Through My eyes- Maaneet OS

In this I was just practicing forshadowing for a later story, so if this was an ff, it would probobly be the prologue.

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Her dark eyes gazed into mine. I couldn't look away, something kept my eyes locked onto hers. Her eyes seemed to change colour, they were never the same. Her pure white skin was too perfect, perfect as an untouched sheet of white snow. Her long eyelashes formed a dark shadow across her innocent face. I wanted to feel her soft pink lips against mine. She is so bold and bubbly at times, a non-stop chatter-box and sometimes she is completely silent, in her own world like a lost little girl. She wears a fake smile all the time but I can see the sorrow in her eyes longing for joy. When I first met her I thought she was a girl whose hobby was to get in trouble. A girl who couldn't fight for her rights. A girl who always gave in to her families wishes not matter what it was even if it was her own death. I was wrong. We used to bicker all the time, I thought she was ignorant but she was starting to have an influence on me. A day without her seemed incomplete. She was in my mind all the time, in my dreams, in my every word and in my every breath. I couldn't let her get to me; I swore I would never fall again. But I could never seem to get away from her. She was my drug, an addiction.

My eyes were locked intently in his hazel almond shaped eyes. They were intense, mysterious and puzzling. His eyes were like a labyrinth, unsolvable. Whenever I thought I solved the mystery a new one would just push me back to the start of the maze. A million secrets were held within them and I had to uncover them. I needed to uncover. It's all I wanted to do, find out about him, his past, and his life. I wanted to find out his thoughts, his dreams, his nightmares and his hopes. I was becoming insane. Insanely in love with him. I disliked him very much the first time we met; he was a spoiled rich brat who never smiled. He was inconsiderate about everyone's emotions. He just didn't care. He was arrogant and rude but that is what kept pulling me towards him. His ever words affected me. His complements would make me float in air and his insults would burn through my heart like acid. I didn't want to admit I was falling in love but the more I tried to distance myself from him the closer he came. If he took a step forward I would just take two steps back. However I am not going to stop myself now from getting closer.

Hope you like it, and sorry if it sounds amateur, this is my first attempt to write something like this.

well written i mst say

this is simply fabulous.........

i loved it completely.....

u shud def try writing some more...

u write brilliantly dear

reva