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rohini

@Rohini20

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Luved it...it was seriously one shot.😉..luved the straight-forward proposal by geet...WEN PPL COME OUT CLEAN N R STARIGHT-FORWARD..THT IS THE IMPACT....😳.CERTAIN THINGS IN LYF CANNOT BE DOMINATED BY MONEY OR EGO...IT IS TRUE LUV WHICH MATTERS....GUD ONE..THNKSS FOR THE PM...!!

rohini

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

That was sumthg totally different

Liked it

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

A wonderful one shot !! I always love your story line and your characterisation....even here, your Geet and Maan are so well defined...😃

I also loved it how you turned the tables...as many of the readers have already said...its always Maan who is the rich one lusting after Geet...here you have created an opposite scenario..

Does love really do this to people? Make them leave their own luxurious world to stay together ? !!

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Fabulous OS...........love it!!!

love maan's attitude nd geet openness.

love geet proposing way!!

the last piq is beautiful.......love it!!!

i fall for it more than the OS wen i saw it!!!

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JayaR

@JayaR

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

wow....that was a simple story beautifully put......

lovely.....

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

just one word....AWESOME...👏

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

it was a different maan from ur type of maan i mean to say that usually he lusts after woman and here its diff its geet and usually maan is the one offering geet to maary and here its geet.............well its true wat u said...........love the oneshot..............

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Awe loved the concept totally different from you ff's and awe geet fell in love with his modest and sincere behaviour where his self esteem matters and awe maan finally fell in love with geet and he became successful in the end and they both made their own world anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