New ff -RAAZ , ch 6 updated pg 3 raaz revealed

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Thanks I forgot about eggs thank god I noticed and changed it :D

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He called his mom : mom can u give the keys to rashi for a minute she has to go to study room to get some files for me.

She gave the keys to her, made the duplicates quickly, gave it back to koki and it was midnight. Jigar, Aehem and Rashi tip toed to the secret room on the top floor and rashi quickly opened the door and heard a noise.

They all entered and locked the door.

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They went inside the room and had locked the door. The room was all dusty and had spider webs. Rashi was cleaning the room with Mani, while on the other hand Aehem and Jigar finding some clues.
Aehem opened the back door window as it lead to the back garden and let air in.

On the other hand, Gopi had woke up, she saw he wasn't in bed, followed his wet footsteps of his shoes and suddenly she stops at the outside of the secret room upstairs. She gets shocked as why he was there, when no one was allowed. How did he get in? she thought.

They heard Gopi shadow and stopped. Gopi went and sat on the stairs until they don't come out.

Aehem, Jigar, Mani and Rashi still searched until ................

Until Mani sees something behind a huge frame of Aehem grandad. She said 'look". They went towards it and mani made the frame slide and it moved. They saw a huge lock with password on it.

Aehem knew what the password was and typed it in and it opened. Jigar puts the torch on and Rashi takes everything out. All the papers.

They put it on the floor and starts to read them.

Aehem got shocked to read one paper which said private and confidential on it under Hetal name.
He gave it to jigar and whispered what it said:
" Hetal medical report. Barren all life. Had 5 miscarriages. Not able to give any child "

Jigar had tears in his eyes and spoke" then who am i" am i a modi" am i adopted"

They read another paper
" koki gives her child to hetal so she can adopt it meaning Jigar the illigimate son of Parag Koki and the younger brother (same blooded) of Aehem modi, to be adopted to Hetal.

Aehem and Jigar are both shocked. Both real brothers. Not cousins. They had tears. The family had to answer this.

Rashi: what is this? hetal not my MIL but kaki, real MIL is Koki. 😭 😭tears in her eyes and starts to cry.

They take all these papers and fold them. They put them inside their pockets. They came out the secret room and headed towards RaJi room. Mani Rashi Jigar and Aehem all in tears and arrived to the room. They stop as they see Gopi there standing with folded arms.

They came in and she locked the door. she spoke: What were you all doing in that secret room and how did you get the keys? I saw all of your footprints there.

All shocked and aehem spoke in anger: chup ek dum chup, kamrai mein jao.

Gopi: why are you shouting, i know the truth, about u and jigar relationship. Both of you are real brother. I know all the stuff you all didn't know. How because i already been through that room and read the papers.

Aehem, Jigar,Mani and Rashi crying and shocked.

Gopi : yes i know you all shocked, i found out this truth long time back before kinjal wedding, me and kinjal went to the room and made a duplicate key read all the files and kept it a secret like all the elders. yes you all think i don't know how to read and write, but i do, i secretly went to school by my neighbor in childhood, went to college and then stopped. I pretended that i didn't know anything. Then i thought aehem will understand me but no, he is after that Anita, anita who had got married just a month ago and is a mother of a girl. If you all want i can tell everyone but why should i, this is not my family, how can it be, when my own husband doesn't accept me

Aehem all shocked, and more he was.

He sat down in the room with everyone and never slept all night. They all were worried.

It was morning, They weren't ready to go down, Gopi took the sari and went outside but stopped by Aehem and spoke: don't go we need someone shoulder right now and your leaving me here.

Gopi: what about everyone downstairs, we will speak to them today, don't worry i will do the speaking, go and get changed i need to do the aarti then i have to leave the house aswell tonight as nani had left and went back to her village.

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Gopi: what about everyone downstairs, we will speak to them today, don't worry i will do the speaking, go and get changed i need to do the aarti then i have to leave the house as well tonight as nani had left and went back to her village.

Chapter 5

Gopi gets ready and comes down all looking sad. She gets everything ready. Pooja starts and everyone comes. Rashi,Jigar,Aehem, and Mani comes slowly and stands right at the back with all the papers and when the pooja finished they advised everyone to go to the main hall not to the dinning table.

Aehem: Gopi has to say something, something serious what we all have found.

Kinjal comes at that point and stands with Gopi.

Gopi musters all the courage and speaks: maaji , Kya Jigar aap ka beta hair, ya hetal kaki?

the elders looked all worried and she spoke: what are you talking about?

Aehem chucks the papers in the middle of the table and says : what is this ? it says, hetal kaki, had been barren all her life and mom gave jigar when he was born to her and she adopted it. You all separated my blood brother to me all these years even though i have been asking for a brother.

The argument went on and on until, Koki speaks: yes both of your my son, but, now jigar hetal is your mother not me, end this situation right now.

Koki breaks down, and parag is shouldering her, telling her to control herself. Hetal comes to her, look your son calling you mom, he has come back to you, am here to look after you and everyone, there my kids as well aren't they then. Go and hug him.

Koki aehem and jigar hugs and all 3 breaks down.

Everyone was tensed and sat in the middle, looking for an idea of what to do.

Jigar speaks: all these years i always felt my mother is koki kaki and it is confirmed.

He goes towards her : why mom, why did you do this to me ? You always fed me before Aehem and that and this what i get in return.

Aehem : mom you should thank Gopi, if she never found out the truth, never made us suspicious about these letters then we wouldn't have found out.

