AR sesn 2 FF -kshitij ki aur- gulmohar pg 67

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Shanti

@shanti05

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Posted: 14 years ago

#381

Wow Sammy this was one amazing part
Preview was striking when Anmol kisses ragini's forehead and then Vasu comes there and she intrudes their private moment
Lekin phir tho kammal hi ho gaya I liked Inders attitude towards Anmol
We all know that Inder always liked Anmol maybe he dose'nt know exactly why vasu is annoyed with Anmol or he is pretty normal for teh human being he is 😆

Now vasu inka kya karey !! She is always after Anmol's good books... And atleast she admited that he is there for tammy !!😊

The scene between the bachha party and Anmol playing football was daam sweet ..
I could imagine Anmol wearing his track pant and shirt and playing outside and Tammy 'papa yeah tho cheating hai when he made a gola'
Aww he would look so daam sweet and his hair flying in air !!😍

And Ragini comes there with water and he is leaning against the tree trunk/. His actions give me goosebumps reading itself.. Imagine yeah scene hoga tho kya hoa .. Marjawaah !!!
Lucky ragini 😳 He wanted to move on with her with his love of his life with comeplete mind soul and heart.. Yes Anmol it will happen .. She also wanted to do that i am sure .. lekin kab hoga yeah milan .. magar aab she wants to spend more time with him but he stops his steps and he also knows the time will come thoda aur baki hai !!
"Tho chaley ander "Aww he truly disspointed himself and her to some extent !!😉

And Inder aab lya hoaa papaji ko !!😭😭😭

Now you need to continue soon !!!😭

Very nice updfate 👏👏👏👏

Ragini needs to be drawn towards him and the cards are falling in place as Anmol knows she longs for him !!😳

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#382

Diii I love YOu so much. You are the best. I am never tired of tellin you all these all the time. Kya likkthe hai aap dii. Only you can build up stories like this with somuch love intensity and passion and anger. Dii you are the best of tthe besttt.

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shanaya28

@shanaya28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#383

@sami...read the chapter again..too good and so capturing...👏

really you are such a good writer .in all scenes you blend all the perfect emotions be it angini ones or vasu-anmol one..of course anmol-tammy that it feel so real .. we can picturise every moment while reading the FF..

do continue soon as i feel story will take a good turning point...😊

Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago

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Shanti

@shanti05

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#384

Sammy I think your story is daam slow and gripping...

You bring out most of Anmol's gestures well
Ragini's should melt big time.. this guy has given up half of his life for this family..
Its Ragini's pay back time
BTW congrats your post crossed 15,000 views !! lagtha hai story is attractive many people😉

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apus fan

@sami01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#385

guys thanks kal ko am back from easter break thanks for all love and support

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Rekha

@rekha02

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Posted: 14 years ago

#386

okay , just loved the update 👏❤️. Wish the cvs continue on the same and looking at the amazing views your FF thread has Iam sure it will be is a huge hit with mindblowing tvrs.😃.

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apus fan

@sami01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#387

mujh ko mohabat hai tum se ...

sach yeh sunoge kabhi to...

wil eb replying and updating after 28 guys am sorry bec i am stuck with a project,but mohabat hai aap sabhi se mujh ko bahut ...

dil ki baghiya mein sirf aap hi aap ho

so be back soon

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bhondu2010

@bhondu2010

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#388

Very nice part

vasu and her contract again 😆
The way she says he is good with Tammy atleast he recognised his value again

I like dteh part when Tammy comes in

Papa aap chodiye please...

arey beta get ready first, i have to finish this for badi mama...

no Papa you promised to play

She missed her papa a lot !!

Later when tehy were playing and Anmol resting on teh tree looking at Ragini Aww soo romantic 😍
You write so well
I can pictureise tyhe whole seen

And Inder ko kya hoaaa
Please continue soon suspence bada jaa raha hai !!

