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Posted: 14 years ago
FIRSTLY SORRY FOR NOT POSTING COMMENTS ON PREVIOUS PART
and this part ,this part really is a treat u gave us ,its mindblowing.u are making this radev with angel part so beautiful ,we never want to come out of this.now rads even not daring to go down,
and this saas bahu quarrel talk,from where u got this idea from padma or any other.i don't thibk of any cb1 character.
u know when dadi in previous part asked wheather dev calls u princess,then she said no.but in today SBS dev said'of course she is looking like a princess'how cute na.

thanks for daily update idea dear,its so nice.thanks a lot
no problem for pm bcoz i never realized this a need ,i open only choti bahu forum and there i can see easily ur post.so don't worry at all.
thanks again.
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Posted: 14 years ago
AMAZING UPDATE 😊 ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Excellent update Devika loved it ,loved it and loved it...Poor Dev cooked for his angel in the night...Like Radhika's small small arguments with dev...Surender's reply to Dev was nice...
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update with dev taking care of his two princess even at night shows his love... thanks devika 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you friendskscjk, AditiD, wissen, mich, Nabesa, imissouri, khus1973, vijayarjun, sweetrose92, DAIRY25, v3gradev09, laxmis, sugarandspice, vinianil, ekta_bajaj, chalhov, radev_forever, radhika5, radha_bilahari, Tazzi, Indiangirl09, anu17, for giving the response back, really value it
@v3gradev09: thank you and really appreciate your kind words, and for responding with words.
@laxmis: thank you so much laxmi.. actually when ever i see your name, i think it mathces with our FF lekshmi, right. I think the spelling is different, but the pronounciation is same. iN kerala we spell Lekshmi's name like this.. CB cafe.. he he .. thanks to cafe...
@radhika5: thank you very much. and you know me, i am like this, things just goes with my mood, and sometimes the SBB segment or the forum mood, or something like that just move me forward. that happened when i did the radev s band aid scene. My mind was influenced by reading Raj bhayya's rasam segment, so i was totally in to that fun mood, but i wanted to see what happened between them too., so the first version was totally in that rasam mood, but then i consciously tried to change it, to somewhat fit into the story line, but otherwise it was a funny segment that i wrote.. so the same way,here too, it has great influence and the story just move on with holding onto it..
@Tazzi: thank you dear.. I know , even i am not a good reader, more thna that I am a dreamer..
@anu17;anu is a good name dear., i have apersonal story to share, but i know, it won't be appropriate, so i will hold onto it, but ANU is a very good name and have no clue yet which name dev will select???OMG! u gave 11/10.. thaaanks😃
@ekta: thank you so much ekta. one other reason with Pm is, that i feel like I am bugging too much you all, with my PM's. I don't know, i really don't want to do that, don't know who all are really interested in reading this as I don't see many of them getting back , not even once, so only.. i changed my criteria, if you really wish to read, then yes, please check back here,and also if in case if i can't give an update, i will surely mention that at the end of that part, so... so thank you for liking it and giving that response back..
@diary25: thank you dear
@vini: thank you.. so you liked the dev's cooking.. loved my Big B... i wish we could see Amithab and Avinash in one screen... that will be awsome..
@suwin; thanks chechy.. yes, dev is so caring so only we all are loving him so much, right.. that 's what making him unique from anone else.. i hope we can see him soon in CB too..
thanks for the PM.. loved it.. i may use that prediction segment later when radhika dadi scene comes.. thnaks for sharing it with me dear...
catch you all soon
Please let me know if I am borign or deviating from main thread ok.
thanks
take care
Devika
Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reminder
Surender: Mr. big B
suchi: Jaya bachan
Dev: avi
Radhika: rubi
LEchu: DDLJ sis
Sammy: handsome punjab munda😆 ( ye, tell you one thing i got a PM saying she likes sammy so much , mainly because he is from punjab!!!, can consider :ranbir kapoor, or shahid, or who ever you wish to see)
why? because I want you to imagine their face while reading with their common facial expressions, then it will be easy... atleast Big B's.. becasue his silence speack volumes..
thanks
Part 117

