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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: Paradisekiss053

I will Thank you for reading. Hope you enjoyed it!

I loved it I hope Abhay realises Piya is not normal

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Untitled001

@Untitled001

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Posted: 14 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: pari_smart
I loved it I hope Abhay realises Piya is not normal

Of course he will understand but in time. Nothing early or late.

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Untitled001

@Untitled001

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Posted: 14 years ago

#393

OUTSIDE COLLEGE LIBRARY

'NO NO NO NO NO. GOD NO!' Pia thought when he saw Abhay coming.' I am doomed.'

She quickened her pace and tried sliding past him but when she cold hands touched hers her breathe caught up and she stopped instantly. His hand crept up her and held her by the wrist. She gulped feeling feverish and searched for ways to escape. The chances were no win.

She wished it wasnt happening. Just another dream... and she looked up. He was smiling at her.

'Dont tell me he thinks I am SHANAYA again!' she prayed.

Abhay: "Are you fine now?" he asked tilting his head to a side to get a better view of her face. She was looking down thinking whether she could trust her voice or not.

She nodded slightly enough for him to catch it.

Abhay: "Why were you gone again?" he pressed politely, 'Speak darn it. I miss your voice' Pia noticed the look on his face and silently gathered her composure.

Pia: "Caught the flu" she croaked. "It was the weather change" she added tensely. Abhay was enjoying himself thoroughly.

'Sadistic vampire' Pia grumbled in her thought and looked away.

Pia: "Um..." Abhay looked at her quizzically. "Werent you- I mean- you know- supposed to be... disgusted of me?" the last part came as a whisper.

Abhay's face hardened instantly. He wished she would have thought it was a dream too... 'She does a fairly well job in thinking I dont love her and stuff but NO she cant forget that I tried to make her let go of me. Gosh she is one heck of a girl' he thought bitterly.

Abhay: "I am very sorry, I know it must have hurt you after what I said... You just-" he thought foe some moments. "Took me by surprise" he said finally. he laughed trying to make it more convincing but Pia wasnt so sure.

She nodded anyway, helpless enough. She could never make him tell the truth. He was on hell of an actor and she wouldnt even know it he lied.

Abhay: "So friends?" he extended his hands and Pia looked at it confused at first and then hesitance... 'Friends arent enough' both of them thought together.

She shook his hand carefully and then pulled away.
Pia: "I am in a bit of a rush" she looked at her with desperation. 'Just stay for a little more' he wanted to plead. But he didnt. He wasnt going to win her over if he cried like a baby in the lobby.

Abhay: "Were too?" he asked expectantly.

Pia: "To my internship. Siddharth Mehra" she said with a unsure smile.

Abhay: "Oh" he gulped. he thought very quickly, planning "You need a ride?" he asked innocently, but inside he was planning to fake a car repair scene and prevent her from going to her new office.

She shook her head.
Pia: "I am goign with Misha" she sighed when she saw Shanaya gliding towards there direction and mumbling a quick apology took Abhay's leave.

Abhay turned back and grimaced. Firstly he had vowed to be friends with PIA! and secondly his day was just going to get worse as he saw Shanaya coming.

PARKING LOT.

Misha searched for Shaurya in the crowd of people in the reconstruction. She had hated people who worked slow but this time it was her personal heaven! With a god like Shaurya coming in her life she had changed completely. She had through of so many things, how she would tell him how she felt, how they would turn out... But as the time neared and the work ended in the reconstruction site Misha slowly realized the urgency of the situation...

She had to make a move fast! Shaurya was moving farther away.

That is when she found Shaurya.

Misha: "Shaurya!" she called out to him and he turned stunned. When he saw her she smiled lazily. That made Misha a bit disheartened.

Shaurya: "Hey..." he said in a laid back fashion. Misha walked up to him and took his hand.

Misha: "You dont look well. What happened?" she asked wearily.

Shaurya: "Nothing much. Didnt get much sleep last night!" he yawned making Misha laugh.

Misha: "What were you doing? Playing Hide and Seek with your dogs?" she laughed.

Shaurya: "Actually that is relevant" he laughed. Misha was taken aback.

Misha: "I didnt know you have dogs!" she exclaimed. She had allergies to dogs. Everyone seemed to like them more than her. She frowned. "You know you should be married to Panchi!" she snapped.

