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Posted: 15 years ago
Abeeeeeeee

Guys I'm not writing this alone where's everybody who said they'd write. Where's Lina Linaaaaaaaaaaa
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part Aish! :)

Yes, veryy creepy how you can write about psychotic people so well! ;P

Linaaa has no life and no time to look at anything, because she is busy with stupid high school! You know, I really hate Grade 9! I swear! These teachers meet every week and make plans on how to torture us further. There's barely a week where I can relax, and say "Aaah! Life is good!"

But you know since I can make this part short I'll continue! :]


WARNING: The part that you are about to read might not make sense at all, and everyone WILL BE out of character but that's just because I wrote it when I was not in the right state of mind. Enjoy? :D

Saachi decided that it was now time to step back, and let Shravan do the rest. After all, he wasn't completely useless, right? And so she ran, and hid behind Shravan's tall and lean frame.

"Stop hiding behind him! Face me like a real woman!" Tara yelled from somewhere around Shravan.

"Now, now, Tara." Shravan tried to reason with her "Calm down. Saachi didn't do anything to me. It was all my fault that I fell in love..."

"Excuse me?" Saachi looked furious as she stepped from behind Shravan "Are you trying to imply that falling in love with me was a mistake? Well then, let's see how you enter the house today."

"I didn't mean that! It just came out that way, plus it's my house." Shravan pointed out nicely.

"Oooh! Cat fight!" Tara yelled unhelpfully from the sidelines, now switching to the role of the spectator "Meeeow!"

"It is NOT a cat fight!" Shravan yelled at her.

"Oh yeah? Then what is it?" Tara challenged.

"Um hello? We were fighting here, sort of?" Saachi flapped her hands uselessly in the air which is very hard to do while wearing stuff that weighs a ton. But still, she managed to do it without even looking stupid.

Tara and Shravan kindly ignored her, and continued with their own cat fight leaving her standing their.

Yeah. The End.
Lame? I know, right?

I seriously have no idea where that came from. When I read it over I was literally like, "What. The. Hell. Did I just write?"

I was going to delete the entire thing, but then I was like 'whatever'. Let's post this and see where this will take us. It's nice to take risks in these sort of things. Plus, I didn't exactly keep in touch with the story, so stuff just might be totally wrong. So sorry about them. Anyone wanna continue after my utterly lame attempt? No? Oh.

Edited by xxdevilishxx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok first time im writing so please if you find it lame just ignore.....
Shravan puts his hand on his head.He closes his eyes and collapses.Tara and Saanchi both scream together.... SHRAVAN and SHRAVAN JI
Then they both go to him bumping heads.Tara glares at Saanchi and screams "what are you doing here are you a doctor just move"
saanchi then runs out of the room and goes to the nurses station and informs the nurses as to what happened.Nurse 1 pages the doc and nurse 2 follows Saanchi back to the room.
Meanwhile Tarra is checking Shravans pulse and checking his eyes. The nurse and Saanchi arrive...the nurse sees Shravan lying on floor and runs out.She calls orderly and they both come back and then they pick Shravan up and put him on bed.The doc comes and the nurse closes the curtain.The doc asks Saanchi and Tara to both leave.Tara protests that she is also a doc.The doc says but Shravan is my patient so please let me do my job.They both leave.Tara and Saanchi are waiting outside.Saanchi is silently praying and Tara is just glaring at her...
In the room Shravan is saying thank God ( he was faking ) at least now I have some time to think what I must do...He saying think Shravan quickly warna,then doc comes in so he closes his eyes and lies still.The doc gives him a sedative injection and then checks his stitches.Shravan is thinking I dont want to hurt either one but Tara has to know that I love saanchi and then he doses off.
The doc comes out and both Tara and Saanchi go to him.He looks at both and says Mrs Jaiswal to which Saanchi replies Jee.Tara is pissed.He tells Saanchi about the injection and that Sravan needs rest and no stress.Saanchi ask when can he get discharge.Doc say if he improve in the next 48 hours then he can go. Saanchi thanks doc and then looks at Tara. She tells Tara that she needs to inform shravans family and Tara must please leave.Tara says no I will phone and you go im not leaving.Then saachi says crossly look Tara , his family dont know you ,they might think its a prank call and even if they do believe you and come here they will wonder what you doing here.They will look to Shravanji for answers and you heard what doc said...no stress so please if you care for Shravan please for once put him first and leave.
Tara is mad but she goes...she thinks ro herself this is not over.
ok thats it for now.Sorry no Hindi bcause its not my first or even second language...
Enjy ur wkend every1
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Posted: 15 years ago
wasn't completely useless, right?

lol lina, ur writing just is too funny, and u think freshman year is hard? try junior year.
im dieing.

aish go bye bye no more aish, she disenegrated!

anyway, great job lina, u finally hsowed up again, and peda. peda i loved the fainting! lol shravan WOULD, he's just that ridiculous! someone CONTINUE!!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
yes go ahead . lets unleash our creativity. probably someone from DJs will see this and get ideas👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok i will continue my first time writting a fan fic here it goes
Tara is about to leave but before she did she goes to Sachi and says listen Sachi Shravan is MINE!! got it and when he gets better hes going to be coming back to me he was just with you cause he was sorry for you i was a busy for a couple of days so he just spend some time with you to over his boredness after saying this Tara leaves. Sachi is left standing there she shakes her head Shravan loves me all the time me and him spended together that was a very special time. the song ek duje ke vaste played in the background sachi had tears in her eyes she wiped her tears and called her in-laws. The phone rang nidhi picked up hello hello Nidhi bhabhi sachi sShravan aid in a worried sound Hi Sachi how are you are you have fun hows Shravan thats why i called you Shravanjee is in the hospital Nidhi in a shocked tone WHY? WHAT HAPPNED?? Sachi explained what happned ok i will the rest here what happned ok take care of Shravan ok bhabhi bye Sachi hangs up. The doctor comes out sachi goes to him hows hes doing hes coming around hes lucky to have a wife like you who cares for him so much thank you said Sachi she sat down she hasnt eaten or even drank water she fell asleep she dreamt that
Shravan was was better and they were outside Shravan was coming toward her smiling Sachi was standing there and smiling too when Shravan came he walked past Sachi she tunrned around and she saw Tara Shravan went to her and hugged her Tara gave her a wicked smile Tara and Shravan left walking hand in hand Sachi woke up sacred maybe Tara is right she said to herself.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Anybody still wants to contine this ff 😊

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