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CookieMonster

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Posted: 15 years ago

#621

Very nice part
Love it
Mauhhhhhhh
I can't wait plz update

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seemamary

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Posted: 15 years ago

#622

Wow nicve update, plsssssssssssssss continue soon and add me in your PM List and PM the next update,plssssssssssssssssssssssss.

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#623

Originally posted by: seemamary
Wow nicve update, plsssssssssssssss continue soon and add me in your PM List and PM the next update,plssssssssssssssssssssssss.

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#624

Hey guys!!!
Thanx for your wonderful comments!! Loved each and everyone of them..everyone has a mixed feelings on what should Geet do the way Maan treated her and so I am...idk what to do lol....

Enjoy this update in the meanwhile lol

Chapter 14

Flashback:
Geet: Maan are you ready for the party? (Geet came out from the bathroom after getting dressed and saw Maan standing talking on the phone)

Maan (turns around and faces Geet....he puts the phone on hold): Geet one minute...I am talking to someone important on the phone

Geet (goes downstairs and waits for Maan to come...she waits for almost half and hour and still no sign of Maan...she wanted to go upstairs but stopped herself fearing his anger....she decided to wait again..after a while the phone rings...she picks it up...) hello

Meera: Hey where are you guys? We are all waiting

Geet: ohh umm sorry Meera...we will be there shortly (she sees Maan coming down the stairs) Ok I have to go..we are leaving soon..bye

Maan (comes up to Geet): Who was that?

Geet: woh umm Meera thi...she was asking where were we

Maan: ohh...so let's go...

Maan holds Geet by the waist and leads her to the car...Geet kept quiet throughout the whole ride..she was excited that after a long time she would be able to meet her dad and her friends...even if it is for the last time...she controlled her tears remembering what Maan had said to her last week...she looks down on her wrist with the bruise...she was glad that the bruise from the bangles was sort of faded and covered by her bangles...soon they reached her house...both got out of the car and walked inside the house...she was welcomed by her dad....she hugs her dad...

Ranjit: how are you beta?

Geet: I am good

Ranjit: Why were you two late? I was waiting for you guys

Maan: I had some work to finish up

Ranjit: Ohh umm come in...

Geet: Ramu Kaka kaha hai?

Ranjit: He is in the kitchen along with Meera
Geet: Ohh I will go meet both..I will be right back (she goes in the kitchen and hugs Ramu Kaka and than Meera)

Ramu Kaka: How are you beti?

Geet: I am good....what are you guys making? (excited)

Ramu Kaka: Meera is making a chocolate cake for your dad and I was making some dinner..she wanted to learn how to cook....

Meera: Yeah Geet you would die for this cake...

Geet: Since when did you want to learn cooking?

Meera (looks down): what you mean? I was always interested but never got the time....

Geet (looks at Meera suspiciously): Why do I have a feeling that you are hiding something?

Meera: Geet I am not....anyway so tell me how is your marriage life? You have completely forgotten us..you don't call or anything

Geet (remembers her moments with Maan): ohh umm its good...I have just been busy at home...sorry

Meera: Its ok....you don't have to get upset...

Geet: Ramu Kaka let me help as well....why don't you go and set up the table or something...I can make the rest

Ramu Kaka: but beti you came after a long time

Geet: This is my home as well na...so let me cook..now go (Ramu Kaka left and was only Meera and Geet talking and catching up...)

Meera (her phone rang): Hello...yeah ok...hold on (Geet looked at her all weird) umm Geet I will be right back

Geet: Who was that?

Meera: I will be back..sorry (Geet looked at Meera as she disappeared from the kitchen....she got busy with cooking...she didn't want to be in the same room as Maan...she didn't want anyone else to see especially her dad how he behaves...Maan and her dad were getting along slowly....knowing how both are very opinionated and stubborn...she didn't want to think about today and not seeing anyone or have them see pain in her eyes...)
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Maan and Ranjit were having a drink toghether...Maan kept looking toward the kitchen hoping to catch Geet..they saw Meera run out of the kitchen and out...Ramu Kaka was setting up the table...
Ranjit: Where is Geet Ramu Kaka?

