tunna’s saarthi ff... [nice name na:-)]

hi guys..... i'm sorta a bit nervous rit now (which is quit unlikely for me) cos i'm asking u guys for something... 😊 actually i had written a bit of a ff on my comp.. many days back... but cudnt gather the courag to post it here... dunno how it is sinc no1has read it yet... but thot today y not the day.... ( actually nit sinc its12.30 a.m here )

guys i thinking to put u thru a bit of the tortur now... but still cant get that much courage... will u guys read a bit ???😊 😃 just tell me if its bad, okay, or not mentionabl🤢... i dont even know if i'll post the 2nd part.. i'm seriously scared !!!

okie.. shall i ????? ..........

The story takes off in the goenka house…. The characters as usual.. there is the arjunz with his bhoomiz n there's the surajz with his manu darling(manasvi yar) happily married couples.. living under the same roof as the not so happy mansen kaka n yuvraj the brat along with mamaji the rat …..wat's different here is arjun n auraj r close bro's.. no probs between them whatsoever.. 😊

In the morning…Monday… dining table- shaku,sidharth,baisa,dadaji,kaka sahib,yuv,etc etc… every1except a&b…n s&m…

Cut to upstairs..a-bs room…. Bhoomi enters the room: o my gosh… arjun…..!!!! ur still sleeping!!! Its 9o clock…

A:kya hai bhavri… sone kyu nahi deti…
B: are ek to utha raho hoon n ur saying sone kyu nahi deti!!!
A:ab tum Sunday ko bhi sone nahi dogi to main aur kya kahunga!!!
B : (starts laughing)hehehehehe… hahahaha… 😆 😆
A : getting up…lo ho gaya… tumhe meri khushi pyari nahi hai na… itni achi neend thi n tumhari hansi sun ke sab barbad ho gaya…!!! Y u lughing??
B : cos today's Monday… not Sunday… ab weekend mein bhi kam karoge to ye hoga..
A : o my gosh..!!! its Monday… n I'm late.. n I'll b dead…my boss ll kill me…

B : but ur the boss
A : okay.. then I'll kill myself.. bhavri! How cud u b so careless…should hav woke me up earlier…now c wat u'v done!!!

B becomes angry.. n turns her face… arjun sees this..n then tries to manao her…
O bhavri… bhavri re… bhavu….i'm sorry bhavu….
B : wats this bhavu??
A : are ur my bhavri, my bhavu, my bhoomi, my bhoomika chawla, my…
B : do u want me to call u ajju???
A : okie… I get the pt bhavri!
Anyways gotta go.bye bhavs…hehehe

B (smiles) : bye ajju !!! hehehe

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hehehheheeh... 😆 😆 😆 n no fears tunna...ur greattttttttttttt....lovely...continue plzzzzzzzzz.... 👏 its great....gud work...continue plz... 😃 😃

well i promised u to tell the truth that i like it or not but why u r so frightened.it's too good means it's awesome 👏 👏 specially the bhavuwala line 😆 .plz post next part very soon.

Aw..It's nice. I loved the A-B scene. I could actually imagine them in it..Do continue..

do cont...its really good tunna

you rite 1derful 👏 👏 !!who told tht it won't b like.its very good n funny 😆.way 2 go tunna!!!!

thanku allllllll 🤗
u guys r sooooooooooooooo chweeeeettt !!!!!!!!!!!!!
umm ... i think i'll post the 2nd part now... it's a short 1... plz continu reading 😳

part 2: 😃 😃 😃
Cut to suraj manasvi room.. rewinded at 9o clock.. mansvi is sleeping peacefully… suraj comes to the dressing table fully dressed for office. Sees mansvi's reflection in mirror, looking xtrmly cute as she is smiling in sleep.. then khushi comes in the room..

K : good mrning dad!
S : gud mrning kiddo! All ready for school?

K :yes.. just a bit left.. (goes n jumps on the bed beside manasvi)
K : mom. Wake up!! Its 9o clock.. I'm ready for school.. mera tiffin do jaldi.. els I'll b late!

M : (getting up in shock) wat! Its 9! OMG! Let me get u ready.quick. chalo..
(takes khushi's hand n goes towards cupboard)
K : are mom.. c I'm ready.. dad ne tayaar kar diya.. just gimme tiffin quick.

M (sees khushi is all ready, then turns towards suraj) : thanks dear 😊 . Tumne usse tayar kar diya.. y didn't u wake me?
S : no thanks honey.. u were sleeping so peacefully with such a nice smile that I didn't want to wake u.. 😊

M : that was cos I was dreaming of u… 😳
S : wow.. is it so.. ???
M : koi shaq. (both r abt to hug) 😳 😳

Khushi: are jaldi karo aap log… I'm getting late..
M : o sorry beta.. gimme1min..(facing suraj) meet u downstairs honey.. 😊




wat say ppl??....

nice attempt but can anyone tell me how can i post my own pics on this forum