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their love overflows...for their bodies are unable to contain it...as it touches the souls of the loveless...a wink of the eye sets the arrow in motion...and the walls tejji built are brought down...by the art of persuation...that our song has now mastered...his eyes give away a small hint of concern...to reveal that tejji does care for his wife...when a shy glance to her husband makes the arrow hit the bullseye...although reluctant at first...he complies...and two small bites is all that it took...to fill the growing appetite in pammi's heart...and bring happy tears to her eyes...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well-written again👏👏👏

Loved the Maaneet gestures with the bonus winks😉😉 and TeAmmi were cute, wish we had some sweet BG music for them too😍

Even though not much of Maaneet, I felt their presence. Geet had some extra color today. Maybe thy will seal their lips tomorrow😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Looks like it was Teji & Pammi's day...😊
No much of Maaneet?? Except for the wink i keep hearing about everywhere??😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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overflowww...omg omg omg...i almost went with it😆

beautifully written...👏
as it touches the souls of the loveless...a wink of the eye sets the arrow in motion...😉😉😉
when a shy glance to her husband makes the arrow hit the bullseye...
and two small bites is all that it took...to fill the growing appetite in pammi's heart...
hope the shower of love...reaches all the hearts and drench them with joy ...they deserve
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Lovely Sylvi,
The line i liked the most was,'to fill the growing appetite in Pammis heart.'
It describes Pammis longing for the love of her husband.
Her real hunger is not for the food but for his love.
Wa...wa...Superb Silvi.
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It's a love which cannot be expressed or hidden fully. It is said that if you keep trying to express it, then it will become just a sound and the feelings are lost.
Love Cannot Be Expressed In Words.
It Is Bigger Than The Universe,
Deeper Than The Ocean,
Innocent Than A Newborn Baby
And More Dangerous Than War!
Sometimes silence has more volume vs words.
Great take Syl!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautifully written Silvie...I too was touched by the scene...and after reading ur beautiful poetic version I was even more emotionally turned on by it...although not much of Maneet but the episode was good because it focused on the difference between the relationship between the two couples...actually it showed the difference between love among a rural and urban couple...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: riza792

Looks like it was Teji & Pammi's day...😊

No much of Maaneet?? Except for the wink i keep hearing about everywhere??😆

it sure was their day...i loved it...i was dreaming about TeMmi in a situation like this...want to see more of them...😍
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Originally posted by: Naz_Angel

overflowww...omg omg omg...i almost went with it😆

beautifully written...👏
as it touches the souls of the loveless...a wink of the eye sets the arrow in motion...😉😉😉
when a shy glance to her husband makes the arrow hit the bullseye...
and two small bites is all that it took...to fill the growing appetite in pammi's heart...
hope the shower of love...reaches all the hearts and drench them with joy ...they deserve

there was winking all over the place...loved to see pammi get emmotional...a husband feeding his wife is a beautiful gesture...
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Originally posted by: Chelsha

Lovely Sylvi,
The line i liked the most was,'to fill the growing appetite in Pammis heart.'
It describes Pammis longing for the love of her husband.
Her real hunger is not for the food but for his love.
Wa...wa...Superb Silvi.

yeah...pammi is craving for love...she wants her husband to be loving towards her...it was such a beautiful scene...

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