Your FF is becoming a super hit .. Really seems so realsitic and good on a show point of view !!👏

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@sami01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#389

guys ui made a topic about flower...s see and comment guys would mean a lot

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/members-lounge/1671519/they-are-back-again-pink-white-and-red-again

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apus fan

@sami01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#390

50 page Thank you ...

to all my lovely friends who made this FF so possible with love suggestions and encouragemnts a big thank you once again...

here is my small appreciation post a small thank you to u all...

i am adding a small flashback scene before anmol and Ragini had fall out...

its just a small scene very tiny for bringing smile on my friends faces...

anmol was hmming absently and combing his hair , he looked at his daughter's clothes thrown on top of laundry basket and sighed, as much as he absolutely adored her ,he was feeling a bit selfish and hoping that Tammy should move back with khushi.

It would also mean his sweet daughter was out of the trauma she had endured before their wedding.

Ever since then Tammy was sleeping in the middle of their bed and it had been almost 6 weeks he sighed.

He finished with his hair and put tammy's clothes in basket properly and looked up in mirror and smiled at his own reflection ,seeing the glint of boyish mischeif and a tendril of hair falling on his forehead,escaping from his vigrous gelling.

He looked at his reflection for few seconds and then grinned ,his smile reaching his eyes..

Arey Beta Anmol zara zameen pe aao,yeh khayali pullav bana na chodo warna ...

with a mock salute to his refection he came into the room and put the shirt Ragini had laid out for him...

but wait a minute where was his Tie...

Ragini Ragini he called out...

he waited few minutes and called agian but poor Ragini was too busy with loud kids and whistling Pressure cooker

Poor guy sat on his bed in a huff

yeh Ragini bhi na... meri aadat kyun bigaad di...from last 7 years i was sometimes even irioning my own clothese now look..at new Me...

Biwi ka...

Papa you are not ready yet...

We would be late for school Tammy ran down once again making anmol get off the bed and open the cupboard to pull a Tie...

uff ..so many ,which one to choose ,

anmol stood in front of cupboard with his folded hands pressed on to his lips...

Kya hua ? kuch chahiye kya came a lyrical question...

he turned and found woman of his dreams leaning against doorway lazily...

she looked fresh,beautiful,well rested ...

he sighed and thought how does she manage...kids rush and uff this longing to hold her close...

Ragini came forward slowly

God he hated this and swallowed visibly ,his body stone still from tension ...

She came closer and asked seductively...

Main suljhaun aapki yeh uljhan ...she asked pointing towards the heap of ties ..both of them knowing 😉very well his uljhan had nothing to do with which tie to choose

He looked at the door and sighed loudly, Ragini laughed and bent to look at the ties and picked one ,when she straightened and turned to go to Him she almost bumped in anmol ,who had moved so close to her silently...

suddenly butterflies fluttered in her stomach and her legs turned into jelly ,she looked nervously at the door wo anmol...

Anmol wo koi a jayega aur wo tammy

she moved to go past anmol and suddenly a hand pulled at her waist and pulled her close,she could hear his heart beating ...she felt as if it was singing her name in a sweetest rythm of love ,she looked up and found anmol's intense eyes looking deeply into her own eyes .

Anmol wo her voise was a wisper almost stammering she added wo koi aa...and stopped mid sentence and saw anmol's face dipping down and gently touching her forhead ,suddenly she could bear no more and Pushed him ,he fell on bed and she turned to run away...when he held her arm,laughingly he added...tie to baandti jao...

She blushed and started to tie it gently around his neck while he kept looking at her indulgingly...

She was struggling so hard to work on the knot as she was standing so far ,anmol watched her for few minutes with amused expression then suddenly he pulled her closer by holding her waist ,she looked down and saw a challenge in his eyes,daring her to move away ;she was unable to meet hsi eye and concentrated on the tie...Finally it was done ,she set his collar and smoothered the invisible crease on his shirt unconciously ,this gesture touched anmol deep in his soul and he pulled her even closer and lifted her chin with his indexx fingre ,she looked at him with melting softness ...

Papaaa Anmol paaartner...

both of them jolted back into reality ..and rushed out...

i know friends its kinda lame...as my next update is going to be very serious one i thought of giving ua small glimpse into happy 7-8 weeks of Anmol and Ragini followed by that huge wedding...