Dev was controlling hard his smile seeing Radhika's uneasiness in front of everyone, he enjoyed it, and didn't plan to tell her the truth as he loved to see her that way... especially after a long time. While keeping that food piece in his mouth he imagined her figure walking behind him asking him whether he came to her room or not(ladder part where he left without telling her), and she folding his dress with confused face. Unable to contain, the laugh sound expelled out from this throat that he chock on that food piece, and as a reflex he hit over his head with his hand and then took the water glass from Radhika and tried to gulp it , and relaxed.

"What was that Bro?, are you ok?" Lechu's concerned voice came out.

Dev looking at her: um, I am ok.

Lechu: but why you were laughing?

Dev looked at Radhika's concerned face and then to his mom's, and then looking back at the plate: nothing, I , I am ok.

Suchi: um

But again the face of his Radhika, brought the bubbling smile on his lips and mind, but he controlled it with by sipping on the juice glass.

Surrender left to work alone as he has to meet somebody else at a different plot.

Dev and Radhika left together to office. As they reached Radhika walked faster to her space.


Dev: go slow Radhika

Radhika: Deb may be waiting for me.

Dev: atleast you don't have to worry about dad today in office.

Radhika: otherwise also I am not worried about papa. It is always good when papa is around, then things goes well.

Dev: um, I am glad you are comfortable here.

Radhika: me too, so that I don't have to sit alone back at home.

Dev smiled and walked with her to the office and then went to his own cabinet.

"What is this Bro? not fair at all"

Dev looked up to see Sammy coming in with a disappointed face.

"goodmorning Sammy"

Sammy: goodmorning Bro, but that is not at all fair'

Dev tightening his forehead: what is not fair?

Sammy sitting on the table corner: see bhabhi asked for golgapas and you made panner bhurji!! Not at all fair

Dev dropping his jaw looked at Sammy in question

Sammy: you should have called me na, don't worry next time don't forget ok.

Dev sat silently looking at Sammy's face, and really got surprised to see his cool attitude, doesn't he the same who walked in yesterday to the office with a silent face, and he was acting so obidietnly, even dad was impressed by seeing his attitude, and how come today he sounds like the person whom I met back at home.

Sammy: Bro, don't worry, let's go out later and surprise bhabhi, ok.

Dev: Sammy

Sammy who was playing with the paper weight, moved his throat: um

Dev: why you look so different from yesterday to today in office., don't you have to start your work.

Sammy getting up from the table corner: ha, so only na, anyway the boss is not here and looks like won't be coming back anytime soon, so let's do one thing after lunch let's find a break time, I will come and call you ok, let's give surprise to bhabhi ok.

Before Dev could respond, Sammy got disappered from his sight.

Dev thought to self: ye tho abhi se sala jaisa behave kar reha hei

Time went fast and he found Sammy waiting for him inside his cabinet.

Dev walking in: you need something

Sammy: are you done with your work?

Dev: no few more to finish

Sammy: didn't I tell you to finish it quick, see when you do work, you need to focus, otherwise also no need to blame you, bhabhi is like that, I was also watching ...she is just running around, so how can you sit back comfortably and focus ,right?.

Dev looked at him again in confusion.

Sammy: is there anything urgent work pending?.

Dev: no

Sammy: ok then come

Dev: where?

Sammy: come with me na

Dev walked out with him half heartedly.

Time ticked by

As the guys walked in, they saw the employees working seriously.

Sammy: um, I am impressed Bro, see the boss is not here, but look at his employees, I think before we left it was not this tight.

Dev proudly: um

They walked towards Surrender's office room, with the bags in hand.

Sammy: Bro, bhabhi is in there, right/

Dev: um, I called her earlier and told her to wait there.

