New Poem~~Khichdi ya Bharta?!~~

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi guys! Just decided to write a poem of sorts on this alternate track dilemma in RBO. Please its not a personal affront on the actors..not at all!! They are great and hard working! I just feel like a lot of us do that giving them something which is so disconnected from the main show/track is a gross injustice to their talents and abilities!😊
Please donot take this poem seriously..😊 just smile...
The alternate track dilemma!

Rahul's promise was

To inject life into RBO

And act as a 'Boost'

For a tired story score

As with many other soaps

Who meander off track

He was meant to bring hope

Prevent it from falling back

He came with much fan fare

Stole the thunder from Shanak's SR

Impressed us with his Kick shots

And broke several terracota pots

I was excited expecting

Some adrenalin infused fights

Between the 2 handsome hunks

Enough to make WWF gripe

Alas it was not to be.....................

Shaan got entrapped

By the dream of becoming a rockstar

And it did get fulfilled... but

The MMS scam didn't let it go far

Sam then decided that

It was time to bid adieu

To the serial and hence

Rahul looked for someone new

It wasn't tough for Jen

To distract our He man

She did it in record time

Preity watch out.., she's your man😆

Now we are confused maha

Shanak here, Rajen there

Smooth dish turning into

One Tasteless sorry fare...............😕

But.....

CVs don't you worry

Our memories are short

One Shanaklicious moment

And our brains are shot!!..😆😕

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PS: Please do comment😊

Love, Simi

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shanakyasharan thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiimmmmmmmmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
missed yr poems fr d longest time n wen they come they come at d right time:)
loved it its cool n so needed.....lol
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Dammmmmmmmnnn where is the "Love" button when you need it!!!🤓

😆.. Love it Simz!!! Love it!! 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Simi Di !! ...was wondering y u were not writing poems....
the last stanza is really true......one day we say d epi is bad and track has no scope.......they come up wid a Shanak scene.....and we forget everything! ...
Amazing as usual!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Muahhhhhhhhhh Simi ..........take a huge Bear Hug for this !!!

what everyone has been ranting since 4 months now is summed up in a sweet and cute "To The Heart" poetry !!!

Your poetry always had an audience in yashu and swj.........hope it reaches the CVs this time.........!!!!

Loved it totally !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Simiiiiii....
Wonderful....👏👏👏👏👏 Stupendous...
Such a lovely poem.... 👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiimmmmmmmmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
missed yr poems fr d longest time n wen they come they come at d right time:)
loved it its cool n so needed.....lol

Thank you dear!!! I missed writing them too!!LOL
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Sim Sim,
Finally!!
I am amongst the first to comment!!
Am more happy for myself than for you! 😆
Chalo jokes apart......tera poem lightened the mood, Sim Sim......was much needed after the heavy-duty halla bol underway! 😆
Keep them coming!!
They're much cherished! 😊
Love,
Dyo
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Veena-

Dammmmmmmmnnn where is the "Love" button when you need it!!!🤓

😆.. Love it Simz!!! Love it!! 👏

OMG!! Veenz!! You loved it!!!! That's more than enough....Thanks!!!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ammu_SunshYn

Simi Di !! ...was wondering y u were not writing poems....

the last stanza is really true......one day we say d epi is bad and track has no scope.......they come up wid a Shanak scene.....and we forget everything! ...
Amazing as usual!!

Sweetie exactly what I wanted to convey!!! Thanks!😊

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