Everything gets all sorted out and hetal forgets the pain of not being a mother.

Gopi speaks: kaki, even though i don't have a mother or a father, can i accept you as my parents.?

Gopi : its time for me to leave the house and this situation crops up , what shall i do now ? Aehem wants me to leave the house. Nothing i can do ?

She turns towards him: now tell me, what shall i do? do u still wish the same ? shall i leave ? you can't stand me for a minute?

Aehem glanced at her for a minute, everyone looking at aehem to decide what to do.

what will he say ? Will he accept her ? has he mustered all the courage to tell her he really loves her ? find out tomorrow ...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Beautiful update, hope you continue soon

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Chapter 6

Aehem forgot his ego, forgot everything and only remembered he needed her, and doesn't want her to leave. He gathered the courage he had and spoke : my mother has never taught me to be how I was in the last few days, how I treated you. I don't know what I really want. He goes towards the temple and looks at it and left everything at him.

He spoke agan : as far as I know, all the pretending I have done in front of nani, and how I got engaged to you made me melt my heart which no one could do except from nani. I have always thought one can't get in love after leaving their 1st love but that's not the case kismat has made a u turn for me, it made me dump anita and realse that she is a girl who will go after money. But destiny made me marry such a girl who is pure from the heart, who will have the courage to take my taunts and abuse and now it made me realise how much I love that girl today. That girl is none other that you Gopi. You. (Still looking at the temple). After you asked me this question made me hurt a lot, why, can't you think yourself what your heart says to you as it telling you not to leave means I. Wish the same as well.

Everyone behind in tears crying except Rashi looking all annoyed and had to call her mom about this incident as her plans fail. Gopi breaks down while he turns around and runs to her room and stands beside the window looking at the moon.

Downstairs, koki speaks : jao dikra jao, aaj raat os ka dil jeet laye, bechari bohot ziyada toot chooki hai !

Aehem goes upstairs and looks she is crying looking at the moon and the stars trying to find her parents and locks the door. She hears the door closing and wipes her tears and tries to put her pallu on top of head but ahem stops her and speaks: when ur husband never wants u to put that on why are u putting it, I never ever said I want u with that pallu did I? Look at Rashi nahi that mehrani for a minute. How she ruined your life ?

They stood staring at each other and she breaks down again and hugs him tightly. (Already in my lala land lmao ) -

Am gnna continue from here with sad music lyrics - mora piya enjoy reading and comment :D

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago

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Chapter 7

Piya haiii
Piyaa.
Moraa .aaa.. Moraa
Piya .. mora piyaa ..
Aaa..
Piya Mora.. Mora piya
Maanat nahin .. more piya ..
Mora piya

both are hugging each other. Tears came running down, Both felt the pain. Aehem tries to make her stop crying but she doesn't

Mora piya mu se bolat naahin
Mora piya mu se bolat naahin
(you are all I want.. I am nothing but you, just look at me please, say something)
Dawar jiya ke
(why dont you speak to me, you are all I need)
Ooohh dawar jiye ke kholat naahinnn
Mora piya mu se bolat naahin
Mora piya mu se bolat naahin

Gopi looks at him, while Aehem takes his coat of. He takes his shirt off and gopi turns around. He picks her up, puts her on the bed an switches the light of.

Darpan dekhun(ba ga re re sa ni da sa), roop niharun
Hoo darpan dekhun, roop niharun
Aur sola shringaar karun
Phir nazariya baitha bairi
Kaise ankhiyan chaar karoon
Koi jatan ab,
Hoo
Koi jatan ab kaam na aave
Uss kach sohat naahin
Mora piya mu se bolat naahin
Mora piya mu se bolat naahin

Aehem lying on top of her, He breathes heavily on her and puts his head on her neck.

Hamari ek (ga re si da ga), muskaan pe woh toh
Haan hamari ek muskaan pe woh toh apni jaan lutaata tha
Jag bisra ki aanthon pehariya, more hi gun gata tha
Baagai kaaa
hOOo
Bhagai ka koyi sautan ho ke mora kuch baawat naahin
Mora piya muh se bolat naahin
(say something, why dont you speak to me, look at me)
Mora piya muh se bolat naahin
Dawar jiya ke
(just speak to me please)
Ooo dawar jiye ke kholat naahin
(don't you know I just can't live without you)
Mora piya muh se bolat naahin - 5 times

It was morning. Gopi wakes up just on the usual time and sees him awake getting changed. She wakes up and realizes she not wearing clothes and takes her gown and wears it. She takes her sari from the wardrobe and goes to the washroom. Aehem looking behind and smiling. He had a peaceful night last night after a long time and happy as he got his wife back

will continue from here - busy busy here, omg am so besharm and hayat on me :(

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Posted: 14 years ago

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ch 8

Rashi was on the phone to her mum, telling her all the stuff being happening in the house and how all her plans backfired at her especially of that gohem relationship.

Jigar over hears it just like as usual and pretends that he never heard it.

He ignores it this time and thinks to tell aehem about it and he does but at office.

Gohem comes downstairs to the aarti and participates in it. And this time another dandiya competition was coming soon. Modis were in no mood joining. So they left it.

At the dinning table scene, Everyone was waiting for the food to come and sees it was theple and other dishes. They started to eat it.

Aehem disliked theples and refused to eat it. Jigar forced him so he ate it for his sake, and thought its not bad so he is going to try another one. He was sure gopi had made it.

So gohem spent time looking at each other and goes abroad later on

this ff is now finished as well

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago