An Ode to SAAVAN...... A collection of Poems!!!! - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is another poem for Geethu's wonderful AV..We all can vividly recall that Kul Devi mandir scene, where the whole Saavan family assembled..So here are my few lines, for that scene, from Saavan point of view..

A Treasured gift-Saavan Family
A cherished gift we have
Our family's love
A gift bestowed on us
From the Almighty above

Embraces our precious life
With open arms and warmth
We feel so honored and proud
Our family, our strength
You make me feel
Like I belong
A strange emotion
Once thought gone
Am always there for you
From now till eternity
You are safe and sound
In my Family's love and care
Our family's trust and belief
we'll always keep and uphold
Saavan family's love and affection
Is always to be treasured and cherished



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Splendid, Splendid, Splendid!!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Baat hamrai Pakki Hai
Saavan ka Pyaar ki ye ek kahani hai
Holi ka Gulaal aur Rang badalthi odani
Jaisa rang bhi rangi kahani yeh
Hum dono Ram milaye jodi hain
Mein Tere liye aur thum mere liye
Yeh rishta kya kehlata hai
Kahani ghar ghar ki hogi hai
Thumari Sapnon se bhare naina mujhe
Hamesha Zor ka jhatka detha hai
Hamara is Pavitra ristha mujhe
Bahut Maryada detha hai
Mere Ghar pe thum ek Choti bahu hai
Yeh Saas bina saruraal nahi hai
Is ghar mein Sasuraal genda phool hai
Yahan Hamari devrani pyaari hai
Hamara Kismat hai ki hum dono ki
Beech mein Kitani mohabbat hai
Doondh legi manzil hamein
Kya karna hai is dhuniya mein
Uttaran nahi hai mere paas
Par Pratigya liya meine zaroor
Dil se liya vachan ko
Zindhagi bhar nibhaunga mein
Gunahon ka devta nahi hai aap
Sab ki jodi wohi banaata Bhagyavidaata
Tere mere sapne ek hai Shravan ji
Hamara Pyaar mein twist khabi nahi
Choti si zindhagi hai hamara
Par usme Yeh pyaar na hoga kum
Bandhini hai yeh rista hamara
Rakt sambandh hoga baccha hamara
Baat hamari pakki hogai
Saath vachan se badkhar
Aathvan vachan nibha rahein hum
Saathiya hogai is zindhagi mein hum
Entertainment ke liye hum kuch bhi karegen
Indian idols bangaya hum dodno
Saavan ke Pyaar ka bandhan agni ki sakshi hai
Is kahani shuru with love guru(Ram ji)
Hamara Jodi kamaal ki hai
Hamara yeh Yatra hamesha chal sake
~~~~~~~~~~The end~~~~~~~
siggie courtesy Geethu and Niru.


Edited by maris08 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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love ur collections of poems!! esp. the one you wrote with the show names, very creative!!👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very Very Innovative, Maris!!! You are a real asset to this forum....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lost in your eyes
Seeing those eyes staring at me
Showing such tenderness and devotion
Longing to swim in the sea of emotions
Beauty that warms my heart;ignites my passion
Lost in your serene eyes binding us forever
Lost within your sparkling eyes dazzling me forever
Your hearts love invites to travel into your soul
To that Paradise of Love existing within us
Enveloped within our love and passion
Every single moment forever an eternity
Lost in your eyes, Lost within your eyes
Am blessed to see them everyday in my life


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Posted: 14 years ago
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another beautiful poem written by you!!👏
the poem matches the siggy so well!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Felt like I was on a magical ride, Maris!!!! Suuuuuuuuuuperb!!!!!

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