Ramu Kaka: Ohh she is cooking in the kitchen...

Ranjit: What! she knows that she doesn't have to cook

Ramu Kaka: I tried talking to her but she wouldn't listen...she could be stubborn

Ranjit (shakes his head...to Maan): I hope she is not stubborn at home either....

Maan: of course not....

Ranjit (didn't like the tone of his voice): How is she doing there anyway? Meera told me that she doesn't go to college anymore...school was very important to her

Maan (looks at him with a straight face): Of course she would be happy...I get her whatever she wants...as for her college...after marriage comes a lot of responsibilites so I (stressing the word "I") decided that it would be better for her to stay home...

Ranjit: well it is her future...Geet should've decided what she wants to do

Maan (smirks): Well I am her husband...so I would know what is best for my wife papa

Ranjit (didn't like the sarcastic tone of Maan...he was certain that there is something that Geet is hiding): hmm excuse me I will be right back (he gets up and goes to the kitchen....he sees his Geet standing there cooking...he paid attention to her...he saw something different in Geet...she wasn't as bubbly as she used to be..she seemed to be dazed out....he went inside and placed a hand on her shoulder...Geet turned around and saw her dad

Geet (forced smiled): papa look I made your favorite food

Ranjit: Geet is there anything you are hiding from me?

Geet (was taken back by the question): umm no..what makes you say that?....papa (side hugs her): I am very happy...Maan is so nice and always buy me anything before I could even say it....he keeps me like a princess (almost chokes...she holds back her tears)

Ranjit (sigh reliefs): I am so glad to hear that....come lets go outside...Ramu Kaka will do the rest...(Geet tries to protests but she didn't want to make her dad sad and reluctantly goes outside...she sees Maan sitting outside looking at her..she lowers her eyes and goes to help set up the table...Ranjit couldn't say no...Maan watched as Geet set the table...Geet could feel Maan's eyes on her....she tried to compose herself at the best she could...Meera comes running in and goes straight to Geet...)
Geet: Where were you?

Meera: Rohit said his car broke down so I had to go pick him up....

Geet (was scared...she feared what would Maan do if Rohit comes and talks to her...she looks at Maan who was now talking to her dad): ohh (Rohit comes in)

Rohit: Happy birthday Uncle....this is for you (hands him the present...Maan looks at him...both quietly says hi to each other...Rohit sees Geet and Meera talking...) excuse me uncle I will go say hi to Geet.....

Ranjit: Sure beta (Geet saw Rohit coming toward her and with his each step the more she feared Maan as he looks at her with anger filled eyes...she knew that she didn't have a choice but to talk to Rohit or else everyone would be very suspicious)

Rohit (side hugs Geet): How are you?

Geet: I am good...hows everything with you?

Rohit: Well after completion I will start working with my dad and help him out with the company

Meera: yeah for once he is doing something useful...although I feel bad for the people who have to see his ugly face at work everyday (laughs...Geet smiles)

Rohit: Ohh yeah I feel bad for your future husband who has to see your monkey face everyday or wait worse than that being stuck with you forever (laughs..brings his hand up for Geet to high-five...she reluctantly high-fives him)..

Ramu Kaka calls everyone for dinner....Maan stands up and walks over to Geet...he stands next to her...Geet could feel the tension in his body...now she didn't want to go home and be with him alone...they both take a seat together along with everyone else....Rohit and Meera sat together joking with each other...Geet didn't look at Maan at all but she could tell that he is mad...she tries to ignore the tension and act as normal as possible....occasionally she would smile at Rohit and Meera or her father whenever they would talk to her...in a way she was glad that Maan didn't do anything in front of everyone...she places both hands on top of the table as Ramu Kaka serves everyone...Maan puts his hand on her waist...Geet looks at him....she grabs his hand and tries to remove it...he grabs her hand and squeezes it hard...she blocks out the pain...she pleads with her eyes for a no...throughout the whole dinner Maan didn't speak at all just noded whenever someone would ask him a question...the night gets closer to be over the more her fear increases...a the end of the dinner Ramu Kaka brings out a cake that Meera made he blows out the candles and cuts the cake....