Sammy: good

Surrender's big office chair was turned to the other side, and his eyes were fixed on to the file in his hand. Radhika was seriously checking on something in the monitor. The guys got in thru the slightly open door...

"tantatang , Hello bhabhi, can you guess what we brought for you?'

The sound of Sammy echoed inside that little room, as the door was shut with a bang behind.

Radhika raised her face and looked at Smamy's face surprisingly.

Sammy coming near , keeping hands behind , hiding it from Radhika's vision: bhabhi, why you look so surprised, just guess, quick, I will give you only 5 seconds, as I can't trust your pathidev. So, I will count up to 10 and before that you need to tell me what is in my hand ,. Ok.

He started counting: Ok here I go, 1

Radhika stood on her feet and looked at Sammy all puzzled

Sammy continued his counting: 2,. 3 4 5 6

Radhika looked at Dev embarrassingly, and he shared a light smile

Dev tried to read Radhika's face seeing the pale look...

But then Sammy: 10

He brought his hand in front: you failed, see. that is what happnes, when you look at your husband for an answer.. Ok, now this is for you

Radhika with chuckled throat: what is it?

Sammy: no , no. no talking.. give me one minute ok

He spread the bag over the table and within minutes his hands moved on quick in different things and he lifted up his hand with that small puri filled with all the stuff in it: now open your mouth and say aaa

Radhika stood in shcok, Dev sitting on the side chair, just watched Sammy's action. Radhika looked at Dev, signaling to look at the main table.

Seeing that Sammy: no no, you don't have to take Bro's permission all the time, see we both went and brought this for you, that means you got the permission already, now say aaa..

Radhika again looked at Dev helplessly

Sammy: bhabhi, please, why you have to look at Bro all the time

Sammy casually looking at Dev: Bro, you gave the permission , right

Radhika looked at Sammy, Sammy just showed his wide open mouth telling : aaa

Without any choice, Radhika opened her mouth,

Sammy: ye hui na bath , saying that he placed the piece in her mouth ' aur esse hum pani puri kehthe hei'

Sammy; ok, now you relax and sit and have it all

Radhika still stood ther with the food piece in her mouth

Sammy:bhabhi, eeeat, then secretly: otherwise that tiger will show up any minute and then everything will go upside down, so better eat quick ok..

Radhika suddenly gulped it down and chocked

Dev suddenly looked around and found the water filled glass on main table and grabbed it and gave to Radhika. She slowly gulped it down. While she was relaxing, Dev rewinded the scene, did he miss catching on some image. His eyes went side and his face jerked back to look at there, and found his dad's serious face, looking at their action. The blood just drained from his face, suddenly he looked at Radhika's face unbelievably, and Radhika looked at him cinfirming his presence, Dev looked at Sammy who was trying to take that side seat , and totally in a very cool mood.

Suddenly they heard a knock at the door and all their attention went to there

Smamy getting up from that sitting posture, looked at Radhika and mumbled: is that will be the tiger!!!

Radhika felt her heart stopped beating.

Surrender"s eyes also fell onto the door.

Surprisingly they found Suchi at the door.

Dev's lips parted saying: mom

Sammy tried to bring a relief smile and said to self: Oh God, I thought it is the boss, glad it is mom.

Suchi looked at the kids section, and then looked at Surrender

Suchi walking in: Oh, so my whole family is here, nice..

Radhika tried to walk towards Suchi, but Suchi's eyes caught the sight of the open packets on Radhika's table, she walked to there, passing Radhika and then looking at the pani puri mix things: you are having fun here, I thought you maybe ruling over everyone, but it seems like you are having fun family time here and no wonder you are spending that much time in your home office. Making me a fool uh,

...so this is going on here, no wonder she is not eating anything back at home, whenever I ask her something she will say: no mom, I am fine, anything you can cook mom, , so you people are cooking and eating and having fun here, and I think Lechu and I are outsiders now, right?.
But then she walked towards surrender in question , Sammy's eyes followed her and fell on Surender, as a reflex his one hand went up to hold his heart in place: ye kab andar agaya, mom came alone only, right, did he see me, Oh god, give me the var to disappear from this site now.

