New Poem~~Khichdi ya Bharta?!~~ - Page 4

loved loved loved the entire bengan bhata....

but special mention for the following lines

He came with much fan fare

Stole the thunder from Shanak's SR

Impressed us with his Kick shots

And broke several terracota pots

It wasn't tough for Jen

To distract our He man

She did it in record time

Preity watch out.., she's your man😆😆😆😆😆

tere talent aur creativity ka 10% bhi cvs ko udhar de de.......to hamara RBO sudhar jayega!

Convey's what most feel on this forum, but done in such a cute way!

Loved the last part! It's true that we go crazy at Shanaklicious moments, and i'm pretty sure the CV's hope it's enough for us to forget the 'kitchdi' they make out of the rest of the show! Lol.

wonderful & amazing poem....................

loved it..............

u r amazing.............actually i missed ur poems......................

nice one .............👍🏼

the way u describe characters through lines & thoughts is awesome......................

& the lines r just amazing...............................love u.....................❤️