GOTW: The Story Chain

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Khottey Sikke,
Here's my new GOTW. Again, it'll require you to use your brain and think a lot. So enjoy.
In this game, we're all going to write a story. Exactly one story. We'll continue each other's story. Let's see how far we can get with the story.
Basics:
  • I'll start the game off with a few paragraphs and character sketches for a story. You get to write 5 - 7 sentences to continue the story. Each person adds their own thoughts to the story.
  • Every few pages I'll post a thread with the story up to now.
  • You can end with an open end, something like this: He said......" or you can end your part with a closed ending, something like this: He said to call the police.

Rules:

  • Please avoid using derogatory words or too much graphics.
  • You can only write between about 5 - 7 sentences. If you want to include dialogues, then only 5 to 7 dialogues please.
  • I'll provide a list of main characters, but you can add characters to your requirement.
  • You can write in English or Hindi, but only those two languages please.
Okay so let's enjoy.
Firstly, the characters:
  1. Obviously, the 5 Khottey Sikkey. 😆
  2. Another obvious, Deshmukh. 😛
  3. A final obvious, Patil. 😆
  4. Nira - the victim. She is a fashion designer by profession, but her family is very rich. She is murdered at a warehouse.
  5. Rakesh - the first suspect. He is also a fashion designer. The problem is that ever since Nira entered the fashion designing business, Rakesh has lost all his customers. He has threatened Nira many times.
  6. Sameer - the second suspect. He loved Nira, but Nira refused to marry him because she loved someone else. He was very angry when Nira refused to marry him, but then he pretended to make up to Nira.
  7. Rahul - the third suspect. Rahul was Nira's fiance. He was supposedly a rich man, but in fact, he was bankrupt because of his gambling problem. He only wanted to marry Nira for her money. Nira found out about this.
  8. Sakshi - the fourth and final suspect. The problem is that Sakshi is one of Uttara's best friends and Uttara cannot believe that her best friend is being suspected like this. Sakshi was Nira's best friend as well, but Uttara and Nira didn't know each other. However, for the past few weeks there had been a fight going on between the two and no one knew what the reason was.
Now the start of the story:
She yelled as the fire burnt her. When the fire finally died down, all was quiet, but it still felt like there was something yelling. Maybe it was the building yelling with her.
The next morning, Deshmukh and Patil were viewing the sight. Patil said, "Sir, accident ka case hai. Aag lag gayi aur yeh bechari ladki wahan pe thi aur bach nahi payi."
"Nahi Patil. Yeh dekho. Petrol. Yeh aag jaan buj ke lagi gayi thi iss ladki ko marne ke liye. Iss ladki ke baare mein kuch pata laga?"
"Haan sir. Yeh purse mila tha bhar. Shayad iss ladki ka hi tha. Iska naam Nira Kumar tha. Koi fashion designer thi."
"Acha thik hai. Tum khottey sikkon ko bulo. Yeh zaroor jante honge Nira ko. Aur iss warehouse ka malek kaun hai yeh bhi pata lagao."
Now you continue from here....

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Patil calls Ayush and asks him to reach to their adda along with other four.
Patil and Deshmukh discuss the case with Khote Sikkey. Deshmukh asks if any of the five know about Nira Kumar
Uttara says that she has seen her in her friend Sakshi's party, but does not know much about her whereabouts.
Deshmukh asks Uttara to know much about Nira through her friend and asks her not to reveal much as Sakshi herself is a suspect. Uttara is very upset that her best frind is suspected but takes the job.
Mohit says that he can handle Rahul as they both share same interests....

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