Radhika looked at Sammys' reaction, she clearly saw his trembling lips, she understood what his mind maybe voicing out.

Suchi getting near Surrender: I never thought you will turn your office room into a dining room. So Mr. Surrender has two faces , good to know. I was feeling so bad for Radhika being near you, I never thought you are this soft to her. So you brought golgapas for her, so nice, now let me also try some.

"That's not fair mom, I need a share too"

Lechu's voice followed

Suchi: what are you doing here?!!

Lechu: I called chander bhayya to pick me up and he told me that he is taking you here, so told him not to worry about me and I took an auto and came here too, I also want to know what you are doing at dad's office.

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Suchi: um, look at dad's room,, they are having party here. Poor me, I thought I will come here and pick Radhika and go out and have panipuri , but it seems like your dad already made the arrangements, see its all ready, but I think it won't be enough for all of us, so let's only the ladies have it and the guys have to watch us.

Suddenly LEchu's eyes fell on Sammy, she ran towards him: Sammy you are here too, what a surpsrise!!!

Dev in mind: um, what a surprise, i know she came here to meet him only.. nice try Lechu, that also in fornt of dad and mom.
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She went and held Sammys' hand and looking at Suchi: mom, I was looking all around for him, but see he is here, so you two met already, not fair, I thought I will introduce him to you.

Suchi looked at Sammy's face and walking near: so this is our Sammy, um, actually I was so surprised to see the food in your dad's room and was really shocked to see the changes around, so didn't get a chance to pay attention around, by then you also came in

Lachu with a happy tone: so you just came in, you didn't meet !

Sammy tried to move his dried throat, but falied

Suchi touching Sammys' lower jaw: now we met na, right

Sammy tried to give a shrinked smile, that also failed...

Leaving Sammy's hand Lechu ran towards Surrender: dad, can I join your office too, its so fun to be here around with everyone.

Surrender who was silent all this time, moved his throat and got up from his seat

Sammy slowly held Suchi's hand in his for support, waited impatiently for the words to exhale from dad's mouth, keeping his ears active.

Surrender looked at Dev: Dev, what is happening here?

Suchi looked at her husband and son's face !

Dev: vo dad. Mei

Sammy expected the next look of Dev at him, he tightened his hold on suchi's hand, Suchi looked at Sammy's face unbelievably, as if he was unknowingly clinging onto his mother for support when scolded by his dad.

Surrender's next look fell on Sammy: I am asking both of you? What is going on here?

Sammy in mind: no you called only Dev , I heard it clearly, so better ask your son only, then why a sudden change now by adding both!

Surrender: Sammy, I am asking you too.

Dev: vo dad

Suddenly Sammy interfered: vo dad, what happened was, Bhabhi wanted to have some spicy golgoppas, and unfortunately Bro couldn't get it last evening.

Suddenly Lechu: night

Smamy : uh?

Lechu: last night

Sammy: oh ha, last night, so poor bhabhi , today when I asked her she said "she is really craving for golgappas, then trailing his voice he said: so only , I asked bro to come with me out, and we brought this for me , no sorry bhabhi, otherwise who eats pani puri in office, no one na.

Suchi controlled her laugh, seeing Sammy's expression and explanation, and she saw his figure trying to hide behind her. She looked at her husband's face..

Surrender comprehencing everything in , looked at Radhika, and asked in a calm tone: is it so beta

Suddenly Sammy looked at Radhika for support and Suchi felt his losening hold on her hand.

Radhika looked at Sammy helplessly and then looked at dev

Sammy mumbled secretly: arre baba, kisi ki jaan jaa rehe hei, aur bhabhi ko Bro ka permission chahiye..vo bhi es vakth!!!