Rohit: wait guys before you dig in....I have an important news to tell.....(everyone looks at him confused...he looks at Meera) Meera will you marry me? (everyone drops their spoons...Meera looks down blushes)

Ranjit: What? You guys always fight....when did this happen?

Rohit: Of course we always fight that's who we are..I don't know how but we both started liking each other and one thing led to another we knew we wanted to be together forever....(Geet looks at Meera who was happy..she felt jealous...) Well Meera I am waiting for your answer...

Meera: Haan...(everyone claps...Rohit feeds the first bite to Meera and vice versa...)

Maan: umm we should go now...I have to go to work tomorrow (Geet knew that this was it...)

Ranjit: So soon....(he gets up and hugs Geet...she goes and hugs everyone) Make sure you call....we will meet soon...

Maan (puts his arm around her): Alright bye....(They both walk out..Geet looks back at her friends and her dad waving goodbye to her...how ironic...)

End Flashback!
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Maan stood there with his back towards Geet....it felt as if time stood still...both didn't talk to move...Maan slowly turned around to look at Geet....
Maan: Geet I came here to talk to you

Geet: Just leave from here Mr. Khurana

Maan (holds her by the shoulders and pulls her towards him in a haste): Why are you doing this to me? Why can't you admit that you are my Geet...

Geet (pushes him off): Haan!!! I am Geet....but that Geet has been dead for four years!!!! Now it is Mahi Kapoor standing in front of you!!! (holds his collor) Is that what you wanted to hear? Maan looks at her with pain...he brings his hand up to touch her face but Geet shoves him off...) Don't you dare touch me...what are you here for now? You want to abuse me more? hold on let me make it easier for you (she comes back with a stick in her hand...she holds the stick in front of Maan) here! You can hit me...i won't complain just like other times.....here! (Maan moves back) What happened? You don't like the stick? ohuh wait I remember you loved slapping me....(she comes and stands in front of him...and using his hands she starts hitting herself...Maan shoves her away)

Maan: Enough Geet...please stop....

Geet: That's what I used to say to you...."Please Maan..stop..don't hit me..." did you ever listen to me? NO!!! You took everything away from me....my father, my friends, my laughter...everything....what was my fault? That I loved you? Or that I thought my love would change you...but I was so wrong Mr. Khurana....(she cries...) for FOUR years I had nightmare...FOUR YEARS! (she shouts) I watched the pain in my fathers eyes when he found out the truth....I watched him walk away from me when I was running away....I feared you...whenever you used to come near me I would think you were going to hit me again...what was my fault Maan?

Maan (has tears in his eyes...no longer able to control himself...): Please Geet I know I was wrong and I realized my mistake...please believe me I have changed...how do you want me to prove it to you? I will punish myself...tell me Geet..I will do anything (he gets on his knees and begs her)

Geet: Just leave (she turns around...still crying...Maan gets up and walks out...)

Maan (turns around and looks at Geet) I will prove it to you Geet that I have changed...I know there is nothing I can do to relieve you for the pain I gave you but I will prove that I have changed (he leaves....Geet drops on the ground crying...she looks up and sees Suraj standing there shocked...)

Geet: Suraj what are you doing here?

Suraj: Mahi or should I call you by Geet..

Precap: Sorry...will have to wait this time lol

Edited by mrs.msk - 15 years ago

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divareena

@divareena

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#625

I felt so sad to read the pain geet went through. I know that maan is very guilty over what he did to her but it will take a time for geet to trus him let alone forgive him.

Oh no suraj knows geet's truth now.

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Challiya Bitch !! ;) !!

@-BlushaLicious-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#626

lovely update

i fink it was maanz plan so dat suraj can hear da truth

update soon

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#627

awesome update

loved it loadz

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

muahhhhhhhhhhhhh

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#628

OH Dear :-( Im scared now too

If Suraj heard the beginning where Mahi said she was Geet, then he was bound to hear the entire conversation as well.

Hope he understands and sides with Geet

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#629

this was so good!! love the flashback...so happy for rohit and meera....hope maan has truly changed...and bam! Suraj knows she's geet....what a cliff hanger!