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Posted: 14 years ago
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~Aparichit~
1

Maan was anxious & nervous. Well this was not the first time he was seeing a girl but still the nervousness was there. Thinking about questions that he would want to ask. Reminding not to make mistakes that he made last time. Just being sure..after all he was Maan Singh Khurana.

Geet was nervous & continuously talking with her friend Ridhz & Armaan on a conference call. They were more of teasing her. Pulling her leg,
armaan - how can u have arrange marriages?
Ridz - that so cute & different
Geet - amy yaar I am already very nervous
armaan - I will still tell u to back off.. rahul is not that bad u know
Geet - yuck!! rahul
armaan - wat about Sid??..woh new intern
Geet - he is too cute..I want some one more macho..not boyish types
ridz - well the best is taken already
armaan blushed
Geet - ridz seriously if u plan to drop out let me know.
Armaan - u didn't tell me u liked me
ridz rolled her eyes so did Geet
they laughed ..geet was feeling little better lost in her talks.


Maan was in the car with Anuraag is childhood friend & Daadi. Maan was still on the call with adhi discussing the new take over. He shielded his nervousness getting over involved in the job. The car stopped in front of handa hawali.
Daadi - challo Maan
Maan - ek min Daadi
anuraag snatched the phone & switched it off.
Maan - annu yaar plz.
Annu - relax Maan
Maan took a deep breath & checked himself once in the mirror before they walked towards the hawali.
Brij, papaji were already there to welcome them.
Papaji - ghar doont ne main takleef to nahi huwai
Maan - nahi uncle
they escorted them to the living room. All of them got introduced & had a small exchange of views before Geet actually walked in wearing a simple suit & holding a tray. She was so nervous when she came in front of Maan. He was more looking at her than focusing at the cup he was lifting. She was looking at his hand that was not able to reach the cup since he was actually not concentrating on the task he was doing. She smiled more of a giggle. Made him bit conscious. He immediately looked away & reached to the coffee cup.

Finally the moment both for them feared the most left alone to talk in the room.
They sat silently for few minutes. Geet was already restless with his silence. She would have exploded with her questions, but then she was told to be sweet & soft..aaHH ...she was hating it. Especially his silence, if he takes so long to start, then when will she finish her questions, she had so many things to ask him & they were left alone only for 15mins. She began to knot her pallo. Babaji..inke moo main zuban nahi hain kya.. how does he manage his business like this..uff!! guys can't be so shy? For a moment she decided ok ..if this guy is so shy types then well I am not getting married to him..well the thought was short lived as she was blown away with wat he said.. u r really beautiful. I don't have any thing to ask u. agar tumhe kuch pochna hain tho pouch lo.
She almost choked..wat he is marrying me for my looks thats it.. he doesn't want to know anything about me!! wat the hell!! but all she could say was ur also
he lifted his brows...beautiful!! he said in shock..
she immediately corrected .. good looking ..I mean macho types
his eyes popped with her choice of words & she bit her tongue wondering wat she just said.
They both laughed at their situation.

Then a silence followed. She quickly recollected her questions
do u smoke? She asked abruptly
he smiled no
do u drink?
Occasionally
how occasionally
not sure depends
like weekly or monthly or yearly(that was typical dr question )
he looked at her blankly & she also felt that was way too much
do u have a past..not that I mind but I think I have the right to know.. (she doesnt mind..ha ha..she may just burn off .. & offcourse refuse to marry..but still she had to say that)
no
cool..waisen for ur information I had a crush when I was in 10th & one when I was in college, but it was only a one sided crush thats it
I really don't care
he said causally
she was taken a back, how can he not care. But then her next question
wat r u hobbies
traveling

yeh kaisen hoby hain she wondered well then..next question
he was quiet comfortable with her already so was she. They were able to strike a decent conversation if u call it so. But yah by now he knew she was talkative.

Before they went back to the hall he asked for her number
kyun she blindly asked
he felt little odd then countered in case of emergency I can call u
wat emergency she wondered, she was thinking it all in romantic ways..like he may feel desperate to talk to her, miss her etc etc etc !!!
tum dr hona? He asked teasingly
reality stuck!!! he meant dr wala emergency.. she felt embarrassed with her own thoughts going so different.

The families jelled & it was a yes from both Maan & Geet as well. The engagement was fixed for next good day that was after 6days.

-BLOG aparichit part 1-
-NEXT PART 2-

hope u like this journey of Maan & Geet to maaneet in aparichit.
Aplease let me know how u like the concept
another love story ..aparichit means unknown..ignorant
love
muskan
armaan & ridz
anuraag
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Heeey marjawaan ghur kha kay Muski ur asking about the concept simply superb ,awesome ,mindblowing...no pAnga no short cuts simply BAR DIKAYEE and BAND BAJA AUR BARAAT.
CONTINUE SOON
Edited by Dilsay - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Amazing update .
It made me all nostalgic
the typical meeting a stranger with coffee tray
and the opposite person totally confused as to
what to do ,look or take the cup and the the talk alone .
i can see the scenes playing in front of my eyes already.
Maan has a best friend Anu now.Good for him.
Their convo was superb.
Maan took such a long time to start and he totally flattered her with his first
and last questions.
Geet's list was too good too.
Number for emergency and Geet's perception of emergency was the best.
Maan was such a tease why would he go to her hospital only if there was really an emergency?
The starting was super good
continue soon.

I know it is too much to ask for but please
dont end any of your FFs its OK even if you dont update
them on a regular basis.
Sometimes when i am commenting on a happy update or hoping for something happy
i always feel i should not and try to restrict my thoughts because if everything is going smooth the FF may end and i would never want that to happen.
Just a request.


Edited by Ramhari - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
MUskan di...sounds like a fun ff...do pm me the updates as well...please!

puth thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
awesome concept and lovely update muskan...
Dilsay thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
EDITED MY COMMENTS ON PAGE 6😊
imaastha thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Nice start...nice update
luvd it...
Cont soon
Ramhari thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
I have a small request to make too
so i updated my comments.

Amoureux thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
Me likes ofcourse. Whats there to not like when you are writing. Please continue soon... I'm curious to know how the story proceeds 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Wow Congrats firstly on d new Concept
it is a brilliant marvelous concept
luved d update way way way too much
plzzz continue soon

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