Suchi heard that and she waited for Radhika to respond

Radhika: ji dad

Suddenly Sammy releasing his hold on Suchi's hand, just circled his arms around her and with a smile: ye hui na bath, bhabhi ho tho aisa and thne looking at Suchi: heina mom.

Suhci just smiled seeing his relief...

Surrender looking at Radhika: then you should have told me na, why you need to disturb their work

Sammy: don't worry dad, the work is all done, I think Bro has to finish something, but otherwise we met today's goal already.

Surrender looked at Sammy again,

Sammy hiding behind Suchi: hui ma, ye tho sun liya

Suchi with a smile: leave it for now, why you are questinong everyone like a school teacher.

Surrender: Suchi

Suchi: what?

Surrender sternly: this is my office

Suchi: ha, patha hei

Surrender was about to open his mouth, Deb showed up at the door

"Sir, they are here, can I call them inside"

Surrender looked at his office, his eyes fell on radhika's table with the pani puri mix

Surrender: no, take them to conference room, I will meet them there

Deb: ji sir

She smiled at Suchi and walked out.

Surrender looked at everyone and then taking the file in his hand , he walked out.

The minute he stepped out form the room, Sammy moved little away and took a deep sigh breath: thank God

Suchi walking towards Radhika's table: vo kyum?

Sammy: mom, you don't know anything, if you haven't come on time, I don't know what all might have happened?

Suchi: oh really!

Lechu: Sammy, so you are really afraid of my dad

Sammy: who said that

Lechu: bhabhi told me the other day

Sammy mumbled: who is not scared seeing a tiger in front.

Suchi: what did you say?

Sammy suddenly looking suchi: nothing mom, Ha, it's true that I am little scared of Dad, but its not only me, even Bro is scared of him, look at Bro's face then looking at Dev: but Bro what time he came? nobody told us

Dev sitting back on chair: ha, they told us, but we didn't see

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Sammy very casually: I don't remember anyone telling us

Dev: you only told that all the employees are working seriously, so they gave the signal

Sammy : ye hui na bath, so that means, when we came in dad was watching us too

Dev: exactly

Sammy like showing a fainting action : bhabhi, why you didn't give us any signal.

Radhika sitting back: how do I signal, when he was directly looking at me.

Sammy: hope he won't throw me out from here tomorrow

Dev : for you it is ok, you do have a place to go, think of me! You drag me into this trouble na.

Sammy: no Bro, you are safe, see how nicely bhabhi supported us

Suchi : so, you all were playing around here

Dev: if it was at home it was ok, but I am glad mom you came, and thank you Radhika

Lechu: so bhabhi, now why wait, eat na

Suchi: ha, it will be really tastey, yum, I also want one

Sammy: ye hui na bath, give me few minutes, I can settle this for everyone

Sammy went near the table and within minute everyone started munching on it, with exchanging laugh and jokes.

Dev: Radhika, why you are sitting quiet, dad will be ok, you eat.

Radhika: no, I am fine

Dev coming near: why, what happened?

Radhika: no, I had some, and that is enough

Dev softly: is my little princess is ok?

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Radhika with a corner smile: um

Dev : I know, dad went cool only because of her.. but then what happened to you?

Radhika: nothing, I am fine, but I don't want more

Suchi: let's dad come back, let's go out, ok.

Sammy happily: me too

Suchi with a smile: um, why to ask, now you are part of our family na

Sammy coming near, gave her a hug : thank you mom

Suchi holding his shoulder: let's have some fun ok.

Sammy: done

Suchi: Dev , you ok right

Dev was about to say something

Lechu: ha, Bro is ok

Dev: how do you know?

Lechu: please Bro don't spoil mom's mood now

Dev: um, but tell me actually what you are doing here?

Lechu walking near to Radhika: actually now I am feeling jealous

Sammy: jealous!

Lechu: ha, look at you guys, enjoying your day, wheras poor I am still sitting all alone, quiet and listening to these lecturers, you know how boring it is.

Suchi: ha very boring, if you don't pass with good grade, I will postpond your engagement to another one year.

