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Posted: 14 years ago
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Humne Dekhi Hai In Ankho ki...
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3maaqI6_1Ts[/YOUTUBE]

He handed her the water bottle and she drank a few mouthfuls, spilling a good amount over her shirt. It was relaxing and cooled down her heated body up. She slumped against the cushions of his sofa and closed her eyes. She felt something in her hair and opened her eyes suddenly. It was him, stroking her hair. The tenderness in his eyes was scary and his touch was intoxicating. She looked away quietly as he drew back his hand and opened his mouth to say something but she beat him to it.

"Can you give me contact details of a good property dealer? I wish to dispose off my apartment and purchase a new one."

The abrupt change puzzled him nevertheless he nodded and left to get his diary. She hid her face in her palms, trying to frame a coherent line of thought. She knew she would be having a hard time, trying to express her feelings. And he, too, was a human being who required some kind of communication to understand and put things together. And as much as she tried, progressing from silently accepted attraction to a relationship was not something she really had strength for.

She had experienced pure joy with him. She had no words to explain the place he held in her life and the difference his presence made. All these years, he had been her savior. There was a phase in her life when her trust had been shattered. She knew love was not always strong enough to protect and comfort. More than often, it crumbled and gave up, leaving you alone. And now when she had realized that life was not a bed of roses, she would do anything to hold on to him.

Her expectations had been reduced to minimal after all the ordeals. And all she wanted was his company without any expectations. She could not bear to see them getting caught in the shackles of all the rules and society again.

Her logic defied all reason but she knew only one thing that if he failed her somehow, it would crush her beyond repair. Who would heal her up then?


Edited by ivre - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i HEARd the song for the first time. Is awesome. :) So is your story.. :D
Nice one.. this is the best till now.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rishtey
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BA3Bx3a7p5s[/YOUTUBE]

I unlocked the door and stepped into my house. I took off my heels, trying to be discreet. My husband must be tired from the day's work and would hate to disturbed. In the process, my hand brushed across my ankle and the slightly red mark there. It was where he had nipped me as I had attempted to leave. But it seemed it that I was too experienced in the matters of physical intimacy to feel my neck go warm and my eyes to lower.

I made myself of cup of coffee and let the scalding liquid burn my throat. There was perhaps no reason for me to cheat on my husband. And then perhaps I had no reason to be loyal to him. I wonder when I had crossed the boundaries of morality and stepped over the value system I was brought up in. I had never been able to share myself in whole with anybody. There were always omitted details, facades and lies involved. I felt I really never understood or knew what loyalty was.

I had assumed that things may improve with marriage. Perhaps the act of sharing my body with another person would let me speak my heart. So I opted for this convenient arranged marriage with a person who lived in the same society as I did. And now I know that it was not really helpful.

My husband was a regular man. He required everything a normal human would. He understood and complied by his duties faithfully and extremely well. I knew he made sincere efforts to even understand me. To some level, he succeeded in unraveling parts of me no one had seen before. But the effort drained him out I think. And it drained me out as well. Now we had reached a strange sense of agreement that confined us to our own territories.

But I am still unable to comprehend why I went out to have an extra marital affair. My boyfriend is in love with me. I have no idea what that means though. I don't know what he expects out of me. I did not go to him out of some emotional distress or need. It was just that he approached me once and I did not stop him. It was extremely inconsiderate of me, to put my husband's life on stake for something I never wished for. I hate this growing sense of masochism inside me, which is feeding on me and the people surrounding me.

I hear my husband groan in his sleep. I wonder if he too seeks out physical pleasure somewhere out there. I would not be surprised if he did. But I wonder why I felt upset about the thought though.

Edited by ivre - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sur:

This thread is really great, once again.

I really liked the Haji Ali piece. I was at the Taj Mahal and the Q'tab Minar three years ago and I remember that those places elicited similar feelings in me... there was something about it that made me feel connected to all those who had come there before me and stood amazed at the wonder of what humans are capable of...

Thank you for introducing me to Khamoshi and Waheeda Rahman. Now, I am really curious to see the movie...

As for Rishtey: Those are difficult emotions to write about and be faced with, and the first feeling I got after reading the piece is this terrible sense of discomfort... there are some emotional realities that exist, but it's hard to admit that it does... and it takes some strength to write about it.

Do continue Sur. You have good taste in music :)

-Devi
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Originally posted by: sridevi27

Sur:


This thread is really great, once again.

I really liked the Haji Ali piece. I was at the Taj Mahal and the Q'tab Minar three years ago and I remember that those places elicited similar feelings in me... there was something about it that made me feel connected to all those who had come there before me and stood amazed at the wonder of what humans are capable of...

Thank you for introducing me to Khamoshi and Waheeda Rahman. Now, I am really curious to see the movie...

As for Rishtey: Those are difficult emotions to write about and be faced with, and the first feeling I got after reading the piece is this terrible sense of discomfort... there are some emotional realities that exist, but it's hard to admit that it does... and it takes some strength to write about it.

Do continue Sur. You have good taste in music :)

-Devi

thankyou so much for the apprecaition Devi... Im really thankful for it.
Im glad that you liked the songs...Khamoshi is a must watch- strongly recommended. I havent watched it either but this song is one of my very favorites.
Rishtey was something I wanted to write as a long story but its way too complex... Im not even sure if it came out right.
Rishtey is from the movie life in a metro. Another rec. :)
thanks for the comment again
sur

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