Shaurya: "Why am I supposed to marry Panchi?" he laughed.

Misha: "She is a bloody dog lover" she pouted.

Shaurya: "And you dont love them? Because..."

Misha: "Because they are all cuddly and people love em!" Shaurya laughed.

Shaurya: "Darling everyone loves you" she smiled and reached for her face. "By the way I dont have any dogs" he smiled, but underneath it was a deep tone to it.

Misha: "What do you mean? then why were you playing with them?" she asked dumbly.

Shaurya: "Oh silly Misha... You dont take everything seriously now! i was just playing along" he caressed her cheek and then let go suddenly.

Shaurya: "I need to attend to my work you see. THEY are waiting" Misha nodded.

Misha: "hey Shaurya!" she called as he walked away. He turned back and looked at her sharply. "Um... What about we hand out sometime?" her voice broke under his stare.

Shaurya: "Sorry. I will tell you when I am free" he smiled now, but it didnt touch his eyes.

Misha: "What happened to him?" she asked herself. 'Is it me? Did I do something wrong? Talk about something wrong? Does he think that I am a irritating teen?!' the thousand possibilities ran through her mind and stopped abruptly when a hand landed on her shoulder.

Pia: "Lets go!" she pulled me.

Misha: "Woah! Why are you panting?" she asked totally forgetting about Shaurya for a moment.

Pia: "Abhay is acting all weird" she said with a horror struck expression and Misha remembered again. That cold and heart shattering glare.

Edited by Paradisekiss053 - 14 years ago

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#394

oh so is shaurya a werewolf

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Untitled001

@Untitled001

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu
oh so is shaurya a werewolf

I dont know! 😆 You ask him! You will get to know soon! I guess not that soon... But okay. I dont know. (Maybe he is a werewolf!) You never know! 😃😛

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mangona

@mangona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#396

wow so shauraya is wolfie sounds intersting concept i wont say cont soon cause when the time i started my own ff i no how much u need time jxt writing small parts

lov ya

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Minahil

@minahil1997

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#397

wow wonderfull update!!!!👏

it was longer update yipeee!!!!🥳...abhiya parts were superb😳... loved pia's expressions😳... shanya was coming to abhay lets see wats she up too...so , shauraya is a werewolf!! cool😎... continue soon and thanks fr the pm❤️

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Untitled001

@Untitled001

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: mangona
wow so shauraya is wolfie sounds intersting concept i wont say cont soon cause when the time i started my own ff i no how much u need time jxt writing small parts
lov ya

Thank you very much. Yeah its real hard to get all the lines correct. To imagine the scene and feel what they feel. Its hard mostly. But I will try to update sooner. 😆 Thanks for understanding 😊

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Untitled001

@Untitled001

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: minahil1997
wow wonderfull update!!!!👏

it was longer update yipeee!!!!🥳...abhiya parts were superb😳... loved pia's expressions😳... shanya was coming to abhay lets see wats she up too...so , shauraya is a werewolf!! cool😎... continue soon and thanks fr the pm❤️

It was longer! yeah!!!! Really it took me time to figure out the Misha and Shaurya part. Honestly I never planned on him joining the supernatural world. But I thought he just belonged there. And him being gay is just... 🤢 So I am gonna make him the good guy bad guy. Lets see which one he is. I havent decided on it yet. It just came out of the blue. Hopefully you will like Shaurya! 😛

Shanaya is always up to bad stuff. In the next update you will see a new part of her. Which I think will surprise you a little and in the other you will understand a part of Abhay which I have kept a little secret! 😉

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#400

res!

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sorry for being so late to unreserve, i had to catch up with your whole fanfiction before i could comment. i'd only been reading it on-off initially. 😆

okay, i love natasha. <3 she's an awesome character. & i'm dying to read more about her and john. abhay and pia are amazing, as usual. it's kinda funny how abhay thrives on pia's helplessness in front of him. and then, his whole plan about winning her over..he's adorable. <3

the whole conversation between shaurya & misha truely blew me off. y'know what's worse, i could imagine it all happening in front of me & i felt worse than gautam was kicked off and turned into a gay. 😳 anyhow, lol, i'm guessing he's a werewolf. NICEY. 😃 erm, just a question - misha was talkin about abhay's heart shattering glare in the end, righty?

continue soon.

Edited by _Akanksha_ - 14 years ago