Suddenly Lechu: no mom, don't do that, but I have an option for a part time job here.

Sammy: that is a good idea Lechu

Dev: no, you better concentrate on your studies ok

LEchu: Bro

Dev: um

Sammy: but part time job is a good option bro,

The door opened again. The group went in silence. Surrender scanned around the tidy office room which turned into a disaster within minutes.

Suchi: are you done for today


surrender seriously: um

Suchi: then come, lets go out

Surrender: to where?

Suchi: that I leave to you, but come let's go


surrender: give me few minutes

Dev: ha mom, I need to settle something, will be back soon , ok

Sammy looked around and said: ha, me too and it was clear that there is nothing to complete but was making up.

Radhika controlled her smile, Sammy looked at Lechu

Lechu: ha me too

Suchi: me too what?

Lechu: need to finish something

Suchi: so you are going back to college!

Lehcu: no mom, in bro's office, one second, I will be right back

Saying that she went out, the minute she stepped out: Sammy show me your cabinet

Dev: um, I know LEchu

Lechu: how can I say that inside

Sammy: you don't need to say, without that everyone will come to know..

Lechu: Sammy

Dev: lehcu, this is office, so you better hold onto your tongue

Lechu: ok baba, I will walk silently

Whereas inside Surrender's office Rahdika and Suchi cleaned the table and picked few spilled stuff from the floor and made it look neat and tidy again.

Radhika: mom, so what you think of Sammy ?

Suchi: exactly how you said.

Surrender kept his ears active, looking into the file

Suchi continued: he acts as if he knows us all well, he cling to me like my own son, and I also didn't feel like I am meeting him for the first time.

Radhika: actually you came to meet him only, right?

Suchi: ha, that was also one reason, even though Dev told me he will bring Sammy home, I thought I will meet him unofficially

Surrender: so you are not here to take Radhika out?

Suchi: are you listening to our talk, um... yes , I am here to take her out too. Ok

Surrender just smiled , rolling his eyes up, looking at Suchi's face.

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thank you friends for reading my post, if you like this segment click the like button, let me know if i am boring.. really appreciate it..

thanks and have a good day
Devika..😃 part 118 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/42623601
Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Regarding PM's Hai friends... i got few concern regarding not sending PM's. Just don't want to bug you with my daily PM's. I will surely send you PM's when a break happens with my posting, but otherwise I will be updating mostly daily this week, and occationally next week depending on my time availability.. and from june I may take a small break, to refresh myself. and when I come back with update after that , will surely send you all a PM. but otherwise please check back in forum for the update, if you are really interested. thanks and take care Devika.
Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I wish I was like your lechu. Hilarious update Devika. I was actually picturizing the office scene while reading it. I thought Suchi met Sammy already.
Now I need some some gol gappas and here is my only option for now. Just looking at them.
Edited by laxmis - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: laxmis

I wish I was like your lechu. Hilarious update Devika. I was actually picturizing the office scene while reading it. I thought Suchi met Sammy already.

Now I need some some gol gappas and here is my only option for now. Just looking at them.

Thank you so much Laxmis.. lot of thanks.. really appreciate it... it was his aprents who came to meet the girl and family... sammy stayed back home.. i thought i may bore by writing too much about all.. so only skipped that part... so thank you so much for liking the office scene..
and what i have to say about gol gappas... lol i learned the spelling now.. i thought it is one word.. thanks for sharing.. its really yummy...
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Posted: 14 years ago
What a fun episode---
So Sammy gets to fulfill Radhika's craving---
Sammy and Lechu are so alike and perfect for each other---Poor Dev, before it was only Lechu giving him thetrouble and now Sammy too..and Sammy and Lechu together--he is going to be in for a ride---hopefully his princesses can save him---

The whole golgappas--episode was fun and now I want to go and have some (so thanks Laxmi for posting the picture)...

And Suchi is sly too---came to the office to check out Sammy---

Love this light-hearted episodes--it is truly fun to read...

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