AR sesn 2 FF -kshitij ki aur- gulmohar pg 67 - Page 41

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Posted: 14 years ago
link to last part
Preview to Part 15
part 15 will be few days friends but would try sooner than later
jab shaam ka suraj dhalta hai
chup chup ke chaand ke saaye mein koi mujhe pukaaraa karta hai..
Ragini was standing by window ;Her face had anguish ,regret and devastation written all over , but it also had glimpse of relief in between;
she looked at empty bed and sofa and sighed deeply and thought khaana khaya hoga ke nahi?chai kahaan se milegi wahaan ,would there be a place to lie down there...I shouldn't have come home
suddenly she remebered the evening again..she started to tremble and turned back from window and leaned against the wall,her eyesight fell on her picture with anmol resting beside the bed table...she started at for few minutes then suddenly covered her face with her hands and sat down on floor
Yeh maine kya kar diya? bolne se pehle socha kyun nahi
jab hosh mein taare aate hain
besudh raat ho jaati hai
Anmol was stairing from the 5th floor window absently looking at distant stars and mighty galaxy at its full bloom..
He stood for few minutes watching the tranquility of nature but unrest in his heart made him restless and he moved away from window and started pacing back and forth in the corridor
to the silently moving staff he seemed like a sensible person who was respecting the privacy and peace of the place..but they were un aware of crashing waves of sorrow inside his heart...at odd times a wave would break its boundry and spill off from his eyes and he would wipe those remenants away with back of his hand...
A nurse passed by and he looked at her with questiong eyes ,she had motherly face and was about 50 years or os old.
She came forward to squeeze his hands silently and pointed upwards gesturing him to have faith in almighty.He nodded and sat on a chair and closed his eyes ,while resting his head against the wall.
Her eyes started at him through darkness and reminded him of...
this uncertainty was not killing him as much as those words had...they had pearced his soul and shredded his heart into zillion peices..
anger flashed in his eyes and he almost hit is fist on the wall saying...
what else can I do , I am human being too not a bloody saint
he tightened his fist and his knuckles turned white...
he added silently
Ragini Ragini
mere kaano mein dheere dheere aawaaz kisi ki aati hai
Ragini had compsed herself a bit now and was resting on the bed when suddenly she woke upo with a start...what woke him up ? she was sure it was Anmol...but room was empty...bare soul less without him..
jab shaam ka suraj dhalta hai
chup chup ke chaand ke saaye mein koi mujhe pukaaraa karta hai..
kahin aankh zara si lag jaaye sapnon ki raani aati hai
The kind nurse looked at him and smiled,covering him with a soft light blanket,Ragini suddenly felt as if her heart was light again;as if everything was ok now,she felt calm and composed,She picked up his pictured and hugged it close to her heart and lay down on the bed and closed her eyes...
kahin aankh zara si lag jaaye sapnon ki raani aati hai
main us se aankh churaaun
wo ulfat ke saaz bajaati hai...
jab shaam ka suraj dhal jaaye...
Edited by sami01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@sami..read preview its already so catchy .👍🏼
got me bit teary-eyed two soulmates and when alone reminisce about that bitter moments..
good ragini concern for anmol and her feeling how its empty be it her life or the room without the presence of the one who is close to her heart anmol..
"She picked up his pictured and hugged it close to her heart and lay down on the bed and closed her eyes."can picturise this scene and ragini needs get such jolt and how he is a gem...
"Ragini had compsed herself a bit now and was resting on the bed when suddenly she woke upo with a start...what woke him up ? she was sure it was Anmol...but room was empty...bare soul less without him"..love this scene and its so meaningful ..he said ragini there and she woke up in her room ..
beautifully penned down added with the shayris.will sure wait for the full update..👏
Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: savee_k

@sami..read preview its already so catchy .👍🏼

got me bit teary-eyed two soulmates and when alone reminisce about that bitter moments..
good ragini concern for anmol and her feeling how its empty be it her life or the room without the presence of the one who is close to her heart anmol..
"She picked up his pictured and hugged it close to her heart and lay down on the bed and closed her eyes."can picturise this scene and ragini needs get such jolt and how he is a gem...
beautifully penned down added with the shayris.will sure wait for the full update..👏

savee so sweet of u to read the scene dear...shanti said preview de socha de hi doon,am happy u found it interesting, wil sure write full update soon...me too could feel Ragini's love in it,hope their love wins...as u mentioned in another post love is just like life..not every turn is bliss...some turns bring tests of strength and soul...but if we have some one with us then...
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG sami i have heard that miracle happens but this is def the biggest miracle. SAmi dii updating so fasttt.😉 choolly mazak kiya. Dii the preview is super cool... aap plz jaldi update karna plz plz with a cherry on top...
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Posted: 14 years ago
@sami..the way you have penned it its really captivating andcan feel the emotions..
yes so true love is like life not always a blissful one ..some testing time always there and same hapenning for angini..my wish too their love wins in the end..
will definitely wait for full update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice sammy👏

Ragini's longing is so well shown
Anmol also feeling teh same way
It so well pictureized two souls waiting to be together

Its so needed for them to find each other now and get close ..
Lovely part !! Now the parts will be interesting !!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
sami preview is awesome cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
sami, preview was awsome,you know how to keep us asking for more, please continue soon. thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
intezzar aur thoda sa o meri sakhio...milegi pyaar ki manzil hum sabhi ko..
ragini ko milegi anmol saugaat..
anmol ko milegi jeewan ki ragini
vasu ko milega beta wo bichda hua..
jeevan ki mehke ki phir se wo baghiyaa..
hope rajan ji taras kha lein hum pe aur dikha dein humko yeh sapna pura hota hua...jo dekha hai hum sabhi ne jaagti aankhon se in 6 maheeno mein...
thank you once again for love and kindness dear friends i am overwhelmed by ur love
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Posted: 14 years ago
@sami...ragini ko milegi anmol saugaat..
anmol ko milegi jeewan ki ragini
vasu ko milega beta wo bichda hua..
jeevan ki mehke ki phir se wo baghiyaa.."
awww cant wait for these happennings esp the two first ones..the two soulmates reunion..😳
i know you will give us a total treat..😊

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