the best thing that can happen to you;
If ever sorrow or worry overcomes you...
Edited by SajanRox - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Please do drop in your comments😳.. I took me a lot of effort to do so..😳

On I-F, this poem is dedicated to my friends😉 -

Hina, Neefa, Ambika, Joseph Bhai, Ekta, Somu Di, Bidu Di, Richu Di, Mitali, Meri, Sur Rashi Di Sanika, Sanz, Sanaya, Swati, Vidhu, Sonia, Vritz and Kritz etc.🤗🤗

Sorry if I missed out on your name!!☺️

You all have been great FRIENDS and SUPPORTS..

--Nivriti❤️❤️
Edited by SajanRox - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nivs..🤗

such a lovely poem yaar...
it's excellent...
loved it to the core..
thanks fr dedicating it to me...
it was so touching..
i seriously loved it alot..
plz do write more...
love ya loads
ambika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow!!!so nice...i'm bad at poems!!!!!!
agreatperhaps thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Ambika..

nivs..🤗

such a lovely poem yaar...
it's excellent...
loved it to the core..
thanks fr dedicating it to me...
it was so touching..
i seriously loved it alot..
plz do write more...
love ya loads
ambika


Thank you so much Biks for commenting... 🤗 You are one of my best friends here.. 😃 Thanks for being there with me.. I have written more, thinking of posting them soon! Till then.. Take Care :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: roknstarz_mjht

wow!!!so nice...i'm bad at poems!!!!!!


Thanks for commenting Neefa.. I am glad you liked it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautifully written one with simple words
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyyy niviii🤗

amzinggg poem..👏
realyy veryyy beautifulll haan
thanks 4 dedicating it 2 me😃
lovved it..
n esp d topic of ur poem was d bssstest thng,,FRIENDS...
thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome poem. Liked it. Thanks for pm

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